The Son of a Family in the World of Cultivation

1. The title of the book is quite satisfactory, but it makes the main idea clear, and it doesn't count as a dissuasion. It's okay. The introduction is a little confusing. For some reason, the beginning of this introduction reminds me of a son-in-law article? The excitement of contrast and counterattack is a little bit obvious, but it seems that this section is too complicated. In fact, it is better to be simple and clear, as long as the highlights and selling points are highlighted. At first glance, it looks a bit messy. Maybe it's a layout problem? 2. The male protagonist's name is probably the biggest dissuading point in this article. When I first saw this name, I felt it was very Japanese in style, and it was easy to think of the anime character Yoshikage Kira. Critical readers may exit after seeing the character bar. 3. I'm not very good at judging the three golden chapters. It started relatively slowly and the upgrade stream gradually spread, but the writing is still online and the narration is okay. You might as well give it a try. 4. The male protagonist has an online IQ and is relatively rational. It can be seen that the author is also shaping the character well. Come on ٩(๑^o^๑)۶

The main character's name is terrible! Anyway, when I saw the name, I had no desire to read it!

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Quite interesting! Collected! Take your time and watch! Come on! Keep updating steadily! Welcome to visit us again!

Well written, keep up the good work.

The first two chapters were okay, but after going on business I forgot my thoughts at home. All I can say is: Good guy! You are a good person!

Nice writing! Collection, come on! Half autumn moon

The writing is okay, but the question is wrong. Do you have any cultivation? It's obviously a martial arts system. It's a bit like the martial arts version of Dream of Red Mansions. Return to the Jia Mansion. This is a martial arts palace fighting style. It's a bit interesting.

It's not the kind of nonsensical novel. It's worth reading if you're working the night shift!

I'm late, sorry, 😁

When I read Chapter 22, the previous chapter was fine and I just saw this. Wishing you a great fire. Bye-Bye

What is it written about? For a moment, the Holy Mother will be dark.

There are too many characters described and the protagonist is not highlighted.

Ordinary people can't live without their families?

The words are too dense, you can divide them into more paragraphs so that you don't get dizzy when reading them.

What you wrote makes no sense at all.

This is a poisonous book without core competitiveness. Rebirth poison. I didn't know the back of the novel "Pujie", so I just read Chapter 7

Starting from Chapter 23, has someone changed the writing? ? ?