Cultivating Immortality in America

For longtime readers, here are a few thoughts on why this book performed poorly. Firstly, the author used an old theme from 5 or 6 years ago. After reading a dozen chapters, I noticed several instances of simplistic logic and dialogue typical of light novels, along with other clichés…

Even if a chapter a day is good, no one will read it.

I found this book quite interesting, but there are a few points. First, cultivating immortality in America is a good theme, but then you suddenly add ancient martial arts, which makes it less interesting. With acquired, innate, and even terrestrial immortals, if you're going to write something realistic, at least make it more realistic. Is this just padding the word count?

You should protect that Chinese person. Shouldn't they have stepped into a hole or broken a brick when they were being taken away? That one sentence is clearly useless.

I've been resting for several days, and I've read about 100 chapters today. The more I read, the more my head aches. It's a story about a Chinese-American protagonist who fights using brute force. Later, his uncle tells him he often gets beaten up in fights, then goes out to dig for ginseng and has a fortuitous encounter with an alien cultivator, successfully becoming a cultivator.

Author, you're a complete novice! The US has the Castle Act! It has self-defense laws! You can retaliate when attacked! Do you think they buy guns just for fun? The US Constitution states that private property and liberty are inviolable! If you're attacked, as long as you can prove you're innocent, you can even kill the police if they're attacking you! Understand?

The protagonist is an idiot; his way of thinking is completely different from others. Is the author a "banana" (someone who is Westernized and uncultured)?

In an environment like America, constantly doubted and belittled, the protagonist argues and acts arrogantly; no one around him can survive well. The worst fear is that later, the female lead will be sexually assaulted, causing the protagonist to go on a killing spree. The End.

The term "American of Chinese descent" is really jarring; it feels like it's associated with dogs.

I just can't understand the temperature after a meteorite falls. Shouldn't the impact point be burned to a crisp? How did the author cool it down? I could totally copy that. Is it some kind of ancestral secret technique?