Mages of the Roman Republic

The author's writing style is very good, and the writing is smooth and easy to read. It's just baffling to watch. The protagonist is a time traveler, so it doesn't look like it, and it doesn't look like an aborigine either. How do you recognize the letters and numbers on the gold finger? No one else knows him, but he is the only one who knows him? If he is aboriginal, his education level is not mentioned. He is still a young man and does not look like he has traveled all over the country. This behavior is very strange. There is also a series of complicated currency names, giving names to gold coins, silver coins, and copper coins, and then dividing them into sizes. It's just a name, and it's often used. Without explanation, a few readers can calculate how much it costs? I don't know the general overview of the world. What month is this and what month is that? It's quite complicated and I can't remember it. Don't be mysterious, don't talk about the three golden chapters, at least don't make people feel confused.

What an amazing resurrection from the dead! Are you a chosen one of the King of the Dead?

I don't know what to say. I've read several chapters and I don't have any worldview at all. Moreover, I don't know what the water purification and air purification thing is used for.

A warm welcome to the ancient castle! Cheers to the ancient castle!

The author is writing high again. Didn't you learn the lesson from the last book where there were too many enemies to write about? 😅 Every time, the opponent is written so strong that the protagonist will die once he loses, but he can come back 100 times if he wins once. How can readers be interested in reading this kind of desperate struggle?

With first-rate background, second-rate writing and third-rate plot, this book is indeed very attractive at the beginning, but there are also many problems. 1. It is not exciting enough, the author writes a little too "realistic" style, but he does not know that reality is more absurd than fiction, Napoleon He became a brigadier general at the age of 23, the commander of the front army at the age of 26, the first consul at the age of 29, and was crowned emperor at the age of 33. His promotion path is legendary. If you just look at the first half of Napoleon's biography, it is comparable to the leading actor in a historical novel. Even though the protagonist is a semi-native native, the story can actually be written very excitingly. 2. The background setting is too vague, making it tiring to read, and too discouraging to newcomers; 3. The author's writing style is suggested to be clearer, as it is a bit too obscure now. The author himself may be enjoying himself, but the readers are not entertained at all. What a waste of this setting.

Tried Poison, an inexplicable novel. The way the protagonist talks seems to be from time travel, but it's not from time travel. It's not good to read, and I'm not optimistic about the future of this book.

As an online novel, it is slightly unqualified and difficult to attract more readers. Visual eunuch limited.

The biggest problem with Castle is that it never writes the climax, it never writes the fun part, it always lays the groundwork. When the plot develops to its peak, it should be an explosion. The result is that it is over with a 🎈 bang. Then there are too many typos. The second biggest problem is that people often get their names wrong. The protagonist is okay, but the names of the supporting characters are often mixed up. It is best to change this problem.

Daily Drug Guide is well-deserved, and the eunuch's book was also recommended to me. It's true NB

When I read Chapter 6, I was confused and inexplicable. .

It's inexplicable. There is no introduction to the current background first, and then the combination of prosperity and the outbreak of Crusu. On the one hand, it introduces the prosperous and civilized Rome, and on the other hand, it is an environment where people can die at any time. The author simply cannot control this extreme environment. The pig's trotters' character is not distinctive enough. The author wants to highlight the pig's trotters' shrewdness and decisiveness. The result can only be seen as showing shameless contempt for relying on his mother's legacy. I worked hard to activate the belt, but in the end I didn't even know what the belt was, and I didn't have a long-term plan. The most fake thing is the passage in it, where the uncle was hiding the belt thing, but the belt flashed with various square letters every day (in a society where people are so poor that they don't even have clothes, do you think this belt will be considered a magic weapon?), And the uncle was still looking at it, and even said that he was hiding it from his nephew. They are all weird people who think they are smart and the others are fools. My uncle has been to level 3 warriors, and his father has probably been there too, so two level 3 warriors will get a place to spend money to study as a priest? However, the level 3 warriors are not worth cashing out, and a level 1 warrior with pig's feet can still get purified water worth two gold coins. Pig's feet have learned mathematics (in the article, Roman counting is calculated by hand gestures), so reselling them is no longer a good idea. If you are literate and don't take advantage of it, you want to write about things that don't take your brain. The beast has strength without using brains. See if he succeeds. Don't people just have brains?

I have no idea what to write! !

Although my investment failed and I lost 500 coins, I still want to say "good cut"!

The old castle still has the same problem, it's too depressing and not enough fun. How to attract new readers? Orgasms that cannot be fully released will only become deeper depression in the end.

Let me remind you that the author's last book was a eunuch.

Is this the ancient castle of the talented young writer who abused his master and found it difficult to live in Shanghai? Single push!

When I saw that eating can level up, I knew it was you. Look, ancient castle.

Is it the Luo who can sail on dry land and loves to eat barbecue?