Wandering Voyager

The new book has a certain degree of growth. I suggest the author to learn from Rebirth of the Super Battleship! You can learn from it, or you have already learned from it. I see some similarities in some places. 4.....

Let me tell you what you think of this book. In fact, this book has a very good start and the ideas are very interesting. I was very optimistic about this book at the beginning. After Shan wrote about meeting the earth, he completely let go and felt a strong smell of private servers. It takes billions of years and tens of thousands, millions, and hundreds of millions of spaceships at every turn. Or destroy a planet or a star with one blow. Even in the end, it became a hodgepodge of fan stories about Three-Body Problem and Rural Teacher. Such a good starting point was wasted.

After reading a few chapters, please give the author some suggestions. The protagonist is reborn at the beginning, which is too bland. Why? If your human body is gone and your consciousness is possessed by a spaceship, then your perception will definitely change drastically. You have no hearing, no sense of smell, and only one camera for vision. And if you really possess the spaceship, then after confirming that you have the ability to move, wouldn't the first thing you do is inspect the spacecraft and reinforce it? The spaceship is your body. I'm afraid all children know how dangerous the universe is. But you built a camera and flew as soon as you were born, almost scrapping it, and then you got lucky and flew to Neptune. To be honest, it would be much more reliable if you just stayed for a few months to build the spaceship, expand the scale, build some mining robots, and research spacecraft technology.

Battleships like Star Wars are really ugly, and so many people like them just because of their feelings.

I welcome your suggestions here, and you can write some science fiction settings to help me continue to improve this book! And there are many civilizations in the universe. You can also create your own civilization, and I will refer to it! Thank you for watching, don't forget to vote a little recommendation every day~

Don't you think it's a slap in the face to the author?

Pictured above The ship is 150 meters long, with a barrel length of 120m and a muzzle diameter of 40m. It is equipped with 6 controllable nuclear fusion reactors as energy source. Five of them provide power to the cannon. The main cannon is a laser shaped direct-firing cannon with an effective range of 10,000 meters and its maximum power can destroy a micro star with a diameter of 3,000 meters. Charging time: 15 minutes At the same time, it is equipped with 10 laser beam cannons and 4 laser concentrated cannons on the side.

That's ridiculous. It's a mechanical civilization. Just be a mechanical civilization. Isn't it nice? I still think of myself as a human being, and to be honest, I don't want to watch it.

I like to read this kind of subject matter. Everyone has different reading preferences, some are rigorous, some are wild and unconstrained. As long as I feel comfortable reading it, it is a good book for me.

I counted with my fingers. You are lying in Hua Mulan's arms playing with your phone and using Daji's battery to charge it. Xiao Qiao is undressing in front of you, Da Qiao is jealous, Diao Chan is dancing, Yang Yuhuan and Cai Wenji are playing music, Angela is telling you a story, Jialuo is holding an arrow with a shy face, Nuwa is making a perfect girlfriend for you, Yu Ji and Mi Yue are in front of you. With his long legs showing off in front of him, Wang Zhaojun made ice cream for you to eat, Zhen Ji summoned pure water for you to drink, you touched the tail of the night cat girl Ah Ke, sat on Cai Wenji's chair, and the magic cook Angela made you a sumptuous lunch, but after a while you took your phone and read the comments seriously, and when you saw my comment, you even liked it. Sun Wukong has waited for Tang Monk for 500 years, Feng Qingxue has waited for Tu Su for 900 years, Yuwen Tuo has waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Nightshade has waited for Long Yang for 1,000 years, Xiyao has waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, Zixuan has waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives, and I have been waiting for you to update more. If you don't update more, I wish you: I want to take a bath, but there is no water! Getting ready to go out, it rains! Just a sip of water can help you gain weight! Five words floated from the sky, loading. Six words floated in the sky, and the picture failed to load. Seven words floated on the ground, refresh again and exit. The ticket rang in my hand, and my phone fell to the floor. One day, God said to me: "Child, I can fulfill one of your wishes. What do you want?" I said: "Can it destroy the earth?" God said: "Child, think about other things first!" I said: "Can this novel be updated faster?" God said: "Child, let's consider destroying the earth!" The author is great, I think it is indescribably handsome, but why not update it more?

It is understandable that a robot that has been dormant for four billion years in a fantasy world cannot be corrupted or deteriorated for four billion years. It is outrageous that a robot that has been dormant for four billion years in a science fiction world has not turned into a pile of scrap metal due to molecular motion. It is not a technology that looks like a god.

Shouldn't mechanical civilization pile up technology trees like crazy?

The new Voyager is modeled after the Imperial-class Star Destroyer, with a total length of 200 meters, a maximum width of 40 meters, and a maximum height of 8 meters

The idea is good, but the corresponding knowledge reserve is insufficient and there are quite a few loopholes.

Look at this

The author is recommended to play two games, "Kerbal Space Program" and "Space Engineers". Because the author does not have any aerospace knowledge, by playing the game you can roughly understand what Δv is, what a gravity slingshot is, what a window period is, what thrust-to-weight ratio is, and when these are applicable. What you are writing now is completely imagining space travel using things on the ground! It's so uncomfortable to watch!

Why is the earth written as a mechanical ball? What a big mistake! It doesn't matter if you engage in the rise of machines. Pig's trotters come and open a virtual network, allowing humans to build in the virtual network. All research on pig's trotters can be obtained, and then they engage in alien civilization, interstellar, and casually treat the earth like that. To be honest, readers must feel uncomfortable in their hearts, and the performance of pig's feet on the earth is not right. The opponent has more cannon fodder, but the pig's feet are less capable, cannon fodder versus cannon fodder, write a few chapters, and then negotiate, pig's feet buy the earth.

It feels like the author tried his best to write hard science fiction, but... He was too soft (insufficient knowledge reserve)

The idea is good, but there are too many bugs in the text. The criticisms are dense and there is no place to complain.

Go watch "Battleship Reborn".

Most authors can't play without the earth and always focus on the earth.

I'm a little panicked when I see this update time. I'm a newbie.

The ideas are quite good and novel. I look forward to the follow-up stories.

It's well written. If it can be maintained after it's put on the shelf, I'll order it all.

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The cool night makes me miss you like a river

The author is basically using love to generate electricity 😥

I guess what the author's last book was called, Mothership, right?