65 Million Years of Immortality

It's very tiring to watch me being arrogant all the time... I don't know when to be serious and when to be arrogant. A genius born out of hundreds of millions of people is called "Rejoice"? You even made a sneak attack and won with just a wave of your hand? Is that it? And it involves the struggle between the avenues and the layout of the human world. Is the great sage Bartie being provoked into a duel? Outrageous. Actually, I wanted to say that the Jade Disc of Creation was turned into a system before, but the quality of the book is indeed good. I just found it boring after reading it, just a joke. The realm is not grand, the fighting is not grand, the immortals don't look like immortals, and the monsters don't look like monsters. He is not ruthless enough when he should be ruthless, and he is not ruthless enough when he should be ruthless. Nothing happens in this world, just protect this world of hammers. The tense atmosphere cannot be exaggerated at all. Even Baiwen, which has become popular in recent years, can still make people cry while still being funny. I suggest you study it again. The writing is quite fluent, but I couldn't see you Wang Zha starting the game, and in the end only Zhang San was left in his hand.

Although I haven't read it yet, I still want to ask the author whether he can control the thought of living for 65 million years? After all, I have read a lot of immortality stories, and the thing that disgusts me the most is that those who have lived for so long are almost like dogs. Even dogs who have lived for so long are much better than the protagonists I read. In my opinion, people become better with age, and knowledge will definitely improve as they live. No one can surpass it. After all, I have lived for so long and my own strength must be at the top of the world. I read that some novels are written about people who are as aggrieved as they are. They are obviously so strong, and the most important thought is, after living for so long, what haven't you seen? What haven't you encountered? For example, people's hearts are unpredictable, but for people who have lived for such a long time, they can know what the other person is thinking without having to guess. Also, some characters are written like a middle school boy with a hot-blooded attitude. That time, an author told me that this was the heart of an innocent child. The heart doesn't understand anything. To be honest, I have seen those old people, even if they are only a few decades old, their hearts are already different. Some of them can even see through everything, not to mention those who have lived for so long. At least some of them are calm, have everything under control, and have an indifferent attitude that they don't care about anything.

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Seeing this picture, I had an idea In a certain incident, the demon kings and demon sages set up an ambush. In order to lure Su Xianyu into the ambush, they killed Mu Xiaoxi and set up elephant projection screens around them (which can be understood as a live broadcast simultaneously with the outside world (or not the outside world)). The main purpose was to kill the highest combat power in the world and frustrate people's hearts. Su Xianyu decisively came to save Mu Xiaoxi, only to find that this barrier was developed using Mu Xiaoxi's xxx (I leave it to the author to think, I can't think of it, I think it should be something like essence and blood, which makes Su Xianyu unable to break the formation). Mu Xiaoxi was dead... The sword fell to the ground. Su Xianyu knelt down in front of Mu Xiaoxi, unable to accept this reality, and calling her bitterly. None of these scenes make people outside feel sad, but what is even more sad is that Su Xianyu is about to die there, and everyone is silent "Stand up!" This is the voice of everyone (I think it is okay to change it to someone shouting here) Old man Donghua has turned his head away, raising his head slightly (this is crying) One paragraph may be added or not) Su Xianyu was still kneeling on the ground, and the Demon King and Demon Saint had already surrounded him... Just when everyone thought it was over He laughed... (You can add a little exaggeration, like laughing like crazy) 'As long as... Just stop them... You won't leave! ' He stood up... (This is a fighting scene, write it down to pave the way for what follows) Until the last demon king fell, people outside could not believe that he could really fight one against a hundred (this quantifier depends on how many you wrote before) "Come out quickly." He did not reply, still standing on the spot, the sword in his hand tilted slightly, as if he was waiting for someone. "Huh?" Old Man Donghua was confused. Shouldn't he take her out of the small world to find a cure now? Why is he still standing there? Wait... Man, soul, soul Soul! "Su Xianyu, that's the eighth-grade spiritual master!" Buzz~ The surrounding spiritual energy vibrated at a slight amplitude "Coming!" (Old man Donghua and Su Xianyu at the same time) If the author can adopt it, he will make it up himself 🐷 In the end, Mu Xiaoxi was rescued

There are also fans who are outrageous in their comments. Their names are long and smelly. They are obviously written in the city and have become a flood.

These gods and goddesses are a bit watery. The protagonist's heyday was just a matter of breath. I can't tell what the protagonist's condition is. They are useless gods. Super low-end version.

The description is average, the protagonist doesn't look like someone who has lived for 65 million years

After being reminded, I discovered that the book review area is indeed too quiet. Please feel free to speak your mind here, good or bad.

It looks good, but it would be even better without the heroine (personal opinion)

Someone in the book review section asked: The protagonist has lived for tens of millions of years, why is he still hanging out in a middle school? In fact, it is not difficult to understand that Su Xianyu has lived for 65 million years and has tried almost all human occupations. He has been a powerful minister and has great power over the world. He also became the richest man, and his wealth rivaled that of the country. He had been a poet, but the emperor couldn't get on the boat (not Li Bai). He had been a knight, hiding his edge in wine. He worked as a teacher and a farmer. He even served as emperor several times. In modern times, he has successfully cultivated his mind, his mentality is not sluggish, and he wants to experience middle school life, that's all.