Longevity Wine Master

I will simply write down my thoughts after reading it, and I hope everyone can share and discuss it more. Evaluation: Food and above (as of Chapter 175) PS: Traditional Chinese is used because I am an overseas reader. Friends who are not used to it, please switch to simplified Chinese and read again. Let's talk about the advantages first 1: Coherence and clear cause and effect Although the plot is only 400,000 words so far, the author has really managed this aspect very well. Whatever the protagonist does intentionally or casually in the previous plot will often have an impact on subsequent chapters. Example: In Chapter 7, he unintentionally helped Bai Hoo to untie the slave mark and eat the master to escape. In Chapter 63, when the protagonist was in danger, he came to the rescue and gave the protagonist a way to manage the passage to Dust Mountain. Not only this part, book lovers should also find that other plot lines have been handled in such a delicate manner by the author. Many novels like to talk about the hidden karma, but in the end, the number of words is still too low. In fact, it is not reflected on the protagonist at all, and it seems that the author and the characters in the book are just talking. Two: The protagonist's personality is moderate in his dealings, so far For example: In Chapter 100, the protagonist faced provocation from other families, and after showing his strength, he did not go further to kill the whole family or make it impossible for the other party to survive. Only taking away the part that belongs to him and cutting off the legs of the family leader will still not cause him to become disabled. It seems that the protagonist is sensible and sensible in everything he does. Unlike some novels with heavy murderous nature, the childish thinking of insisting on killing everyone is based on the idea that a few fires can start a prairie fire. After being around for so long in reality, everyone knows the right way to behave. I really appreciate the author's management of the protagonist's character, which is really comfortable to watch. Let me mention another part that may be more problematic: It should be used as the "wine" throughout the whole text, but its presence has become less and less recently. There are too many themes in Bad Street, and we always want to try new themes. Therefore, I think a considerable number of people, like me, started to try this book because of the main theme of "Wine Brewing and Cultivating Immortality". In the early stage, there was indeed a lengthy description of how to live in the winery, materials, and winemaking. However, as the plot progresses, not only the "brewing" part becomes less, but also the participation of "wine" itself. It is often written about the recent wine, what effect the protagonist drank, and that's it. If so, if "wine" is replaced by tea, juice, soda or even candy, will it be a new book? The problem now is that the cohesion between the content and the theme is too low, making "wine" seem unimportant and easy to replace. As a novel theme "Wine Brewing and Cultivation of Immortality", what I personally would like to see more is how to handle various materials, methods of peeling and pressing fruits, and even arranging plots to invent/discover "distillation" technology that has not yet appeared in the book. In addition, there are more further developments that have been mentioned, such as changes in the years of cellaring, the impact of cellars and barrels, etc.; Although each winery produces the same kind of wine, due to differences in raw materials and technology, the quality of the wine varies greatly. Not only reality, many novels also emphasize the influence of the quality of the same kind of spiritual fruit. However, in this book, it seems that once the wine is brewed, the quality of each winery is actually unified. This is really strange. Let me follow the book friend's saying that "audience students". As wine serves as a literary talent, the protagonist's kung fu and magic weapons may also be considered to be integrated, or more application methods can be made to make the plot more complete and rich. The protagonist's major is the inheritance of Yi Zhi School, which covers moon power, paper cutting, seal script, and divination. These are all fine and great. But obviously apart from the fact that there is a kind of wine to help the protagonist draw the power of the moon into the body, the wine has nothing to do with the protagonist's major in martial arts. The same goes for the main weapon, which currently seems to be an axe. It would probably be more interesting if it were a wine jar and wine utensils. Of course, it is also possible that the author has arranged more plot outlines in the future, which will overturn the above shortcomings, but everyone is just too impatient. However, we obviously don't feel that much recently. It is a part that will deduct points from the whole book, which is a pity. But I am still very optimistic about this book. The author's writing is great and the plot arrangement is also very good. I will continue to subscribe and reward as much as I can. I hope the author and this book will get better and better. I also hope that everyone can comment rationally after reading it. If you have any questions about my book review, you are welcome to make suggestions. Thank you for reading it.

