The Fire Shadow in the Eyes of Reincarnation

This book should be developed as a mindless and enjoyable novel, but the result is a bit different. It is mindless enough, but not exciting enough. At the beginning, chasing and being hunted is just like a joke. In the chaotic world of cannibalism, you still want to go whoring... All in all, you can still read it without using your brain.

Self-pleasure flow. He dared to expose his reincarnation eye. Madara is not dead yet, Black Jue will allow you to ruin the good thing of saving your mother? Not to mention external factors, what about the internal factors? The eyes of the Sage of Six Paths affect the Hokage's dominance. Can you survive? Mangekyo will die if he licks Shisui, let alone you. The family has the samsara eye and wants to rebel. This is the instruction of the ancestor Sage of Six Paths. Uchiha will definitely think so when he rises.

I've read less than twenty chapters, so I'll summarize. The writing is a bit poor, the plot is a bit stretched, and the combat power is vague. Golden Finger feels high-end, but the various restrictions are really stretched. The protagonist still needs to clean up three generations, clean up Obito, very good, clean up this, clean up that, you must be the saint of the ninja world. The previous description is very good, it seems that it will take off directly in the middle and late stages, but it is like you draw a pie and want to eat this pie, first eat the shit in front of the pie, and you don't know whether this pie is delicious or not. It's true, I pulled my crotch and left.

The most annoying thing about cheating articles is that it is obviously cheating, but there are so many restrictions that it is the same as not cheating.

Refer to Your Brother: The World of Naruto Through the Eyes of Reincarnation, that is the ceiling of Naruto fan fiction

This is worse than the Tenseigan book. At least I can barely read the first 100 chapters of that book...

Well, I've already started with the Samsara Eye, so I don't need any other random abilities. .

It's not even a novice, it's very messy.

Author, are you worried about how to improve the word count? Do you think the post is too big and there is nothing to write about? First of all, I didn't read it. Looking at other people's comments, it was that the Samsara Eye started with the Samsara Eye and then suppressed the combat power. It would be difficult to write without suppressing it. I think I can provide you with some ideas. First of all, having the Samsara Eye does not mean that it can be used immediately. You must be familiar with and skilled in developing it, right? Path-level ninjutsu (can water or not) The problem with enemies is that there are many enemies at the Six Paths level, especially the Otsutsuki family, who can also travel through time and space. As long as you give the Otsutsuki family a little IQ, pig's feet will never be able to beat them. The wild monsters in the theater version, monsters, monsters, etc., Let them return to their full body, and still have enlightenment, complete realization, is it not enough for you? There are also some minor bosses in the plot. If you strengthen them and reasonably deduce the power they gain after the success of their conspiracy, it will be enough to write about. The reason is that in a world with pig's feet, the impact will be a butterfly effect. It's okay to let the shell be born early. If you go small, pig's feet will keep falling in love with and kill these bosses, if you go big, Wu occupies the kingdom of fuck, demons and demons occupy the kingdom of ghosts, Shen Nong occupies the sky, Xiao occupies the kingdom of rain, and Shell occupies the kingdom of frost. Add some other bosses, and there will be a ten-nation struggle for hegemony.

Brothers, ask for the title of the protagonist in the ninja world in the future. Use whatever is appropriate

To be honest, the characters in it are written in a childish way, and the personality feels like a joke, and the heroine Ye Cang is not attractive at all. But let's keep going

The first chapter is really awesome. A magatama scumbag like you can learn the forbidden arts of the Uchiha clan. It's amazing.

To be honest, just send a pair of Samsara Eyes to the system, and then the system can directly gg. A pair of Samsara Eyes is already the best in Naruto, and other settings are a bit redundant.

It's okay. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I feel like I don't have a sense of immersion. The experience of reading Naruto fan fiction and having other power systems interfere with it is really bad. Someone recommended me to start with Naruto as the mastermind. After reading it, the protagonist used all the skills of the lol hero. I wanted to hack the author to death. It's very poisonous. If the author writes about Naruto in the next book, don't mess with other power systems. The various attribute changes of Naruto can be combined into a bunch of blood successor limits, and the blood successors are eliminated. You can make up a lot of them randomly, and give the protagonist unlimited chakra. Like Hashirama's wood escape technique, other attributes are also It can be done, like making a native and earth dragon for earth attributes, and making a water man, water dragon, and molten shield for water attributes. It's not too much to make a lava giant. There is no need to introduce other power systems. There is no sense of substitution when you look at it. If the new author is not good at writing, it is recommended not to have a female protagonist. She slipped away.

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First-class name Writing on the second floor Third-rate setting

Come on! Strive for 10 updates a day

It doesn't look good, so I'll persuade you to quit at the beginning. Without Hashirama cells, can I still use Izanagi with ordinary Sharingan? It's Shan Magatama, author, have you watched Naruto?

Mr. Death, what do you think of 10 a day? 😏

What kind of reincarnation eye are you giving? Too much ability

It's nothing, it's messy and poisonous, and it's funny because of all the restrictions on word count. A fight will kill someone in sea water.

It's a joke that Danzo still wants to get the Wood Release. He made a mistake at the beginning. Hashirama's Wood Release is definitely not the Blood Successor boundary, so it must be the Blood Succession elimination. The Blood Succession elimination is a combination of three attributes. Yang Release, which represents the physical body, is also added. Yamato probably lacks this.

Next Door's Tenseiken is about 3 million words complete! I don't know if it can be compared to you now.

This writing describes. . It's so embarrassing to watch. I couldn't stand it until chapter ten. . My tooth aches while watching this. . Not much else to say.

Can't understand? It's too confusing to play both sides. If it's all about yourself, just go alone and don't get involved with others. It's very confusing.

Isn't the Four Purple Flame Formation Konoha's barrier technique? Why is Kirigakure using it? ? ?

Why do I feel like the protagonist has been living on the battlefield?

I went and found a circle of new Naruto fans. This one is a little better. It is all supported by my peers. The author should practice more and wait for the new book.

Ye Cang is not the heroine? Damn, beautiful back, hehe

What's the point of adding a reincarnation eye? He is already invincible if he cheats, but does it make any difference if he has the Samsara Eye? You might as well say it was caused by the reincarnation eye.