All You Can Think Of

Came from the circle. I understand your persistence in signing the contract, but to put it bluntly, it's better not to write this book yet... Of course, I'm not asking you to give up on this book. But take a look at what you have written. In the content of your article, problems such as improper collocation, improper use of punctuation marks, typos, and missing subjects have all appeared. Even in the passages where you have dubbing, you use punctuated pauses without pronouncing the pauses yourself. ①I don't know if you accidentally added more punctuation points or if you thought there should be more punctuation marks here. If it's the latter, then you have a really big problem. (Of course I hope it's the former) The mistakes you made in your article show that you can't even write a fluent sentence, so why do you think you can sign the contract? If nothing else, no matter how low the Qidian contract conditions are, the contract is still for a novel. There may be a lot of typos and a few minor issues, but it still counts as an article. But your novel, it's really like something I wrote when I was first learning how to write sentences in elementary school, maybe even worse. What you should do most now is to learn how to write an article, not how to write a novel. Your so-called attempts and efforts now are all in vain. It will also ruin your reputation. Why do you always look for high-rated authors when reading books? Because that kind of author already has his own signature. Even if they are not well written, readers will hold on for a few chapters before deciding whether to stay or go. Editors will also judge whether a work is good or bad based on its author. For example, if "The Last Fire" by Squid is a work by a newcomer, it will definitely be ignored by editors, because the title of this book is not straightforward enough and editors do not know what you are going to write. The so-called "title, introduction, and three golden chapters" are not only aimed at readers, but also editors. (I'm sleepy, so go to bed first and make up for the rest tomorrow)

I want to cry, I finally changed it this afternoon, but I didn't save it! I have to rewrite it again, 😭

That's awesome, come on! A potential stock, the more you look at it, the more exciting it becomes. Come on!

I see a rising star

There is a key issue, the name of a person When you choose a name, you should have thought a lot, right? I have two previous books, and I spent a long time thinking about a name and what to do with it. Then there was a big mistake that the readers didn't remember. I have read ten chapters, probably. Many people appear in your book, but I only remember Asakawa, Ruinian, and Baiyuan. Some of the main characters' personalities are not outstanding enough, and readers cannot remember their names. The names are too refreshing, refined, and too conceptual, and readers cannot remember them either. Just like Qingluan, he has appeared many times, but I still don't know his identity, his personality is not outstanding, and the main character has become secondary. And dad, dad's story has a great impact on Asakawa, but I don't know his name.       ，，，，，，，，       （，），

What happy meme did you write today? I just came to see what you said.

I think the plot is well written and the writing style is lighthearted and enjoyable. I recommend it!

Come on, hold on, you will achieve something one day! Gold always shines!

Happy New Year 😊

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After reading the author's article about his obsession with signing contracts, I came here to read it and just wanted to say one thing. Give up this book and study hard. The typical writing is mediocre, the story is cliche, and the dialogue and characters are thin.

By the way, what is your formula for one chapter and one volume?

Coming from the circle, as a book friend said, there are too many problems. It is recommended that the author calm down and treat it as a graffiti for his own entertainment rather than an exercise in writing. Words, sentences, paragraphs, and chapters all need to be carefully crafted. There are several mistakes that newcomers are particularly likely to make. Let's not talk about anything else. I will just talk about a sense of immersion. Being too immersed in the world of your own writing is not a bad thing, but you should avoid self-pleasure. For the time being, I would like to encourage you, and I wish Wenqi the best!

Happy New Year to everyone! Happy New Year everyone! 😁

Why did you read the first chapter again, hahaha

The writing is great and interesting. I have collected it. I will continue to follow you and become a master soon. Please collect it from each other.

The writing is okay, just code the words first, and then sort them out when you are empty.

Everyone has a dream, and I heard that many writers have to stick to it! Slowly, it will get better! If you don't accumulate small steps, you can't reach a thousand miles! Come on, great

Don't forget your original intention and move forward From love Continue to love Write only when you want to write

The vocabulary is relatively poor, and the description of battle scenes is not good, but this book does not focus on battles.

Wow, you posted a male video? Male videos are very competitive

Come on~ March is a new beginning~

If you want to sign a contract, the first three chapters are the golden three chapters, which are very important. When an editor is reading your book, it is impossible to read it word by word, so the characters must stand out. The people who appear in the first three chapters must be impressive. There cannot be too many tricks and it must be done step by step. If you scan it at a glance, there should be no problems. Don't let others scan it and suddenly go to the previous paragraph and feel that there are logical errors in what you just scanned. You have to let others know what you are writing. It cannot be too slow. Even if it is slow, it must be clear enough.

The world is too huge. Even a great person may not be able to write well. It is difficult to match the resume and content.

It's okay if it's literature, but not for online writing. The pacing and text are too tame and cumbersome, at least for a male channel, too slow and not concise enough.

I think you have done all the plot points in your story and you can do it at your fingertips. It's very strong, but the great master has several people working together, some write the main story, and some improve the branches and leaves. We can probably complete these by ourselves, so we make use of the sisters and relatives around us! Let them take a look and give their opinions! If it's good, change it, if it's not good, just listen!

I can definitely get results too! Waiting for it to be made into a TV series! 🪖

Let's set off the fireworks and wish everyone a happy Lantern Festival

The first chapter has been revised. Another round of revisions begins today. Please take a look 😁

Thanks to passerby A for the 29 votes, okay😘