Unlimited Cards of the Apocalypse

So far it looks pretty good, the subject matter is acceptable and the plot is reasonable, but the setting is a bit vague and confusing at times.

The card comes and goes freely, and she is still a black woman, threatening the male protagonist at will, and the male protagonist has to call the seventh sister. Author, do you have a tendency to worry? I really don't have a sense of immersion. I'm leaving.

I vomited and couldn't stand it anymore. The main character is so trash. I don't understand why the author would write such a character. Totally unnecessary. It's toxic and has no sense of substitution. I suggest the author go to Zhihu and learn from the number one writing class on Zhihu.

The protagonist of the licking dog has everything in the end, and the licking dog leads to nothing in the end. Not recommended

I guess you must be a eunuch, and it is a taboo in Internet literature to bite back the host.

Already in the signing process, you can invest with confidence. Newbie, new book. I hope all readers will support you and leave suggestions. 😊 Xiaoyu will be grateful.

Clown Loli

Emm, don't you feel a little frustrated? I know that most people's mentality is like that of the protagonist, but I don't think it's necessary. I'm not complaining, but I just want to put some restrictions on it. I feel that Shura Girl is a bit arrogant There are no hard requirements, and I haven't finished reading yet, so I just want to say it, hey, slip away.

The beast tide has arrived in the city and they are still arranging for people to retreat. Are you an undercover agent arranged by the monster? Or are you planning to divert the attention of the beast tide? After leaving the camp, I was chased by a tide of beasts. If there are not enough people to eat the monsters, I will definitely die. I feel that the author has no common sense.

The protagonist is a waste, a tool being used by others. He thinks he is awesome but is actually a waste.

Male protagonist

The book has been signed, and the daily update is at least 4,000. You are welcome to try it. If you can leave suggestions by the way, Xiaoyu will be grateful😃😃😃

The writing is good, the summoning cards and the doomsday flow are quite interesting, and will be more exciting later.

From this introduction, I feel that the protagonist is right. It means the same thing as Shura Girl. If you want to survive in the apocalypse, don't you have to become stronger? Doesn't it mean that you will die if you destroy it? As for drawing the sword? It's terrible to be uneducated.

After reading the first few chapters, I feel good! Come on Duck! First vote for recommendations, then follow up, and then give rewards. Come on, Lao Qi!

Is the author too Buddhist? Haha, I think it's a good book, it should have better results. I think the author's writing style is pretty good, and every description is realistic. And when it comes to cards, I can actually think of many animations from my childhood. Cardcaptor Sakura is the childhood memory of a generation. I feel that such a theme is quite good. The fly in the ointment is that the layout is still a bit dense and could be reworked. To be honest, the plot was a bit confusing at the beginning. I thought the male protagonist was going to duel with a card monster, haha. Looking at it feels like a dream. The follow-up will be much better, come on⊙▽⊙

Rubbish novel, the protagonist licks the dog and is disgusting

Seventh Sister

I read Chapter 9. The first two chapters were revised by someone. The writing style is very different from the third chapter. The author asked me to listen to how to break up sentences in books. Don't write long sentences. Use short sentences. Each paragraph should not exceed three lines. This is how great novels are written.

On this day when the invested babies get a daily return of 3,000 yuan on their investment, I! Xiaoyu! If nothing else, it will be on the shelves tomorrow 😭😭😭 After seventy-two days and nearly 300,000 words, I wrote this nondescript acceptance speech with an extremely rough mood... The road of writing is boring, and the silent company of readers is the biggest motivation to move forward. There is also a vote of encouragement and support from friends... Xiaoyu is a complete newcomer, and I know that there are still many shortcomings in the article I write. Your opinions are very important to me, and I am also grateful to every reader who makes suggestions. I can't write that much, I just hope you guys can continue to support me after it's released... Thank you! ! ! (｡ì _í｡)🥀

It's very weak, and it blinded Sequence 1 in vain. . . .

Wow, can you not write the system and use the dog card in your hand to collect other cards?

Is it about to end? It's progressing so fast?

Should I say it or not, the Shura female card is really a poisonous point. This will probably dissuade many bookworms.

It's so confusingly written, it's a garbage novel, the appraisal is complete

As soon as I saw the introduction, I immediately asked him to quit. The card says to its owner: Get stronger or die. How perverted do you have to be to like being abused

I just watched it, and I would like to ask if the system only has the protagonist?

Why do I feel like there are so many abusers at the starting point now?

Although I don't know why it has not been popular, it is really a good work, without any poisonous points, and the depiction is delicate.

Author: Who is your editor?