Playing Feng Yuxiu from the Start

Some friends asked, "Is the character really that powerful? He even cracked the floor!" First of all, in martial arts movies and novels, breaking a boulder with internal force isn't an exaggeration, is it? Secondly, this is a novel, and the characters serve the plot, so their strength will definitely be increased to some extent. It won't be completely arranged according to the movie characters.

Kill these fake masters, they've insulted Chinese martial arts!

Here's a suggestion: if you're writing a modern story, either don't portray the government as too weak, or don't include things like massacring entire villages or towns. Massacring villages or towns might not be a big deal in ancient times, but since your setting is modern, don't write it like that. Do you really think the government is so weak that it has to give way to a sect that might be a cult? What you're writing is just too much.

The massacre of the village seems to have spiraled out of control; things are getting increasingly chaotic, and it's becoming more and more unbearable to watch. 😐

Judging from Master Ma's recent actions, they're almost exactly as the author described: a group of people hyping each other up, defaming Chinese martial arts, and making money by stepping on traditional martial arts. Master Ma also accompanied his son to England to earn tuition fees for him. I don't know how he managed to earn the exorbitant tuition fees at British universities; no matter how much money foreigners gave him, he didn't care about his ancestors.

I've only read the first twenty chapters. The beginning was about how ancient martial arts were seen as fraudulent by the public. But when several sects came out to capture Feng Yuxiu, it turned out that they all knew each other online. Also, when Feng Yuxiu was escaping, he happened to encounter some thugs who wanted to rape him. That part felt too abrupt and would have been better left out, especially since it involved a well-known ancient martial arts sect in the area!

Traditional Chinese martial arts aren't actually weak; it's just that nobody's willing to endure the hardship and train in them anymore. A skill, regardless of its status in the world, takes a long time to develop the oldest form. Simplifying it distorts the technique. Chinese martial arts are the most typical example.

I forced myself to read twenty chapters, and now I have to pay a dollar to comment. Let me talk about the plot. Martial artists are known for their fiery tempers. Even if there weren't any fake masters, those foreigners would have been easily defeated by the true practitioners of ancient martial arts. Besides, the country cares more about its image.

The character Feng Yuxiu is better left unwritten if he doesn't commit murder.

... Why are there formations appearing? They're different from the martial arts I remember.