Becoming a Big Shot in the Age of Spiritual Qi Revival

When I saw the Japanese naming techniques, I immediately became indifferent. On the one hand, I hate the little Japanese variant culture. On the other hand, it is too low and has no real style.

Haha, your grades are so bad, with more than 150 chapters, 28 fans, and 10 posts. You are the worst. Who did you offend? I started reading novels in 10 years, and no one is worse than you at this time. I can only say 66666

Having written so many chapters in one copy, I am speechless.

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I haven't read Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, but I saw a novel written by a fan of Naruto: How about the back-and-forth between Breath of Thunder, Breath of the Sun and the Pirate General? In this book, I can't compare to Xiao Li's flying knives. 😂 Isn't Xiao Li's flying knives similar to Ninja Kunai? It's most accurate.

Don't write too many fan stories easily. The combat effectiveness will collapse. One Piece and Naruto are all badly written...

Your results are too bad. . . .

Just a few random comments, First of all I have watched Demon Slayer: Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba. The protagonist instantly cut off a rock the size of a rockery when he was introduced to the Breathing Technique. When Wang Chongyang and Lin Chaoying competed, they couldn't even carve words on the stone tablet with their hands. Don't say I'm a good fighter, because one used a weapon and the other didn't. How to compare. You must know that this is the introduction to the breathing method. There is no explosive attack power. There is no problem with the perfect breathing method against an innate person. Secondly The author's world view unfolds too quickly. It doesn't matter whether your setting of the nine realms is good or not, as long as you can justify it and make it logically coherent, you will be fine. But you started it too fast, and I didn't even see the subscription. Your entire world view has come out, and there is no sense of expectation or mystery. The leaders of each faction, such as Qinglong Suzaku Xuanwu, etc., Have made the key combat power too low. There is not even an innate talent in the three lists, ugh! Wouldn't it be better for you to let go of the world view little by little? In the early stage of spiritual recovery, you should first mutate some plants and animals, and occasionally let some cult minions come out to wreak havoc. After humans can establish a safe zone to resist the mutation of animals and plants, then the Ancient God Cult will come out with a big boss to do something, and slowly expand the world view. Finally Wearing a vest, this kind of external avatar wearing a vest is quite exciting when you think about it, but your plot setting does not feel like this at all. I thought about it because I don't have the confidence. Although the protagonist can still be summoned after the avatar is dead, the persona he plays is completely broken, which will cause the entire Kunlun sect to collapse. Therefore, the settings can be changed. After the system is upgraded, the temporary martial arts can be used not only once, but for ten minutes, and the total time can be used separately. How about getting a character exchange card or something like that, which lasts for ten minutes and has the combat power of a certain character. PS: Ye Gucheng, Yan Shisan, Ling Donglai, Chuanying. The price can be set a little higher, so that the protagonist has a trump card but cannot use it unscrupulously, and has the confidence to fight or even kill with high-end combat power when it is time to take action. You can even have a point washing function. The total points of each incarnation are in several advanced martial arts books, which can maintain basic high-end combat power. You can't just use experience cards or temporary martial arts to find trouble. This is also the basis for the protagonist to become stronger. The above is purely personal and is for reference only. Personally, I prefer the spiritual energy recovery flow. When I came across this book, I said a few words. I hope the author doesn't mind. I wish the author will write better and better!

Author, you are just too procrastinating, and the writing of the first three chapters is not good. Even I, a bookworm of ten years, felt a little strange after reading the first three chapters, especially the first chapter, although the subsequent writing was okay.

By the way, I think the book is pretty good, but why do the book review sections say it has poor results? ?