It has been fully booked. A total of six monthly tickets have been issued this month, all of which are devoted to this book. The writing is very good, relaxed and eloquent. I hope the author will continue to play smoothly. The author's writing is relatively restrained, and the storyline and characters' actions are all logical and reasonable, and the plot is rounded. The most valuable thing is that the setting of social composition abandons the common problems of most online books on cultivation and immortality, giving people a sense of social evolution that will actually happen, instead of extreme and irresponsible transplantation of the dark side of society and random imagination like other similar themes. I felt very comfortable after reading it in one breath. I followed the perspective of the protagonist and had a magnificent adventure. I felt that the "lie" weaved by the author as a novel author felt very little stagnant when reading it. When writing about tracing history, it felt desolate and tragic. When writing about small things, it was vivid, concrete and meticulous, which made people feel that it was natural and extremely comfortable. ——As an aside, most authors at the starting point did not have such basic skills. Most of them did not study Chinese carefully when they were children. There are also many people who have basic skills who are too lazy to think about it. They think that working hard in this area will only help to improve their grades. Corresponding to such authors, a large number of readers have not yet reached the elementary school level of appreciation. It is really sad... From my experience in reading online novels, it is not uncommon for authors to write good stories, but the author's ability to sort out thousands of threads without any confusion is rare. It can be said that when the author was writing, he was quite like Ding Xing in the book who prefers to prepare things in advance and wait until everything is needed. He is not hasty or impatient, or puts the logic in order. It can also be said that the protagonist in the book inherited the author's calm and unhurried demeanor. It should be that the outline is well written and a lot of effort has been put into this aspect. Best wishes!

A very recommendable work. The protagonist is a villager in a winery affiliated with a cultivating sect. He accidentally picked up a bug that could help him make wine and embarked on a rapid path to cultivating immortality. He inherited a unique tradition, but also had to face greater responsibilities. The highlights of this work are very prominent: First, the construction of the world view and the background construction of the story stage are very careful and unique. The timeline of the story begins with the ancient war in outer space. When the protagonist examines many relics related to his own orthodoxy, it feels like it spans infinite years and the vicissitudes of life. Few works can give me this feeling. In addition, the depiction of the geographical environment also reflects the different customs of the Demon Realm, Ice Valley, Southern Border, Desert, and even multiple immortal realms. It is quite different from many fairy tales in which the local customs and customs remain the same no matter how you change the map. Second, the plot is exquisite and amazing. First of all, the plot of the story is very coherent, with various foreshadowings and leads that naturally lead the protagonist to adventure and practice around the world, without any sense of abruptness or stiffness. Secondly, the plot is well detailed and the fast pace is handled very skillfully, making the reading experience very good. The most important thing is that some common plot routines of cultivating immortals (competition for elixirs, sect competitions, auctions, adventures in secret realms of mortals who plot against each other and end up dead, competition and suppression of big families, etc.) Are nowhere to be seen here. The main plots in the novel (such as going deep behind enemy lines to collect artifacts, brewing fairy wine to release slave marks, learning seal script and paper-cutting, paper door decals and moonlight, collecting and cultivating four kinds of little demons, and controlling nine Rubik's cube-shaped palaces on the glacier) all gave me a refreshing and unheard of feeling. This "freshness" is what I find most unique and fascinating about this novel. Fairy tales are just as weird and wonderful as they should be! I often read some novels in which the driving force of the plot is simply "becoming stronger", that is, in order to slap someone in the face or break through the realm, the protagonist has to collect various resources and experience various risks. Even more crudely, reasons such as system requirements are used to drive the plot. But in this novel, the main impetus for the protagonist's actions comes from the natural guidance of the plot. It's not that the protagonist "has to do", but "has to do it, wants to do it". This makes the story feel less "online" and more like a traditional novel. Third, the characters are vividly created and have their own characteristics. The protagonist is decent in everything he does, has a strong will and a mature mind, making him a rare and outstanding character. And among the various supporting characters, none of them make people think that they are "stupid and smart". They all have their own personalities, demands, and wills. Some people search for enemies from thousands of miles away, and are bold and decisive; some people are sensitive and have deep affection; some people repay kindness and value principles; some people are slippery and sophisticated, sophisticated; some people have a sudden enlightenment and manifest their Buddha's heart; some people are fierce and vicious, and have an evil spirit. With this kind of depiction, even some villains seem quite worthy of readers' love. The supporting characters are freed from the shackles of instrumentality and thus shine in their own right. Of course, this book is not without its shortcomings. The first is that the author started to speed up suddenly in the middle and late stages due to poor grades. The introduction of the big world view and the introduction of new plots was a bit impulsive and blunt, which made people feel a bit baffled. Fortunately, the pace has slowed down recently, maybe because my mood has calmed down again. The second is that the writing method of the story is relatively traditional, which leads to the lack of excitement that Internet readers usually expect. The climax of the novel always makes me feel that it is not climax, pleasure and venting enough. Perhaps we can refer to Jin Yong's approach on this point. The same emphasis is placed on plot-driven story writing, but the climaxes written by Jin Yong (such as Xiao Feng's battle at Xianzhuang, the six sects' siege of Guangmingding, etc.) Are obviously more soul-stirring and make people want to stop. The third is that the plot of the story is relatively complicated, but the author rarely provides further explanations, emphasis, and comments, making it more difficult to read. (Especially since this book is also related to the author's previous book, some settings are very confusing to new readers. This is a bit speechless. I hope it can be reduced as much as possible). Finally, some people said they were attracted to wine making, but were disappointed to find that the focus of the story was not wine. Maybe this is also a problem. Writing is not easy, writing good works is even more difficult, and writing good works with certain pursuits is even more difficult. Although this book may be relatively niche due to the reading threshold, it is indeed a very good, unique and highly recommended work. If the author can find a way to sell his excellent writing skills and creativity in a more accessible and simple way in the future, the results should be even better. I wish the author can write better and better and become more and more popular.

