I Am Meng San

It is well written and may be interesting to people of a certain age or experience. (But younger readers should be careful)

Brief comment: Meng San practices swordsmanship, catches fairies, and makes the emperor bow his head. He is like a drunken and swordsman. Book title: "I am Meng San" Author: The Fish Who Just Wants to Sleep Keywords: Fantasy, Eastern Fantasy Commentator: I am Lily Qingyou Book review text: Title: "I am Meng San" The title of the book is simple, and someone suggested changing it, but I clicked in to take a look because he is very straightforward. Introduction: The introduction is only four short sentences. It is clear and concise, indicating that the author has a high level of refining. Moreover, these four sentences are beautiful and clear, with three characters and one comma, and a beautiful layout. The first impression is that this book is readable. Opening: Chapter 1 The Third Master is born. The advantages of this article are no nonsense. The first sentence explains the location of General Meng's Mansion in the capital of Tianyuan Kingdom, and then directly enters the plot. The maid Xiaohuan is about to give birth. Difficult childbirth is almost a common plot in novels nowadays. The advantage of this book is that dystocia is real, there is no artificial calculation in it, and the lady is quite kind. When the lady heard Xiaohuan's cry, there was a trace of regret in her eyes. Was it because she regretted that she had not been kind to this person who had been loyal to her? She is dying now, and I no longer want her to fend for herself. Do I want to keep her? Meng San came into this world because his mother tried her best to fight for it. Whether it was to be a college or a primary school, her mother resolutely chose Meng San. Therefore, although Meng San has no father's love and his father is too lazy to even name him, his mother is the reason for Meng San's survival and the reason why Meng San did not go astray. Character Setting: Male Protagonist: Meng San, smart, brave, and perseverant. He is not a top figure in the world as his apprentice, but the skills on the jade slips obtained by his master are predictably very good. Meng San feels very real. The heroine: Qiu Ying, an upright official in Yixiang Tower. Nine-year-old Meng San regarded Yixiang House as a restaurant, and Qiu Ying ate with him. Meng San felt like a relative and redeemed his life for her. The god of fate favored her from then on. She had good qualifications, studied under famous teachers, and climbed to the top in one step, but she never forgot her roots. Plot: The plot is attractive, such as dystocia, good (hao four sounds) eating a bucket, etc. Are not new topics, but there is a desire to read, it is not exaggerated, the language is not gorgeous, and the plot can be remembered after reading, it is considered a good article among newcomers. Writing style: The writing style of this article is simple and unpretentious. Summary: This is the third book written by the author and has been successfully signed. Judging from the current storyline, as long as you persist, the prospects will be very good.

The supporting character's name is lofty, but the main character's name is a country bumpkin, and the title of the book is even more incomprehensible.

This is a distinctive book, although ten or eight more chapters could have completed the ending of the story a little better. There won't be a dead end. The book is still very good, I like it.

Come on, author, I hope you don't have a harem. To put it bluntly, you need to work harder and practice your writing. Some parts are not quite there yet and you can't write the feeling you should have.

Aboriginal plus is written from birth. This means that the protagonist needs to grow up, which is the need for the beginning (abuse of the master). You can't just have the protagonist understand the world and be extremely well behaved for no reason. To be honest, he doesn't have enough background, so writing like this is looking for death. Moreover, I have to say that the cultivation system collapsed from the beginning. I will not say that a new martial artist needs to be really angry. I reluctantly accept it. You can pass it with a spiritual consciousness.

Support, vote for recommendation every day, hope to keep updating, don't be eunuch and unfinished

I just discovered this book by accident. It's good to read. If the title hadn't been so bad, it would have become a lot more popular...

The book is okay, but the biggest problem is that in just a few chapters, the woman is still entangled with the protagonist. What does this mean? Wouldn't it be nice to be a knight? It's concubinage again, forced kiss again, speechless, this is a rhythm that needs to be abolished!

The writing style is good and it reads smoothly. There is not too much writing about Meng San from birth to growing up, which I feel is very good. Then in the first chapter I mentioned the beginning of having a baby. I have read a lot of new books that start like this, but it doesn't matter much. After all, few readers have read so many new books of mine, haha. In addition, I suggest that the author make the paragraphs shorter, which is still a bit too long, and the title of the book is indeed too ordinary and has no highlights. You can consider changing it. (For me, who has a bad title, I haven't changed it yet because I can't bear to spend money on the book cover.) 😄 Come on ⊙▽⊙It's pretty good among newcomers

I can't see it anymore. I'm withdrawing. You insist?

It looks pretty good! Collected! Take your time and watch! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!

This is really ungrateful. The other party looked down on him first, and then took action. In the end, the protagonist took the initiative to help others, which is awesome.

Steady, I really don't want a harem, it's very well written.

The introduction of this book is not attractive at all. Can anyone who has read it tell me what the tree picked up?

I voted for five monthly votes, but I don't know why it's not doubled?

When I read Chapter 19, my writing skills are still very immature, but I must have had experience in writing articles. The reason why it is not popular is that the title of the book is too uninspiring, the content is biased toward low-level martial arts and martial arts, not like fantasy, and the third is the lack of exposure. The direction of the plot is still okay, at least it's not toxic and it's watchable.

I read the first chapter, I feel good, I have the desire to read more, I have accepted it, come on, author.

I hope I don't want a stallion~ I don't want a stallion~ I don't want a stallion~~~ I can't stand the stallion article