Dead Wood Revival

The data is really bad. If you relied on novels to make money, you would starve to death.

Don't open the new book. Stop for a while. I recommend you to read this book. It's so inspiring. Don't read other books. Just read the first 10 chapters and read them again and again.

The first-person sense of immersion, the aura of the first chapter, each word does not describe the environment, but when combined, it can make people imagine a whole world and environment! If the sense of immersion in the first person is not up to standard, no matter how many changes are made later, the appeal will be useless. At least your opening chapter has not even reached the passing line.