Starting from Atavistic Evolution

Pig's feet have an online IQ, are brave and decisive, and can act before planning. A bit straight. Please update!

Alas, it's very uncomfortable to write about parents in the apocalypse, because I always feel that my parents are not suitable for the apocalypse. Then the protagonist has two weaknesses out of thin air, and the enemy has two ways to deal with you. If you form a team, it can easily become a burden. In addition, in the apocalypse, you can see the ugliness of human beings, and you don't know when the great image of your parents will collapse in your heart. In addition, if there are two female protagonists, the parents may also interfere with the protagonist's love. It would be easier not to write.

The first forty chapters of this book are great! But the following chapters are very bloody 🔪 The young master of some big family is a collateral line. This collateral young master can also monitor everyone's mobile phone data at any time 😤😤😤 And this young master has not only evolved elemental powers, but what's more, having elemental powers is not enough, he can also mentally enslave other people 🔪🔪🔪

It's a really good novel. I haven't written it this well for a long time. At least it looks like a protagonist. Nowadays, the protagonists of many novels are purely based on system plug-ins. They are a waste in themselves. They are far worse than before. The writing is good. The author is great, but it feels very dangerous to write like this 😢

When I saw the memory section, I was thinking, what is the purpose of cultivating immortality? Forget parents, forget children, no need to eat, no need to drink, no need to find a woman, just seek immortality. If you only seek immortality, it would be great to directly become a thinking stone. It is not much better than risking your human body. Why should you cultivate immortality as a human? To be honest, looking at these immortal cultivators, I feel like they are monsters in human skin. I think the most human-like cultivator is Xie Xiu, no matter what they do, eh? But at least I am loyal to my own desires. Look at these immortal cultivators who are born as human beings, but want to give up everything human. They have no feelings and desires, especially that fairy. I feel sick when I look at it The above is actually because I am too disgusted, so I said it, because I actually had an uncanny valley effect on the immortal cultivators, and I discovered that I subconsciously did not regard them as human beings.

Have you invested?

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The protagonist is pretty good as a creator, but the two female leads are burdened by too many scenes.

It doesn't look good, and it feels like there's nothing more to it than the main character not being a reborn person.

What is written here? All kinds of old tricks are written, and I'm convinced.

I can't stand the first chapter. Satellites were launched five hundred years ago, and novels can be read on mobile phones five hundred years later. This technological evolution is really awesome.

The two-sentence introduction, even the sentences are unclear, which shows the author's level.

The idea is pretty good, very good, but the plot is so rubbish. In the real countryside, if the son is admitted to the civil service, his parents will be very happy. In the end of the world, the protagonist has become a fairy, but the parents and villagers' sense of the protagonist has not changed at all.

At first, I thought the protagonist was a reborn person, but he was attacked by a trickster and stole the golden finger of the rise. Only then did I realize that the sidekick I thought was the protagonist 🤫 wasted my expression 🙄

The beginning was good, but it's a pity that I found another reason to bring a school beauty with me.

The character design of the protagonist is not good, and there are problems with his outlook on life. It's too fake to knock out his roommate at the beginning, and fuck his temperament. The key to temperament is to see other people's faces first, and how could a reborn person be careless? It is inevitable to make noise when walking. Didn't the reborn person realize it? Not long after death and rebirth, my heart was still tense. Apocalyptic evolution novels don't require you to be a Virgin or anything, but at least they're okay for your friends. They didn't even do anything to you, but you knocked them out with a backhand, snatched the opportunity, and caused him an extremely miserable end. What a fucking bullshit friend you are. I wouldn't be surprised if the Reborn killed the protagonist's entire family, that's what they deserve. Give up, give up, I can't stand it anymore.

I didn't see any plot in the first twenty chapters. They were all about the changes coming in the new era. They were too ink-blank. Two or three chapters were enough. Is it so good? ? ?

The author is not good at emotional dramas, so it's best not to write them

Why do so many people think that humans will lose dominance when animals get bigger? If there are no mutations, they will grow normally. I feel that the bigger they are, the easier it is to deal with, because they are not smart and cannot avoid ubiquitous satellites and surveillance. Even the high-concentration fog in the article, after all, this fog is not corrosive. Even if humans want to, they can develop anti-corrosion and fog-peeping monitoring systems. I have read a book that although alien beasts are also evolving, humans are also in an advantageous position relying on technology. Although there was a little turmoil in the early days, not to mention that they are all living creatures. It is impossible to say that nature will deliberately target humans. Humans are medium-sized compared to terrestrial creatures, and their numbers are huge. If humans can't survive the blue rain, how can bugs and ordinary animals survive? If you deliberately target it, you will feel speechless.

Why do you want to become an immortal? What's so good about becoming an immortal? Reiki, this thing is from the outside, from the world. How can it enter your body and form kidney stones and it becomes yours? I just don't understand. I don't think this thing is as reliable as it is. It's all refined bit by bit by myself. But what does aura, spiritual power, etc. Have to do with you? Does it belong to you once it enters your body? Moreover, these cultivators say that they have practiced hard, that is, they have worked hard to absorb spiritual energy into their bodies. What have they paid for? The time it took to absorb the spiritual energy? You still think about the God who gave birth to you and raised you, and you still say that you have your own way. What way is there! What you eat and drink is from the world, and the most you pay is your life, which is as moth-like to the world.

The world view the author wants to write is quite big, but unfortunately he can't control the pace. It looks a bit messy. The character of the protagonist is also a bit contradictory.

Good guy, you're no longer a human being, do all human beings make you lose face like this?😰😰

It must have been written by a woman at this time. The protagonist is no longer a human being in the end, and is androgynous🤫🤫

Are the reborn people in the last days so stupid and weak that they were followed by an ordinary person and knocked down with a brick?

I want to know if the country will be disintegrated just after the end of the world? Even the protagonist can survive. Isn't the country's ability to withstand stress stronger than the protagonist's? Did millions of elite talents awaken their genes without any discovery under the unification of the country? Also, the protagonist underestimates scientists. Science is a cognitive system and technology is just an extension of science and can be changed according to needs. Speaking of oxidation reactions, it also takes time to accumulate. When technology fails, countries have already found alternative products.

In the beginning, everyone was better than the main player.

One day I will kill all the broken dogs in the world with a knife in my hand 😎

There are so many professional terms, they look so powerful, but I just can't understand them.

I feel that the author's style is like that of the original seekers, which is quite good.

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