Farming in the World of Martial Arts

The writing style is like that of a primary school student, and the old-fashioned time-travel writing style is like a running account. It looks disgusting.

They actually arranged for the heroine to be captured by the enemy alone. What do you think, do you want to be a cuckold? He is already in charge of a party and has hundreds of thousands of warriors under his command. He travels without all kinds of light and dark guards. He is also a talent among talents.

Yang Xiao handled it too hastily, and the feud between him and Miujie cannot be resolved at all. The master's brother died because of him. This had its own reasons. But the heir who raped her, not to mention Miujie, was also your junior, but you never expressed it from the beginning to the end.

The subject matter is quite good, but the protagonist's various forcible attempts to reduce his intelligence are too poisonous.

Let's talk about the advantages first. The theme and ideas are okay, and the plot design is not too bad. Talking about the shortcomings, what is the positioning and role positioning of the protagonist? What is the positioning of other characters? Secondly, the dialogue has a strong feeling of TVB's bloody drama. The heroine's design is soulless. I suspect that the author only thinks about the big plot and does not think about the small plot and how the development and design are reasonable and how to make it more immersive. I hope the author can further hone his writing and language skills, and that the plot design conforms to the background of the times.

Forcibly creating an opponent for the protagonist is really poisonous

Xiaobai's article, I'm speechless😓You don't have any plot at all, you wrote it by a robot, right?

Liu Bowen slayed the dragon and Zhu Yuanzhang were not unified. Just proclaiming himself emperor can slay the dragon. Wouldn't Liu Bowen's ancestors just find someone to proclaim themselves emperor and then slay the dragon directly?

Using a mentally retarded protagonist to promote the development of the plot, the poison resistance is not cautious enough

He's almost thirty, and he still doesn't have a wife or concubines🙂

After reading Chapter 14, I discovered the poisonous point. Why does such a scumbag still have Harvest as his subordinate? He also explained that he was left to do the dirty work. Will you help this scumbag enemy come to take revenge? With such a big power, why would you find a caravan to lead the way, so that you can keep developing your power for good looks? What I wrote before is quite good, but why did I suddenly become so wise? I want to give up, but I am reluctant to let it go, and I am afraid that it will be more poisonous later if I keep it. .

It's too deliberate. One moment the protagonist is wise and powerful, and the other moment his IQ falls off the line. The story is driven not by the plot but by the author. It seems very stiff.

The writing is not strong enough and there is no sense of immersion. It is too messy and there is no outline.

I really can't stand it anymore. It was still martial arts in the first part, but it turned into fantasy in the second part. In the first part, it was farming and building a harmonious society. In the second part, it didn't care about the security of the ruling area at all. It became cold and ruthless, and the character collapsed.

It was too poisonous. The first few journals were at the level of a primary school student. I thought there would be improvement in the future, but no, I gave up the book immediately. To be honest, some people are not good at it at first, but they learn with humility and make progress. There are a bunch of people sitting here complaining but they don't change things, they don't learn lessons, and there is no progress at all. Don't you know what your level is? It's not like someone who is a bit advanced, has his own ideas, and doesn't listen to the readers, it's understandable. This author is unworthy, pretending to be an ostrich, covering his ears, I won't listen, I won't listen, I won't listen. Ah bah! Hurry up and delete the work. How many times have you brushed it? I'm really tired of it before you comment. I've ordered it almost ten times and the poor quality still pops up. Is the author spending money?

The Yuan Dynasty was treated too lightly. To today's people, perhaps the Yuan Dynasty's killing of Han people was just a number. But for the people at the time, this was a real blood feud and a life-and-death feud. There is also the issue of Zhang Wuji marrying Zhao Min. If Zhang Wuji was just an ordinary disciple of Wudang, it would be nothing for him to marry Zhao Min. But as the protagonist's personal disciple, he married the enemy's daughter when the two countries were still at war. This is the biggest political incorrectness.

Hey, it is indeed as mentioned above. The protagonist is so smart that I feel like a primary school student can do better than him. Many times it is too frustrating to read. If you are more decisive and tough, it will be a farming article that has a great look and feel. This kind of cool and silly feeling makes people feel depressed, which is a bit uncomfortable.