My Novel Has Been Encrypted at S-Rank

First of all, the economic system inside. A priceless treasure on the market, a cultivation technique that surpasses the heavenly level, is sold for the price of a decent car. Although we know that only the first two chapters were sold, it was still a bargain. The protagonist was even very happy about it.

As a rich second-generation heir, he acts like a naive and inexperienced nobody. All the characters in the story, regardless of who they are, seem like petty people. It's very baffling to modern readers. The writing style is reminiscent of early 2000s online novels—lacking in grandeur.

The more I read, the more frustrated and angry I get. I want to read a cathartic novel.

I was greatly disappointed; the author's writing style is, to put it mildly, disappointing... Are all the people in the ancient martial arts world out of their minds? When the nest is overturned, how can the eggs remain intact? They dispatched 200 people just because of the invasion of alien beasts?

The Hongmeng Organization you wrote about is utter nonsense! If there really is an interdimensional threat, the advantage of the ancient martial arts system lies in its knowledge blockade and aptitude. Why would they need to maintain such a powerful and self-important army?

So, after seeing the cultivation method, instead of appreciating it, they directly put it into the training camp? Are they planning to let those rich kids bully them without giving them an identity upon entering the training camp? Do you really think that just going around the training camp will build loyalty? Why don't you investigate and find a reason to release his father?

What's the difference between the aristocratic families you're writing about and the Indian caste system? Can you please stop writing about a regression in civilization?

I was so disgusted by chapter 99 that I couldn't continue reading. It's nauseating that you're forcibly and mindlessly portraying Hongmeng, a national guardian organization, as evil. I'm dropping it.

Honestly, the part about the national organization was incredibly off-putting. This is supposed to be an organization responding to a global crisis, yet it seems less capable than some third-rate civilian group. Its scale and demeanor are nothing like a national organization, let alone the first line of defense. And yet, they managed to block information for so long.

Is the author a complete newbie? Writing like this, even seasoned readers will lose interest after a few chapters! The protagonist's character is flawed. A down-on-his-luck rich kid with absolutely no life experience! After discovering that the ancient martial arts body-refining technique he released was genuine, instead of hiding it, he immediately released a video tutorial – was he out of his mind? The author is just a complete novice!