Ghost

Great book, cheers to the author! Optimistic about you

I actually can't understand what you wrote.

This book really gave me the feeling of "watching a story" like I used to read Gu Long's novels, rather than the feeling of reading online articles. In fact, online articles are always inseparable from the word "upgrade". It is more about taking on the role of the protagonist himself and experiencing the feeling of growing up step by step from a weak one. In this regard, Mr. Jin Yong can be said to be the originator. Mr. Gu Long pays more attention to the expression of "events". This does not mean that he does not pay attention to the portrayal of characters. On the contrary, he uses less words to describe the character's inner monologue and more about his actions. He uses situations to allow readers to briefly enter the picture. He writes about people without writing about them. Instead, he writes about people deeply. Whether it is the blood-venged Fu Hongxue or the humble gentleman Li Xunhuan, they are far more deeply rooted in the hearts of the people than Zhang Wuji and Duan Yu. (Here, the popularity does not refer to the breadth of circulation, nor does it refer to the reprocessed film and television dramas, etc., Only the original novel. If you have read the comparison, you will understand what I mean) Although I personally prefer Mr. Gu Long's story, I do not mean to disparage Mr. Jin Yong. On the contrary, if I have to compare it with realistic values, compared to Jin Yong, Gu Long is more like a loser, because Jin Yong's novels are more widely circulated, better known, and more in line with the public's pleasure. The reason is actually very simple. In Jin Yong's novels, the existence of the male protagonist himself is downplayed, and the male protagonist becomes an "interface" for human readers, allowing readers to immerse themselves in and experience the world. Moreover, because of the identity of the son of the character's plane, he can have experiences that are not found in ordinary daily life. This is also the interest of mainstream online novels so far. Gu Long, on the other hand, is completely different. He uses a third-party God's perspective. Even if he can occasionally experience the emotions of the characters, it is only in certain freeze-frame scenes with thick pen and ink. But looking at the text, it is more about "things" between people. In addition to a few sentences explaining the background of some supporting roles, from the beginning to the end, no matter where they come from, no matter where they go in the future, it is a story between mature characters. The whole story is a story, telling people with stories. The reason why the story is read from a third-party perspective is because most of the characters appear mature and have distinct personalities, rather than starting from a vague clay sculpture for readers to experience a gradual adaptation process.

After reading chapter 50, I didn't want to read it. I felt that Pig's Knuckle was a waste. I knew it was a weird world, but I didn't work hard at all. I had no sense of crisis at all. I knew there was a system, but I never knew how to develop it. Although the author said that he didn't want to write about the system, but not wanting to write doesn't mean that he won't seize every opportunity to survive.

Answer Post: 1: Without golden fingers, the cultivation system is not comprehensive. There is actually a golden finger. Why not clarify the training system? Because it will destroy the weird and suspenseful atmosphere and turn it into a pure upgrade novel to fight monsters. Two: The pace is slow and the protagonist is confused. The pace is indeed slow because the author wants to show this weird and mysterious world to everyone in a more three-dimensional way. The protagonist is confused, and the author does not want to write a systematic novel. The author hopes that the protagonist will grow up after experiencing something, instead of being a ruthless person who defies heaven and earth. Moreover, the story of Novice Village is coming to an end, and the protagonist will embark on the path of spiritual practice and uncovering the truth of another world. Writing a book is not easy, so please support me!

This book has a training system. I hope the author can maintain this sense of weirdness and horror. Don't write it into a fantasy protagonist later. Facing evil is like chopping up melons and vegetables. By the way, I recommend this book about mysterious recovery It is also a supernatural genre. The character creation is very exaggerated, but the ghost writing is very good

To be honest, after reading more than 30 chapters, I still don't understand what the author is writing? Especially what role the protagonist plays in it is even more unclear. It gives me the feeling that you, the author, want to write a little bit of everything. As a result, I couldn't write anything well, and ended up writing something completely different. Just like the author yourself said, "There is a golden finger, but it is not. It is said that it is not, but it is actually there." If there is no golden finger, don't emphasize it. If there is a golden finger, use it immediately. If you don't move up or down, that would be disgusting I don't want to become a player who upgrades and fights monsters, the protagonist will do it every second. Then let's develop the protagonist's self-rescue ability, okay? Try your best to take action. Instead of waiting to be rescued, the entire plot will not advance at all. I recommend the author to take a good look at the writing style of "I Have a House of Horrors". Although there are cheats, the protagonist relies more on himself to advance the plot. The protagonist is not invincible, and the environment is also weird enough.

The beginning is good, but what follows is a world-destroying flood.

This is what new authors fear the most. They can't find anything interesting in the first few orders. After reading more than ten orders, they are still in a fog. They almost lose patience.

