The Black Gold Magician

I always felt something was missing, and I finally realized it was missing a magical event, a description of the magic trick that lacked mystery, and a final revelation of the magic trick, that feeling of sudden realization. In short, it was more bland than exciting.

It's very boring, the writing is terrible, and I don't know how it will be later on. In the first few chapters, it felt like the male lead only knew coin magic.

Accidents always happen when performing magic. I just don't want to see so many accidents.

After the system upgrade, magic has been transformed into the exchange of superpowers—even more interesting!

This part of the plot was completely baffling; has the author changed?

Could the author please let the female lead go back to the male lead?

The Waterloo chapter disgusted me. If Li Ye doesn't end up with Su Qiuye, I'll switch from being a fan to a hater. 💔💔🔪🔪😡😡😡😡!!!!!!

It's so well-written. But it seems like not many people are reading it. What a pity, I've already voted for it. Keep up the good work, author!

It's well-written, highly recommended. Readers who enjoy this type of book should check it out; it's definitely a good book. 👍👍👍 I didn't want to continue reading after I got to the part about becoming an apprentice (ps: men with systems don't need masters, just personal preference).

Can the female lead be brought back? Let her understand the truth of what happened back then.