There's Something Wonderful About This Red Building!

The author also wants to make the protagonist so awesome that he even dares to violate the imperial edict, but also subconsciously suppresses the protagonist and makes the protagonist humble in front of the Jia family. Jia Jing proposes marriage, but he is clearly unwilling and obeys his parents' orders to find a matchmaker. Such a serious separation is the reason why you can't continue writing.

I made some kind of soul network... It suddenly became a drama, and I couldn't stand it anymore.

The inexplicable Heart Soul Network, the plot is all driven by the addition of new hooks, first the MC, then a beauty record, and then the Heart Soul Network, and it is a hook that does not appear unexpectedly at all, and even if it is a cheat, this hook will automatically spread to the public so that even people who cannot reach it can use it without the protagonist's permission in advance, which is outrageous.

Everything else is easy to talk about. It's inexplicable that the girls wrote so many scenes in the original version. It's too toxic. I came here to see the plot of Red Mansions. If I want to see the original version, I'll look for the urban harem novel. Can't I read it?

When I was resisting the imperial edict, I talked about cutting off the fate of the world, but when I arrived at the Jia Mansion, it was a completely different story. The contrast between the protagonists' personalities was too great, and the sense of separation was too strong. I hate reading novels like this. People who read them are disgusting and uncomfortable.

Why did you suddenly add a plot about the Tatar invasion? It has no beginning and no end. If this was the case in the original work, why would Master Jia, a cultivator of immortality, be dead?

It feels awkward when I read it, and it feels a little bit neither good nor good. It doesn't read smoothly, and it's awkward. The author should pay more attention to the details. 70% Of the whole story is the protagonist's inner dialogue, and there are very few plot dialogues.

I wanted to write about my own method, so I went back to Jia's house to lick it, exposing my weakness and being poisonous.

It was okay in the beginning, but since the author changed the identity of the protagonist to a prince, it became boring. It becomes even more boring when it directly turns into spiritual energy recovery later on.

The protagonist is really awesome. He was attacked by others at his doorstep and the country was immediately destroyed. Yet he is still intoxicated with himself. He is quite outstanding.

There are too many elements, and the writing is different.

It was just nonsense. After reading a few chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore and left.

It's better for a woman to unlock a formula, and she'll definitely be the one to do it.

I saw the whole thing about the foreigners attacking the capital and stopped watching it. Did you see the one with high poison resistance at the back?

Pig's Foot is really a retarded and imbecile person

Haha, it's fake again. Written this way, it's probably a eunuch.

MC is a little short

The writing is too messy and there is no main line.

It's not 20 million, it's 35 million

I have no idea what I am writing, it seems like a running account

Damn it, is it so difficult to renovate the two houses? Isn't it just the old lady asking her to rectify it? Just collect the evidence and tell her that the whole capital is watching the Jia family's joke. Are you watching her rectify it?

Can I read this book? ? Is grass jelly still a poisonous weed?

Update anytime. Hurry up. One picture a day is not enough.