Surviving Through Dreams in a Natural-Disaster Apocalypse

How should I put it, the subject matter and ideas are actually very good, but the portrayal of the characters is a bit fragmented. First of all, in fact, when writing a novel, if most of us have names, I personally think that characters like "Jing Ma" should also be represented by her name, otherwise the tool-person attributes will be too obvious and the sense of substitution will be reduced. Then the heroine's personality is also very fragmented. At first I thought she was a little virgin and silly, but I didn't expect that after meeting that Thai guy, she turned into a crazy character. Crazy characters are very popular, but don't mess around. Wasn't the heroine just a female college student before? As for the heroine's IQ... I was unsure about whether she could survive at first, but the heroine doesn't really want to become stronger and will spend energy in many non-essential places. Of course, the rate of energy acquisition in the author's writing confuses me. It seems that it is too easy to obtain, so there is no problem in spending it this way. But the subsequent friendship with Gong and the conversation with Han made me feel that the heroine's good ability was in vain. Then I feel that the description of Jing's parents is very unrealistic. The apocalypse has been very obvious, but the parents still have a light and airy feeling, and the so-called concern is not tender at all... It feels like they are only responsible for promoting the plot, letting the heroine go out and introducing family relationships. It is true that novels need characters to promote the plot, but they are promoted specifically for the purpose of promotion... I'm sorry... Then I will give the trial reading experience to those who are ready to read it as follows: Highlights: The subject matter is good (the author said the subject matter is niche, but it is not... Like the popular female channel Doomsday Paradise and a dream-reality switch I watched before that was also on the ranking list), the heroine has interesting abilities and the writing is smooth. (Actually, if you haven't read many novels about other characters, you will also find their abilities interesting. Mainly because I have read too many novels about abilities like Mystery and Reincarnation, so there is no sense of surprise.) Personally, I think the poisonous point is: the separation of characters, and the heroine switches back and forth between silly, sweet, salty fish and crazy p. Of course, if she has a double personality, I didn't mention it. The characterization of the characters, including the heroine, is very average, and the progression of the plot is actually a bit messy. In fact, in the early novels, it is important to let the readers know the main plot instead of telling the branch plots one after another. This will make the novel messy and slow.

I would like to ask the author, I have read Chapter 16, has the heroine never seen a man before? I didn't find any problem with the first man I met and he gave me a certain amount of help, not to mention that the heroine also had a certain purpose. When I saw the second man I met in Chapter 15, the man named Han really didn't understand. The man named Han was obviously defeated, not just because he wanted to make up for it, but because he looked good. Healing the other person's injuries without saying a word, but also helping the other person, he took the initiative to get close to the other person so that the other person could control him. I'm confused. If it's really so good, why don't you cooperate with the country? I guarantee that everything that appears in front of you will be pleasing to the eye.

Dad, I ask weakly, do you still have manuscripts saved?

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Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! I support you, but don't give up.

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I am very active in waiting for more every day, please improve.

The author's various characters are set up very well. It's great.

I really like it. It's great.

It's quite beautiful, but the number of words is too few. Save it.