The memory of "Green Ape without Flowers" is particularly deep, and the chapter "A Fire Orange" is getting better and better! Good books are hard to come by, support!

It is a pity to come here to express condolences for this work.

Brewing is too simple to write about. The protagonist has not spent much effort on it. It is better to be more complicated. For example, even if you know the raw materials, material proportions, brewing techniques and time, you have to explore it. Simply restoring a wine is a bit false. There are also too few golden finger bugs, and their abilities have not been fully explored. I can write about whether it can be upgraded and how to optimize the brewing efficiency.

It's okay, but not that exciting... A very realistic farming story. Very well written. 🙂

Everyone still needs to read the original version, especially for authors who are not popular, otherwise they won't be able to read it.

The alcoholic bug that the protagonist relies on to make a fortune appears less and less. Is it because the author is silently laying out the plot or the author has gone astray in writing the story line and went to spiritual paper practice?

I regret so much, why did I open this book so early😢

It's passed down from Qing Yuan. Qing Yuan is quite interesting. I originally wanted to finish the book before reading it, but I didn't expect that the sommelier was turned into a eunuch by me. Alas~

It's about to end. People who have followed the author's two books will share their thoughts. There is no doubt that the writing is good 👍. I feel it is a pity that the author and the book are not popular. Looking at this situation from the perspective of a reader myself: 1. It is not a popular writing method. It does not capture the preferences of the largest novice group in the starting point, but it is not a completely niche writing method. 2. If you don't promote, you won't insist on recommending monthly tickets. It's not uncommon for a book to be good or not popular. Nowadays, everything in the big data network is digitized. If you try to improve every data of a book, you will be on the way to slowly 🔥. 3. The author will occasionally say some discouraging words. Although it is your true situation and true emotion, you are the author of this book. You are the one who decides how this book will turn out. If you have difficulties, you have to hold it back. You have to let people support you so that your readers can see that you are positive and that you are working hard. You can talk about your suffering after you succeed, or you can complain about it after you give up. But if you don't give up, you have to hold it in your heart. I like reading your books very much and hope to see you keep writing.

