Living in the Film and Television World

After reading dozens of chapters, I can only say that it is as bland as water, as if Pig's Knuckle is just a bystander. Although I am involved, it feels like it is just a key point to pretend to be 13 and then go to other things. Alas, I can only hope that the author will write better and better! But retreated for now!

There is no passion in this book. If you go to any human world, you will feel that one more is not more, and one less is not enough 🙂🙂

The book has no plot, the writing is crude, and there are many flaws. The appearance of the characters in the plot is not clearly described, and it lacks a sense of substitution. He must have spent a lot of money to rank high.

，， A modern person, an ordinary person in a materialistic world, will have the ultimate pursuit of martial arts if he comes into contact with things like martial arts and internal strength. If he wants to be a hero in the world, to be immortal, or to be more than ten thousand people, he will have the ultimate pursuit of martial arts. However, the protagonist's achievements are too low, and it cannot be said that he looks down on the ancients. However, scientific thinking is really a very high-level thing in ancient times. It is a very powerful tool for comparison, analysis, and research to trace the essence. The protagonist is positioned as a graduate student, and what he actually does is about the level of a primary school student. There is basically no problem after watching TV series. I think a person who is pure, pursuing, and cheating should achieve greater achievements. Maybe the author will find it cliché. After thinking about the introduction, I realized that each context has its own splendor, probably because each world is dominated by its own story, but your version is actually not as exciting as the original work. You should have your own splendor.

😴Just a running account

I was speechless at the beginning. At that time, there was still wind and snow, and you said that there were steamed buns in the ruined temple! The start is too weak.

Generally speaking, it's still OK.

Thank you to the author for letting me revisit classic movies and TV shows. It's just that having an extra protagonist is a bit annoying

After reading a lot of comments, they basically complained that the plot of the original work was repeated too much. Author, don't you say something?

How should I put it, it is just an ordinary fanfic. After reading the first world to Huashan Swordsmanship, I felt that the author protected the characters and plot of the original work a little too much. After all, the protagonist has a body of 4.5 Tons, and he is not even qualified to watch the sword fight in Huashan. He was afraid of dying from adc damage in battle, but the iron palm on the mountain could easily deal with it. You are facing Huang Yaoshi in the front. The martial arts passed down have a more peculiar understanding. The writing is all right. After you researched it and gave it to Huang Yaoshi, and then Huang Yaoshi improved and updated it, it would be strange that the Five Ultimates still go back and forth in the Huashan competition. It's not that I look down on ancient knowledge, but that I have now studied deeper in terms of elegant things. To develop to a very powerful level is common sense acquired through basic education. It should not be difficult for the protagonist to do something. Even the knowledge that he accidentally saw in this Internet age can be of great use. For more advanced ones, such as space science, advanced mathematics, architectural psychology, etc., You can say that the protagonist does not know it, but just by the collision of his current thinking and previous knowledge, the protagonist can be regarded as a generation of wizards. Modern scientific thinking is a tool rather than a denial. Whether comparing multiple experiments. Or summarize and summarize. The protagonist has done everything, but if you do anything in-depth, it will be interrupted due to plot reasons. There are hundreds of classics and there are many creators of martial arts. Even in a few of Jin Lao's books, third-rate characters can develop a skill. It's not a real story, it's just that the author can come up with a lot of things by just using his imagination. Add more of your own writing instead of going all the way. Original plot. It's not like the author couldn't write it down. Jiuhua Yulu Pills can be simplified into wine. The tide of the blue sea is singing, whether it is infrasound waves or various sound waves. Boxing, palm, sword and sword techniques can resonate. Achieve plasma cutting indestructible.

I don't know whether it's because the will of the world is too strong or because the protagonist has no sense of existence. Just copy the original text and add the name of the protagonist to make a new book.

