The Transcendent Reviver

The pacing is off; the focus should be on the protagonist's progression and strengthening. What's being written now doesn't feel like the build-up and rise before the official launch, but rather like a filler story about daily life before the launch.

Now everyone's tired of mechanical and martial arts aesthetics; they all have telekinesis, magic, and supernatural abilities. They just keep targeting external objects and the physical body.

Your concept is way too similar to that of the legendary mechanic, it's outrageous!