I didn't see anything toxic in the book, but I didn't like the character of the protagonist. I prefer the selfish protagonist.

Coming from the long-eared ape, I really hope that the author will have the opportunity to continue the story of Yuan He in its entirety.

It's great, I'll keep subscribing. If you are subscribing, please like me. I would like to know how many people subscribe to Immortality Wine Master.

The author's book is a breath of fresh air nowadays. There are too many fast food so-called [refreshing articles]. Come on, author.

After writing and writing, the author still couldn't help but cheat, and the more he wrote, the more mysterious it became. I originally thought it was a mortal flow, and it had a certain sense of involvement, but I didn't expect that in the end, I had to speculate and cheat. It can be lifted out of the bookshelf.

I feel that the function of spiritual wine in the book is similar to that of elixir, without any outstanding features. I think the protagonist can develop more ways to use it based on the different characteristics of wine and elixir, such as breaking up the poisonous wine in advance or during battle to create a favorable environment; drinking three kinds of wine individually is fine, but drinking them together is extremely poisonous; adding prohibitions to the wine, and evaporating while setting up formations; brewing the wine into a non-Newtonian fluid for defense; alcohol-flavored liquid bombs... Etc., Book friends, how else can it be used?

What a novel! Come on, author! I read other novels and use monthly tickets to support you!

How can I put it this way? When I first read this novel, I read it for the farming genre. There was no big explosion, but there were small blessings, a little luck, and gradual upgrades. There was no content about leapfrogging. When fighting against the three zombie old monsters, the Green Ape King, and in the later stage of fighting the Xuan Fei in Mojiu Palace, I used up a lot of magic weapons. The golden elixir in the river bottom ruins seemed to have just finished the golden elixir. In addition, the fake elixir and the one who avenged the master, the three protagonists fought one together, and finally won by a narrow margin. But now (more than seventy chapters away from the latest update), the snowy field part has begun. I won't talk about the rating before and after the fight. The golden elixir fights the Zifu, and it is said that it is an old monster that has lived for many years. How can he make such a mistake in judgment and let the protagonist kill him casually? It feels like it has started to follow the old path of most similar novels, where the level gap is just for others and has no meaning to the protagonist. Eh... If that's really the case...

Can you tell me that the alcohol bug is still in the protagonist's hands? Every time I read a chapter, I kept thinking about this question. Even if I am not in charge of brewing, there is no Golden Finger scene in the entire brewing process. Does anyone know? Will the protagonist still use it? Does the protagonist rely solely on luck? I saw the wine bug and it didn't even exist when I saw it on the shelves. Or did I remember it wrong? Is there such a setting? Mandela effect? Can you tell me what's going on? 😭 Is there any conspiracy behind the fact that the protagonist doesn't use golden fingers and relies solely on adventures? Why isn't there any hint? I can't suppress these questions in my heart. Can anyone tell me?

The author's new book, "The Magician of Qinghe", does the title have a sense of déjà vu? Come on, top, top, top!

The author has the appearance of a master, but I still feel that it is not interesting enough. Maybe it is not exciting enough and the plot is not compact enough. I support this wave and plan to continue reading.

I was addicted to it when I watched Legend of the Green Monkey before. . This time I will support you first.

I'm still struggling 😭 But the results are really not good. I haven't read more than 100 chapters, and the fan list is still over 200.

It's a pity, the author actually has potential, and the evaluation of the essence post in traditional Chinese is very good.

These recent pictures have constructed a completely different world view. They are really good 🤭. Support, support, support. Order all genuine copies.

I think it is very well written. If there is no mystery about the origin of an indigenous protagonist, then what else can I see? I would give it a full score of 85 out of 100. It has the same flavor as the previous book Yuan He

I have always supported the author. This will be my first fully ordered work. I hope the author can keep up the good work and bring good stories to everyone. It would be great if there were more.

Why is this book not listed on the author page? Has it been blocked by the platform?