Hogwarts Snakes

This is a good Harry Potter fanfic. The male protagonist does not lick Lao Deng or Harry Potter. It is good to watch the male protagonist grow up step by step, with flesh and blood, and a clear distinction between love and hate. However, the author is a little too emotional about Harry Potter and Ron (although Hermione was unhappy with Ron in the end), but the whole book is quite well written. As long as there are no jumps in the back, this book will be among the best in the Harry Potter fanfic series.

In fact, Hermione's character is not lovable. So many heroines choose Hermione because they are greedy for Emma's body!

The character of the protagonist is a bit unlikable. There is no need to be so hostile to Harry Potter and the others. At most, it's better not to have more contact with them. It's a bit too weird for you to hate someone after they've just met you once. I hope it can be improved in the future.

I personally don't think Harry is that annoying in the early stages, but after being with Ron for a long time, he starts to look a bit like Ron. To be honest, Ron, from the first time he laughed at the surname Malfoy when I watched the movie, I didn't like him, he was uneducated and rude (if someone suddenly pops up next to you when you introduce yourself) Then there was a burst of laughter, what do you think, anyway, I think this person is rude) ride a car in the back, the Whomping Willow, Peter, Goblet of Fire, jealous of Harry, but I have forgotten most of the content of the novel, don't tell me that you are still a child and don't understand anything, what about the back, the further back I get, the more disgusting I am

The eunuch is not scary, the scary thing is that the author doesn't speak 😶

Comparing Pansy Later Rowling said that her appearance was too good and she changed to another one Not satisfied with the order of the Phoenix and she changed again One was uglier than the other. The author Rowling said that Pansy gathered the girls she hated most into one, so she didn't want her to get married to Draco. In real life, when the first generation Pansy grows up, her appearance is as good as Emma's (I think)

I searched through Flourish and Blotts Bookstore, but I couldn't find any works edited by the author in 2020, so I just burned the bookstore with a fire spell. Brothers, did I do the right thing?

Since you hate Ron, then don't write any plot about him, just ignore it. Otherwise, what you write will be disturbing, and what we will read will also be disturbing, and you can't kill Ron.

Is this the curse of HP fans? The author will inevitably enter the palace

I like snakes. I feel that snakes are quite gentle and sensitive. Non-venomous snakes are easy to stroke, but venomous snakes are tense and exciting. The snakes feel silky and not slimy at all. Generally, smaller snakes don't have all their teeth. They can't bite you even if you put your fingers in the snake's mouth. When you encounter a non-venomous snake, you don't need to grab it hard. When you hold it gently, the snake will not be nervous and will not attack you. There are venomous snakes that are a bit scary when you hold them. They only dare to let go after a rough stroke. If the snake does not show aggression, just hold the head and release the body first, and then slowly release the head. If the snake is a little excited, you can press the snake's head on the ground and press the head with a wooden stick while releasing the tail, or just drop the snake while the snake is not paying attention. Larger snakes need to be careful not to let it wrap around the neck. Use two hands to support the snake's head and tail on your shoulders to make it less likely to be strangled. These are my many years of experience in handling snakes and are suitable for ordinary people.

I don't reject that the heroine is Hermione, but please don't attack such a young child... It feels really disgusting to have an adult soul in your body and attack such a young child. Even if you want to separate Hermione from the two little masters who seek death, you can still use the identity of a close brother. If the heroine is destined to be Hermione, it is entirely possible that the relationship between brother and sister is purely admirable in the early stage, and then deteriorates later. The current description of Hermione is inconsistent with her age, making the love scene with Hermione very embarrassing and taking up too much space. I still hope to see more descriptions of other aspects in the early stage. Please think carefully about the age of these children. Premature puberty is not the way to go.

Let's py each other 😏, (a wretched smile gradually emerges) We are all HP fan fiction authors, so we can exchange feelings with each other

There's a problem. The new student's subsidy is 10 gold, and a full set of clothes costs 15 gold. You can use old clothes, but you can't use old wands. Hermione's wand is considered an ordinary wand, which costs 12 gold. So what's the point of the Hogwarts subsidy? Those orphans still can't afford to go to school...

When I saw the first flying lesson, I really wanted to complain. The author really took it for granted that the fifth-grade sidekick in the Snake Yard could actually cast evil spells without a wand and interfere with the broom. . Can a fifth grade extra do this? What else is there to compete with? To put it bluntly, the grades five, six, and seven of the two academies facing each other are better than chanting a spell. Such ability is obviously at the professor level and only a strong one among professors can achieve it.

Stop falling in love with Hermione and let her go.

Is the author still alive...?] Do you have any other Harry Potter fans to recommend?

Malfoy is even less likable. I don't believe that many people who have read movies or novels like Malfoy.