The writing style is okay, which is considered good in the wireless writing field. In terms of plot, it's average! The only bright spot is Xilaile World. But, this world is meaningless. The main plot of the wireless novel is for the protagonist to become stronger, and Xilaile World obviously cannot provide this. If you said yes at the beginning, it would be good to let the protagonist study medicine, or dress up as Telford. Xi Xishi, the protagonist's liking is too abrupt. In the last world, Mu Nianci and Huang Rong let it go. This time... Personally, I don't like to read these articles about the Qing Dynasty and the fight against the Eight-Power Allied Forces. Because I think this period of history in the late Qing Dynasty is a shame and a pain for the nation. It should be remembered instead of obscenely. If you read too many novels about attacking foreigners, the memory of being beaten if you hate being behind will fade away. Clearly I support the rebellion, but not in the late Qing Dynasty. Overall, it's okay. To put it bluntly, The Condor is a terrible writer. No matter how you write it, it will only be so brilliant.

On the cross slope, next to Jingyanggang. A bowl of poisonous wine, you can drink it and hurt yourself. Sorrow, love and hatred, evil spirits and monsters. The road ahead is unclear, just a dream.

I am also a fool until I see the end of Zhengyangmen. I'm really fed up with all this. You know what's going to happen, but you just watch and do nothing. The more I read, the more upset I get. The pictures in the novel are thrilling and heart-warming. The more you write, the more nonsense you become. It makes me upset. Give up, give up

I always follow the plot, and the part about accepting Yang Kang as his apprentice is really poisonous, what is the purpose of accepting him, and what is the use? What I don't understand the most is that the protagonist, a modern person who traveled through time and is familiar with the plot, actually treats Yang Kang to be almost like the original, a scumbag. How is it done? Also, the protagonist has created his own martial arts, inherited it from Huang Laoxie, and learned the Nine Yin Scriptures, and yet he still has a tie with Hong Qi. Is he just a loser?

Is the male protagonist here to poop? The plot is the same with or without him.

Forget it, the plot is as slow as a snail. After all, the author's writing skills are very good. The force value is getting lower and lower as I write, and I am also drunk. It is obvious that the mental power is accumulated in each world, and it should be getting stronger. After writing, it feels like the protagonist is reincarnated to suffer. The more miserable he becomes.

It's nothing but very poisonous.

The biggest shortcoming of this book is that there is not much difference between having a protagonist and not having a protagonist. It is like following the protagonist through various movies and TV series, or a running account of the experience.

If he doesn't have the writing skills, he insists on starting with a shooting of the Condor, and even chooses to be a nanny. It's like there is a pile of delicacies in front of the dining table, and the author has to run to the toilet to get a plate💩

It's very ordinary. With such a high level of martial arts, the results are so frustrating. That Qiu Qianzhang didn't kill him many times, and he had to look at such a thing. It's disgusting. Pure water plot, is it impossible to write without the plot? I have to follow the plot. The teacher's wife did not die, Huang Yaoshi's temperament did not change drastically, and the senior brothers and sisters did not end badly like the original. The plot will return to the original plot later. In this case, I can just watch The Condor Shooting.

The writing is messy. Shouldn't it be written as a cool article that spreads across the world? What it writes is that it copies scenes from TV series.

Every paragraph is frustrating. You can either be cruel or be a saint. The memories are all with you, and your brain has not made any progress. I am speechless.

Watching the protagonist travel to the present, this chapter of the Song Dynasty, I am really speechless. Oh, plus the Ming Dynasty period, it is very frustrating to watch. It is basically a restoration of historical TV dramas, and the writing is basically just water articles. Especially in the chapter of the Song Dynasty, the protagonist is tortured to death by a few mere women. He is indecisive. He has experienced seven or eight lives in the past, and there is no trace of it at all. The idea is that I don't care about my family at all. As long as I live a good life, everything else doesn't matter. I feel neurotic. You, the author, are really not suitable for writing this novel. You don't have your own content. I am not the author. If this is a limited exemption, I don't want to read it. Please stop writing about this dynasty. Can you write about cultivating immortals and practicing martial arts? It's a mess, now written.

It's well written, and it would be more consistent with the original work if there wasn't a main character! 🙂

Just follow the plot and don't change it at all. This kind of time-travel novel is the most rubbish.

Book title "I am a nanny in the world of film and television"

It's a very good book. Why doesn't the author update it? Is the author lying down?

I haven't watched the original TV series. You can watch it if you have watched the original TV series. There is no need to read this book, because this book is the original plot of the TV series. The writing is quite straightforward. The writing is above the ruled line. But the main character is just superfluous. At the critical moment, it will squeak twice, and that's it. 😡

Two years ago, I would have said that this book was a complete mess.