The Uchiha Who Rides and Cuts Ice and Fire in the Ninja World

The author can't write well about combat, strategy, and promotion. He relies on the subject matter to make a living. Now he has to suppress it again. Doesn't the author have some ideas in mind? He cut off his arm and became a chronic eunuch.

The huge poison, the previous foreshadowing changes the ending of Minato. In the end, Minato and Kushina are still dead, and Naruto is still a Jinchuuriki. What is it really writing? I didn't expect that the plot will return to the original plot?

Sharingan Kaleidoscope Evolution

The World of Naruto can appropriately increase the content of conspiracy theories. A Song of Ice and Fire recommends that you stop mowing grass and start preparing to upgrade. Although the Red Comet is still several years away, it can be set so that those with extraordinary talents are beginning to perceive the power of magic, and the nobles with a long tradition are beginning to notice the changes in the world. After all, those nobles have been passed down for hundreds of years, and there are gods, so it makes sense to be aware of them. If you can't write the plot now, let's switch to the battle for hegemony. The world of Naruto is preparing for advanced combat power, and Ice and Fire are preparing for hegemony. It's also good to have a good balance of length.

His strength far exceeds that of Konoha, but he is still a dog of Konoha. Without the protagonist, the two sides will definitely fight.

The subject matter is very good, but there are too many poisonous points in other aspects. It has stitched together a world of ice and fire. Not to mention how your magic combines with the Chinese-style practice method, but what about chakra, and the magic also adds a Chinese-style? Don't you think it's a bit messy? There is also the matter of Uchiha Itachi and Shisui. Itachi could not have been controlled by Shisui's other gods. He was a double agent soon after Itachi entered ANBU. If it was used from very early on, then the third generation must have known about it (even the other gods told him, and he used him to control the son of the Uchiha clan leader. Wouldn't he say it?) It was impossible before his death. He was fucking killed by Danzo, and he helped the high-level officials of Konoha before his death? You were really sold and you still helped count the money? Since it was all cleared, why didn't Itachi clear up Shisui? Itachi was the one who really took action. Even Itachi can clear his name, so is Shisui the source of all that? Also, Shisui has already been killed. Is Tsunade still afraid of being exterminated after taking office? I already have 4 pairs of exposed kaleidoscopes. Do you really want to push them? In general, the plot is crappy, the fights are crappy, and there is a lot of private goods hidden. The reborn time traveler recognizes his father as soon as he is reborn and travels across time, and tells about his abilities (even uses them in person, my God, he even tells the effect)

No wonder he rushes to the street, the male protagonist is not very smart and is too naive

Once the legion stream starts to suppress the protagonist's strength, it will be more severe than the self-cultivation stream's protagonist, and it will make readers more repelled, because most authors do not have the ability to describe the strength. The final way is to open the Zhutian stream, and there will not be a huge contrast between before and after suppression. It has caused a large loss of readers. If the subsequent battle against Danzo starts to drag on for hundreds of chapters, the front and the back are too separated, and there are only a few golden fingers in a legion stream. I know that the author probably has not thought much about how the subsequent plot will unfold. My expectations for this book will be very small.

Goldfinger is great, but Danzo is still alive. What level should everyone know?

Personally I think it's quite poisonous. First of all, the protagonist emphasizes the danger of genocide from the beginning, which shows that the protagonist cares about it very much. But in fact, the protagonist can't even be a qualified conqueror. Killing animals feels cruel, killing robbers feels cruel, and killing enemies feels cruel. Anyway, the protagonist has been doing his own psychological work and doesn't care about his own growth rate at all. To put it bluntly, because he knows that the author will not write him to death, the protagonist is not in a hurry to grow up from the bottom of his heart. Secondly, the protagonist's golden finger combined with the high martial arts and low magic situation can be said to be a crushing game, but the protagonist did not take advantage of it. It would be much better to change to a protagonist with a stable three-dimensional outlook and an online IQ. Secondly, the protagonist has always emphasized that he wants to change the future, but in fact he has been fishing for fish. What should happen will still happen. In short, even if the protagonist becomes a universe-level boss, the plot of Naruto will still not change much. Finally, this protagonist is really not likable at all. He starts off wildly, but always behaves like a noob. The enemies always have resurrection coins. The villain provokes the protagonist today, and the protagonist punches him, but does not kill him. In a few days, the villain continues to provoke the protagonist, and then the protagonist punches him again, but does not kill him...

The method of suppressing strength is not good. The potential of writing bloodline is exhausted, and there is no promotion kaleidoscope. It is better than no purple energy.

I don't know what the author thinks. If you want to write an American drama about Naruto, you should focus on description! I don't know, don't the audiences on both sides overlap? What he writes like this is not flattering to both parties.

