I Have Distorted the Painting Style of the Whole World

Every deduction can create a grand group drama. Four words to describe the author, "high vision but low hand", although he is still much better than most people. The problem is that you haven't understood it. This is the starting point and the novel website. The protagonist in the novel is the main plot. If you want to write a good novel and make money, here is my opinion. If not, you can skip to the end: Each deduction should not exceed 20 chapters. Each deduction should include at least 15 to 20 chapters of changes in the real world, and you must learn to promote the development of the plot. It doesn't matter what kind of people you are, like your sister, Bubbles, or the protagonist. The most important thing is that the introduction attracts many people who want to read this kind of article. Being able to achieve this result can only mean that your writing is excellent enough. I think the author should change the article, but not the writing style, but change the protagonist, and then try to find a publisher and send a physical book. Physical books don't have so many writing restrictions, and they don't give you warnings like the starting point.

Don't use your brain, don't think about the plot. The level is above average, but science fiction can easily arouse people's thinking. When I think about it, this book is just a novice YY novel. There are strange omissions in many places. It is best not to bring any knowledge of reality into this book. Only by treating the development of the world and the people in it as another species can you read it (?) Personal opinion

Personally, I think the plot started to get confusing after it was released, but I think the ideas are still great. The author complained about the revised version after listening to the opinions of the master, and went further and further in the direction that cannot be seen. Author, are you sure this great god has no grudge against you, or is he secretly jealous of you?

I don't know what to do, let's try poison 🙂

Did the first deduction refer to the background of Gundam OO? A little bit similar.

To be honest, the reason why I read this book in the first place was to see how many ways human civilization can kill itself at each stage. And what do modern people think when they see the results of committing suicide through the website run by the protagonist. Therefore, we feel that the plot of the protagonist's sister is a bit redundant. As for the protagonist. . . Isn't it a good idea to be a tool for uploading movies?

I can't stand that crazy woman anymore. The fate of all mankind is actually in the hands of a woman. And that person has no empathy whatsoever, she only cares about her balls! Without human ideas, he still wants to control the destiny of mankind. Those damn politicians! The robot was actually controlled by one person. This is a natural dictatorship, it is really inhumane! Look at those poor people, they don't even have the freedom to live, all because of that damn robot and that woman! Why must the future of mankind be robots? What is the difference between humans and robots? Just because of physical fitness and maintenance? In the final analysis, this is still the factor of the body. I will never stand for the idea of ​​humanity, which ends up being the dictatorship of a mad woman and a bunch of robots that inherit no human thoughts. There must be a way! There must be a way! ! ! There must be a way! ! ! ! ! ! Human beings will definitely be able to surpass robots in all aspects ~ for sure! ! ! Isn't it just a body? Then transform the prosthetic body and replace all parts with electronic ones. Isn't it just that the computing power is not enough? Then upgrade your brain and unify the thoughts of all mankind under one guidance. In this way, human beings will be completely detached from robots. No, it is superhuman, who will completely transcend robots. At the same time, there will never be a government that can become a dictatorship at any time to manage mankind. The first step is to go electronic.           ，，， At the same time, 3D modeling is carried out with AI. The second step is intelligence.           AI， A large number of implantable smart devices. And brain-computer interfaces. The third step is cyberization. Mechanical and electronic control of the body. Such a three-step superhuman is the real future of mankind! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Einstein once said something. I wonder what weapons humanity will use in World War III? But I know humanity will fight World War 4 with rocks and sticks. Einstein was right. The Third World War unified mankind, and subsequent world wars can only be riots. Nonsense! You are violating our sovereignty. What? Say it again. You are violating our rights Say it again. National autonomy. You need to be clear. This is a battle for the unification of mankind, a civil war for mankind, and a battle for justice. In the past, the contradictions were only the contradictions within the country and the nation, which were ethnic contradictions. After all, we are one, we are one now, we were one in the past, and we will be one in the future. We are a global government. Our origins are African ancestors. They experienced a great disaster. There were only a few hundred people left as a tribe, and then it slowly developed to all parts of the world. If we trace back to our roots, we are all one. Since then, the contacts from various places have never stopped. Rome and the Han Dynasty called each other Da Qin to express their desire to live in the same world. The Empire has a genius idea to connect everyone. This is the long history of our global government. We unite divided peoples around the world. This will take us to a brighter future than ever before. Let's drink to global government.

It was okay at the beginning, but then it became boring. If the protagonist was an orphan, there was no plot about the sister, and it would only be good to deduce the tools for playing videos. There were too many interventions later, and there was no deduce, and it no longer felt like the beginning.

The era of this book is separated, and the reality is suddenly a hundred years old. There is no sense of immersion at all, right? The deduction was even more disappointing when it was put on the shelves. A lot of space was spent on failure deductions, but now there are too few descriptions, and the importance is ignored...

The author's deduction is very good, unlike other deductions of the same type that just resort to deus ex machina The protagonist is very speechless. Maybe it's the reason why I don't like to watch growth-oriented protagonists, because I feel that the protagonist is too redundant The protagonist can't even be a system pendant camera. I believe that the inner drama of the protagonist can be dealt with, so that he can be more professional when acting as a camera.

The deduction is wonderful! It's just that the protagonist seems useless...