Well! After reading 40 chapters, I found it boring. Each chapter felt like just reading the table of contents. There was no climax, no main line, and it was just like a pool of stagnant water! In addition to deliberately creating a weird environment, it is too mystical and tastes the same. The beginning is really amazing, but the rest is full of mystery. What the protagonist's golden finger is and what its purpose is has not been explained for more than thirty chapters. In such a dangerous environment, the protagonist doesn't think about how to improve his strength. Instead, he tries every means to find out the disappearance of the miners, without thinking about his own abilities. It feels like the author is also trying his best to create various weird environments, but for readers, he only writes about depressing environments, and the protagonist bumps around like a headless fly. It's really boring to read too much!

What the hell is this? I just gave the monthly ticket and found out that the author has let himself go to engage in modern writing. Is it okay to change the map so brainlessly?

I don't understand why the protagonist is so curious about everything. He is a person who has almost died three times. Paperman Village, Ghost Bride, Black Shadow, each time fatal. Logically speaking, the protagonist's curiosity should be gone, and he probably doesn't know that he is the protagonist and will not die. Every time I see the protagonist, I am full of curiosity about something. Wow, it's such a deep hole. I want to go take a look. Wow, my body's instinct reminds me that I'm in danger. Hey, I refuse to accept it and I have to go take a look. Wow, what I saw is really uncomfortable. As a time traveler, the protagonist should have watched ghost movies and the like. He should know the common sense that curiosity will lead to death in a world full of ghosts. I know the author wanted to use this to advance the plot, but it was really terrible. I will take a look at the back. If this is still the case, I will not subscribe.

I took a look at the posts downstairs, and the mentions of golden fingers, coolness, decisive killing, etc. Were all too vulgar and childish. I hope the author will not be led astray. A truly good article can stand the test of time.

I have read about ten chapters. Although the writing is good, it is not suitable for readers who read cool articles. The whole plot, the protagonist is too weak, a puppet, passive, and makes people too anxious to watch. I wish I could just commit suicide or transform into a ghost. It is better than now. However, the author's writing is really good and the writing is very vivid. Sorry to bother you.

Write quickly, update quickly, there will be two updates a day, and the first order will be given when it is released.

Why is it suddenly written in modern times? Very abrupt. No sense of immersion 😅

Is the author female? No wonder it just feels very inky. The strengths of this book are the writing power and the story outline. The shortcoming is that it is very ink-stained and does not highlight the golden finger, the main line of the story, and the main line of the protagonist's practice. If something goes wrong once or twice, you will be lucky. Every time something goes wrong, it depends on people. There's no sense of excitement and immersion, so the cadence isn't too high, right?

The writing is really good. I read many chapters, but I still couldn't help but want to give up. The male protagonist's growth is too slow, and every time he escapes from death, he relies on the rescue of others, especially women. He rarely succeeds by relying on his own strength and calculation. In every crisis, if you don't plan ahead and act recklessly, you can only get out of it by luck, otherwise you will definitely die.

The writing is very good, but you didn't make the protagonist feel happy? It's okay if you keep it low. How many are these? The protagonist is an alien from another world who doesn't understand common sense... He doesn't know how to learn or ask questions, so he just practices swordsmanship and is passive in everything. It makes me feel like the protagonist is deaf and blind...

The early writing was very good, but after writing about becoming a deacon, I felt that something was missing. There was no training system for the protagonist, and I was a little confused. It's not as attractive as the previous one, so I'll write more words about the cultivation system.

The best thing about this book is the wonderful and weird world view. The weak point is the relatively programmed character creation.

It's very well written. Keep writing and I'll give you a monthly pass.

The writing is great, come on, keep it up until the mid-term at this level, and try some main storyline and sub-volume stories, it will become popular.

I am also an author. I have written two million-word books with an average subscription of 500 and a monthly income of about 2,000. To be honest, the level of your book is far higher than mine Come on, your monthly income is definitely far higher than mine. I feel inferior,,, Come on

Support the author, I am a huge fan of this author, and the book is also very good. All book lovers who come here should read it!

It feels so strange, why am I suddenly writing modern writing again?

Come on, keep writing!

Let me talk about the three poisonous points that have impressed me most so far. 1. I don't need to explain the setting of Tiandi Xuanhuang 2. The "place" Ling Kou said she came from looks like some kind of academy, but this is just my guess, so it remains to be determined. 3. What the hell is the training system of Emperor Lingsheng? 5. Suddenly being instilled with memories, and then saying that he must save xxx at all costs

The writing is very interesting, the author, come on

This article is well written. The author's grades are so poor. He must be a jungler 😃