Shimura Danzo!

Compared with water, if you want to kill someone, you can't kill him in one go. Wouldn't it be better to kill him in one go? Water is too much. It's a quick read, not as good as the Red Mansion book.

After it was put on the shelves, the writing became more and more watery, and the quality dropped drastically.

Until now, I'll just write about picking up girls with pig's feet, or the immature behavior of picking up girls. Write something interesting, otherwise I'll say goodbye.

The introduction is not good, I am confused.

Alas, there is a reason for every novel that no one reads, and this author is typical. There was a sense of expectation at the beginning, although on the night of Nine Tails, the previous arrangement was mentally retarded, like a child playing house. It feels like a lunatic. You said he didn't care about him, but he also made arrangements. You could say that he made arrangements, but he basically did nothing, and just highlighted a confusion. I came to see the fanfic, and it turns out that your fanfic is exactly the same. It follows the original route. What the hell am I looking at? It obviously highlights the author's level. The general outline is not done well, and the detailed outline may not be written at all. When writing a novel, you may read it step by step without having even the slightest grasp of the subsequent plot. Just like completing a task, just write 4,000 words a day. The Nine-Tails Rebellion was very clearly highlighted. With his strength, he can obviously solve all problems. Preserve Konoha's vitality and don't worry about the fight with Hokage. But because Namikaze Minato is not dead, he needs to spend more time writing original works. And Namikaze Minato is not dead, then he doesn't have much conflict with Konoha F4. Because at that stage they were basically about to retire, and there would be no plot without them Property F4, even under Minato's suppression, couldn't do much, let alone have much conflict with the protagonist. I can't write the following scenes, which are like playing house. Another point is that if Minato had not died, the night of genocide would most likely not have happened. The plot of this section is also unreliable. Therefore, the author obviously did not write the outline, or did not write it clearly, and the writing was too rough. When I was writing this later, I felt something was wrong in my head, and then I turned it around forcefully. So it will appear that the writing in those pictures is very retarded. You can completely place Naruto's plot directly in Minato, without death, and make a mark here. Then focus on the exploration of other worlds, for example, patch the system to gain the ability to explore the world, and directly change the map. If you can't write a good plot in the world of Naruto, you can write it in another world. Write a plot in another world. Then I figured out how the world of Naruto would develop if Minato was not dead, and it was no problem to turn back and write it. However, the author is not lazy, he doesn't want to write a good book He doesn't have the courage or ability to write like this. He has no ability to write an original plot at all. At least they didn't want to write it well at that time, but many people gave up the book when they saw such a poisonous place. Do you know? Moreover, many people abandon books. He abandons books permanently. Even if he finds your novel in the recommendations later, he will not read it again. Most readers just abandon the book and delete it from the bookshelf. After you delete it from the bookshelf, whether you write well or not, even if you write a masterpiece, it will not happen, and the author will not have many readers who will come back to read your book again. As long as Minato is not dead, you can still push the plot. If Minato is not dead, will Uchiha Obito make another move? Then Danzo was unwilling to lose power and he did things, and then Orochimaru defected, all kinds of things. What will happen if there is watergate? These can all be written. And if it is written like this. I think a lot of people will find it interesting and want to watch it. These things can all be written.

I'm so stupid. If you put Kushina into Uchiha Haruko's space, Obito can still channel Kyuubi through space? It's because the seal is loosened that you can have a chance to channel, so you have to kill someone in a plot?

There are two guaranteed updates for new books every issue, and three updates after they are released. After the release of the monthly ticket, there will be one update for every 1,000+ monthly tickets, and then there will be one update for every 300+ monthly tickets. I haven't decided how to decide how much reward to add to the reward. Do you have any friends who can give me some advice? Although giving rewards may be more of a delusion... Thanks for the support | ू•ૅω•́)ᵎᵎᵎ

The protagonist performs a series of mind-blowing operations. Ox.

It would be too embarrassing to just follow the plot. It would be okay if you weren't so hung up on it. It's like a son-in-law story. You have to wait for a three-year appointment?

If your mentality breaks down, just become a eunuch! ! ! ! ! ! !

I couldn't stand the second picture at the beginning. Your parents are still laughing after they are dead, you idiot. What on earth is his name? Is it a man or a woman? Why not call her Li Jinlian? It's such a girly name.

At the time of the Nine-Tails Rebellion, it's not like I look down on Muye, so don't pick anyone who can beat Susana. Together, can they beat Susana? ? The three generations of Five Dragons didn't even have to fight, right?

I can't even understand the title of the book😅😅😅

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It's not fun to read without thinking, self-interested article?

Can you please stop with the conspiracy theories? 😥 I can't read Naruto's novels now, and conspiracy theories are rampant