Every time I read more than 90 chapters of Pig's Feet, I want to help my own A Dou up, but just to give her eternal life, it is better to look at the future and find a more reliable person to save worry and effort. If you want your family to occupy a high position, you might as well drink a bottle of evolution medicine yourself.

The first deduction world feels really good, but it's too slow. It's all about deduction. Wouldn't it be boring if the shady flow doesn't look at real-life reactions? The starting point orphanage is not meaningless! The author is too obsessed with his sister! But it was not handled well. Feeling happy! It's really better to open a new book.

The world and plot are very good, but the author's writing is too messy. The younger sister at the beginning was relatively unsuccessful. There is a reason why there are so many orphans in Qidian Orphanage.

To be honest, what interests me about this book is the reaction of humans after being seen online in the future of various forms of human extinction. But up to now, more than 80% of the content you have written is for self-interest I personally suggest that you change the copy. The current copy is wrong in terms of the content of your article, and the focus has shifted. , Most of the readers it attracts are easily dissuaded, and there are too many parts about deducing the future. I always skipped this part just by looking at the chapter names It is a good thing to be able to find the key points of the novel, but I am not very interested in this aspect of the content, so I stopped here. Finally, I suggest you modify the copy to be more targeted at the real readers of this novel.

I really don't like sister control, brother control, brother control, sister control, I was the first one to promote good-looking, then I joined sister control, I really don't like it

It was uncomfortable to watch at the beginning. The behind-the-scenes scenes I watched were all about slowly downplaying the existence of the protagonist, so that readers no longer pay attention to the protagonist. But the author did it this way. If the protagonist's relatives were not mentioned from beginning to end, I would not be so uncomfortable. However, this touches my forbidden area - feelings. If the author does not describe the daily life of the protagonist and his sister, he just touches it in one stroke... Sigh...

I am SB and I can't understand

It looks good in the front, but after it's put on the shelves... It seems like I've let myself go.

This book starts high and low, and the more I write, the more chaotic it becomes. The second deduction world shows that the author has great ambitions. You compressed the plot of hundreds of chapters into dozens of chapters, and it collapsed too much.

Why are all the protagonists in today's novels so full of swear words? Are these nine years of compulsory education a waste of time? I'm so angry that when will our civilized male protagonists in the great heaven stand up?

In fact, the fact that the protagonist has relatives is a trap in itself. On the one hand, he wants to transcend everything. On the other hand, human nature is selfish and wants the family to live well. . It's very confusing, right? Humans VS family? ? ? No solution

The girl-helping demon is almost done, so let's help her hard, right? 😅😅

Sure enough, it's cold, come here and step on your feet🦶🦶🦶🦶🦶🦶🦶🦶🦶🦶🦶 The beginning is not bad, but later I always like to feed people💩

The setting of this book is great! Not to brag, really, the setting is pretty good. But it's a pity that the author crashed, well, it crashed four times, and then he became a eunuch.                               I can't blame the author. He gave up three times. The fourth time, the first few chapters were OK, and they were written about reality. But unfortunately, he completely collapsed at that time. I don't know why. Maybe many people can't follow it. Then he let himself go and began to eat the protagonist's character (sorry, I also complained) and turned on the system's hook, allowing him to build a city in the world he created (actually created by the system) like the Western feudal nobles, and use the hook as the local god. Very disappointed, really disappointed. The first 70 chapters are really great, but after chapter 70, the author forced the protagonist's sister to get a super-large gold finger, and everything in the back fell apart. After several revisions, it still couldn't come back because the gold finger was so big that it could defy the heavens and was stronger than the protagonist's. I know that the author wants to take advantage of the protagonist, but if you can't grasp the setting, what's the use of writing it down? If I hadn't known that the protagonist was the protagonist, I would have thought that the younger sister was the real protagonist. Is it because there are not many women who have been poisoned? I just can't figure out why there is such a smart girl. She has so many scenes, more than the main character. You are completely ruined because of this woman. In the last few chapters of The Eunuch, there is actually a scene involving this wise girl! (Sorry, I can't control myself, I'm so broken) But this setting of deducing the future, and then knowing and changing the real future in reality is really good. What a pity, what a pity.

Reading the comments, no wonder this book is so popular. Actually, I think there was nothing wrong with it before it was put on the shelves, but it fell apart after it was put on the shelves. 🤔Some people like my sister, and some don't. There's nothing wrong with her, as long as she can explain herself. In addition, I think that the highest priority in writing a novel is whether the author is happy and whether the readers are happy or not. The second priority is to satisfy it if it can be satisfied. If it conflicts with the original setting, if it cannot be satisfied, then let it go. Only novels written in this way have soul, rather than dry routines. A few suggestions for the author

The second world is destined to collapse. If my sister dies, will she still upload videos when she returns to reality? If you don't upload it, then the article is not on topic, and you are trying to sell it to someone else. If you upload it, the country will take care of her. What will the protagonist do? Separate from human society and be tough? I have no expectations for this book. Although it already has 30,000 collections, one more book for me is not more, and one less for me is not a lot.

If you want to come in because of the introduction to see the reaction to the uploaded deduction video, there is no need to come in. I just want to write the deduction story, and I got sidetracked all the way. The introduction is deceiving.

This author's writing style is very sophisticated, the early stage of the novel is very clever, and the early stage writing is really good, but, alas... It's a pity