Because I Am Afraid of Death, I Work Hard to Become Stronger

More detailed descriptions can flesh out the characters and develop the plot in detail. The author wants to write cool articles for non-novices, but to be honest, this kind of book is not suitable for new authors. 1. Most new readers like to read Xiaobai Shuang's novels. They can't understand or appreciate the detailed characterization of your characters. Your rich descriptions of the environment are troublesome to them, and your complicated plots are a headache to them. In short, in the eyes of newcomers, you are just filling in the garbage. Old bookworms are generally older and have less time. They can't see that you are not famous. 2. More detailed descriptions require stronger skills. If you are not skilled enough, or the plot is awkward, or the plot is full of nonsense 3. Even if you are skilled enough, but there are too many detailed descriptions, the plot will be slow. If you follow it every day, the plot will not progress. Many people will choose to keep books, and they may be killed after finishing the book. . 4. Moreover, if you don't update enough, you will be criticized by others. In other words, if you want to write non-novice articles, you need to update 10,000 per day (but non-novices are more difficult to write than novices) As an old bookworm, I really hope to see more cool articles by non-novices, but for new authors, it is best not to touch them. Many plots are a bit awkward, for example, the protagonist takes 1 penny and throws it at the shopkeeper. . Unless you have foreshadowed it, this shopkeeper is greedy for money and will not let go of any money, otherwise it will be too embarrassing. You go to the store, take 10 yuan, and hit the hotel manager? 😥

On the importance of backing, how important it is.

Is the protagonist's luck value a negative number? Although the protagonist did not suffer any loss, there were too many things happening and they happened too frequently. I met a wolf when I was resurrected. I went into a city and was blackmailed. I went to buy clothes and was tricked. I came out to eat and was tricked into cheating money. I went to practice martial arts and was blackmailed and tricked again. This protagonist must be poisonous. You won't meet a normal person wherever you go.

Author, have you become like this before it is published? I really can't stand it. The pig's feet are either stealing money or on the way to stealing money. Think about your writing.

Author, please change the title of the book to Let's Seek Death. Is the protagonist afraid of death?

To compare, is there a system? Or is it a time traveler, Ni Ma, who went to a clothing store to show off to a waiter?

Every time you give me money, you have to say something like, "Check it out"... If it's "water", it doesn't matter, but if you write it like this, you'll feel like you're in poverty, and you'll feel like you're poor to the core.

This is too poorly written, and the story is so cliche. I wrote five pictures of a subplot about buying clothes. I even looked at your homepage. Another book of yours only had a recommendation of 10,000. No wonder it's so bad.

Use 50 chapters to write the content of someone else's 10 chapters. It's already 50 chapters.

The protagonist must at least have a soul for black boxing. Why is he so childish when things happen? He feels quite proud of being deceived. . .

In reality, the author is afraid that he has only three hands

What a waste of water. I didn't start practicing until Chapter 34. What I wrote earlier is so long and verbose. I just wrote about whether the protagonist should nap while sleeping and how many times he naps in a night.

Don't read the one written by The Water King at the Starting Point. It's endless nonsense throughout the entire process, and it only barely includes the details of the protagonist going to the toilet.

🙂Because I want to become stronger, I work hard to steal

Reality can't survive more than three chapters of stuff

At the beginning, he overestimated his abilities and challenged the underground black boxers, and then he pretended to be a slap in the face (ー_ー)!! It can only be said that the poison is naturally strong deep down.

You are so verbose! Can't stand it

This routine is disgusting! I don't know how old the author is, but the way you write is really looking for death!

Does the author like stealing so much?

This writing makes no sense. Not recommended for viewing. The protagonist and everyone else's IQs are not online. The owner of the clothing store and his waiter were so confused that they went to the restaurant to serve all the dishes again for the four cents reward. All the diners in the restaurant were concerned that the janitor had lost his wallet. When I saw this, I immediately abandoned the book and advised everyone not to read it.

What a talent. He has more than 100 chapters of plug-ins and is still a waste. He should just stay in the martial arts gym until he dies. He looks so tired.

What kind of thing is written here, what kind of nose is it?

It's just a short story. He can write two or three hundred chapters about things that others can explain in twenty or thirty chapters. His writing style is also poor. The poison test is completed.

Don't read the one written by The Water King at the Starting Point. It's endless nonsense throughout the entire process, and it only barely includes the details of the protagonist going to the toilet.

This is the most watery book I have ever read

Why are they all dialogue? It's so boring and watery.

I originally wanted to read a cool novel, but I ended up reading a whole 30 chapters. As for the plot, you can call it ridiculous, but others should follow the normal rules. But it's too complicated, so complicated that it's annoying. There is also the skill, which is almost enough. You can steal wherever you go, even if you don't even know it. The problem is that it has already started to spread, or is it just the kind of stealing that you want. Many things feel like a lot of this move, you have already spent money to enter the martial arts gym, right? You should learn a serious skill first. Good guy, in the blink of an eye, he stole the money back again, and even stole the martial arts knowledge from having dinner together. Is there any brain in this? Everyone can fucking know that he stole it. At first, the guard just tolerated the theft, but in the end, there was no end to it, and what he stole was no different from junk. I already have enough money, but I end up stealing endlessly. I originally wanted to talk about it in detail, but alas, there is absolutely no brain drain.

I've written more than 200 chapters and I'm still talking about it. I'm convinced.

You can steal unlimited money with ten cards at the beginning. The author usually does a lot of battery cars, so he wrote it in such a fun way.

You can write about thirty or forty fucking pieces about joining a martial arts school. You are so damn good. You must be the starting water king. The whole process was stressful, where could the relaxation come from? It seems like there are no good people in the whole world. This author definitely has an anti-human personality and should be pulled out and shot.