My Novel Has Been Encrypted at S-Rank

First of all, the economic system inside, a priceless treasure on the market, a super-celestial skill, can be sold for a better car price. Although I sold the first two chapters after knowing it, I sold it at a low price. The protagonist is very happy. If the money in the author's world is much more expensive than in reality, just pretend that I didn't say this. Second, the author adds a lot of aura and identity to the protagonist: a rich second generation who is obsessed with corruption, a high school dropout and a playboy, his father was unjustly imprisoned, an inexplicable martial arts system, an upgrade in belief, and what is mentioned in the introduction as being considered a master, etc. At first, the author wrote these identities directly in sentences, but the male protagonist in the author's works is constantly losing the author's original character design, such as: 1. From the beginning, he was directly exposed in his own home as a mistress who could not even be beaten by peripheral members. 2. Then there was a second-generation rich man who used to spend money lavishly and seemed to have never seen money. He did not have a large pocket money for two months 3. The male protagonist dropped out of high school. Although he mainly plays and is not an otaku (I will talk about it later), he is exposed to the social environment early, but he shows that he has no experience. Even if he is a bad learner, he will still get some social experience 4 Why is the male protagonist not an otaku? The common sense is understood, but the male protagonist behaves very strangely, like an old antique who has never used the Internet or a primary school student who can equate the Internet with entertainment. However, the male protagonist is definitely not a person who does not touch the Internet because he plays games and the male protagonist should be an adult, so he is exposed to online information all the time in daily life. I wonder if the hero has a big heart or something. He never thought about his father at first, nor did he want to solve the matter. Even if the hero's father really committed a crime, the family relationship will not be broken. When he met a powerful official organization, he did not ask to help a person who was wrongly accused I won't talk about the 6 system, they all appear inexplicably, or the origin will be explained later, or not explained at all 7 I was initially attracted to read this novel by the setting of being a master, but I was slapped in the face from the beginning, no It feels like being regarded as a master by others I haven't read the following content, but I took a cursory glance at the comments, and they talked about how a crisis of human life and death will occur at any time, and the only ones to fight against the crisis are the organizations that began to appear in the article. From the beginning, it can be seen that the world's technology is similar to the current reality, and even people have adapted to 5G. However, the crisis of human extinction still requires a few or 200 warriors to physically resist, and humans have already known for a long time that there will be The danger is about to happen, but there are no countermeasures. It relies on a few warriors to form an organization that sometimes has rights and sometimes has no power (it has rights that can infringe and monitor the entire Internet, but has no law enforcement rights). In addition, the entire organization has insufficient funds and no one knows the purpose of establishing this organization. There may also be world crises, and there are no relevant laws, and there is no way to deal with various possible accidents, such as guiding society in a martial environment and focusing on research. Develop relevant science and technology, publish some unimportant martial arts, screen martial arts talents, and do not incorporate all the messy martial arts families and families into the national system, etc., And the methods I mentioned above are all measures taken by a mature organization and the country when it discovers such a crisis that concerns the entire human race, and taking into account various practical factors, it cannot be completed at once The author can refer to the above book, and it is handled very well Finally, people If the human race really discovers possible human dangers, it is not that the more closed the better, nor can the solution of the crisis be accomplished by individuals or single organizations. Individualism is difficult to solve such large-scale problems, and life is not a comic book. Normally operating organizations and countries should immediately notify the main leaders when they discover a crisis that threatens the world. Everyone should work together to solve the problem and perform their duties. It should not be like the Avengers' way of solving crises that is imagined and advocated by the West. This is responsible for all lives. Just like this epidemic crisis, even we ordinary people have our own tasks: self-isolation and other measures. Only when everyone can complete their tasks well according to the peacetime plan can we deal with the crisis.

As a rich second generation, he behaves like a nobody who has never seen the world. The characters in it, no matter which one, are like little people. It's baffling to people today. The writing technique is just like when the online articles first came out in 2000, not grand enough.

The more I read, the more frustrated I become, and the more I read, the angrier I get. I want to read a refreshing article.

Disappointed, the author's writing style is beyond words... Are all the people in the Guwu world mentally broken? When the nest is covered, how can there be any eggs? 200 people were dispatched when alien beasts invaded? Even if the author wants to push the protagonist, is there no need to do this? The world is about to be destroyed, and then, the masters are waiting to die? The protagonist becomes the savior alone, is praised by people all over the world, and then uses his faith to become stronger? ? ? ?

The Hongmeng organization you wrote about is too ridiculous, right? If there is really a threat from another world, the advantages of the ancient martial arts system lie in knowledge blockade and qualifications. Are they so proud of their troops? As for not agreeing to launch martial arts for all people, can I understand it as raising bandits to respect themselves? Can we be considered as having lost the game if we were finally broken through? In the last few chapters, it was said that there is a human team fighting guerrillas in another world. Don't you just want to say that the protagonist's grandfather is alive? To sum up the training process, wow, the first level comes out, you know it, the second level and the third level are upgraded instantly. Power comes from muscles or energy. The body serves as a load-bearing body, and adaptation must be strengthened. So you are not following the law of conservation of energy. If you take your time, do you have to add details, such as the increase in appetite and the distribution of spiritual energy in the area? For now, this book has no future, and it will be useless no matter how you supplement the system later.

So, after seeing the exercises, you don't praise them and you just take them to the training camp? You don't have an identity when you enter the training camp, and you plan to let those second-generation bullies bully you? Do you really think you will become loyal after just one visit to the training camp? Why don't you check and find a reason to let his father go? Are you going to ask the protagonist to work desperately for the family organization? Write a pretentious slap in the face? Shuangwen is not happy. Write about normal development? No IQ at all. The author is on the signing list, right?

What is the difference between the aristocratic family and the Indian caste system? Can you please stop writing about the regression of civilization?

I was really disgusted when I saw Chapter 99 and couldn't stand it anymore. It's disgusting that a national guardian organization like Hongmeng was forcibly blackmailed by you without thinking. I gave up.

To be honest, the part about a national organization is too dissuasive. This is an organization that responds to global crises. Why is it worse than a low-level non-governmental organization? Moreover, the character and attitude of the protagonist are not pleasant. It seems that he is desperate to promote the secret book. It is too ridiculous to create his own organization instead of the national organization. I don't understand why the protagonist is so angry. It is all the fault of the world and I am the only one who is right. The book and movie are blocked and I get angry even if I don't have a number. Isn't this like publishing indecent information everywhere? How can it affect the peace and stability of society if you don't have a measure to block it? What's more, it's not like the country has no explanation, but the author himself contradicts himself. There is a problem with the setting of making the secret book public like this. It goes without saying what people will do when they gain power. Are you responsible for the crimes committed by lawless elements because they gained power? Originally, it was a good thing for the country to ask for it to be provided to the authorities first, but the author slapped him in the face. It's okay to be selfish, but don't change the concept of incorrect views. This paragraph is too disgusting.

Is the author a newbie? Written like this, old bookworms will lose interest after reading a few pages! There is a problem with the protagonist's setting. The down-and-out rich second generation has no experience at all! After knowing that the ancient martial arts training skills he sent out were real, he didn't think about hiding himself, and he directly posted a video teaching. Is it crazy? The author is just a noob!