Everything Has a Quality

Did I miss it? Or is there something wrong with the author? The previous text does not match the following. Starting from about twenty chapters, it became messy and disorganized. It felt like copying and pasting to create paragraphs.

The subject matter is good, but your writing feels average and fails to highlight your strengths.

It's quite sad. The Japanese RPGs I read earlier had the protagonist either lose his memory or have all his friends die. In the end, he defeated the big boss, but it felt meaningless. There was usually no good ending in the end. Nowadays, this kind of books are not very popular, especially in male videos.

I feel like the more you write, the more boring you become. Knight-kun has come out, when will Oni-chan come out? ? ? Aren't they all called Lord Knight? ? ?

Are you sure this is a novel? Why does it feel like a script from a Japanese comic? The plot line and even the jumps are the same as those in the anime. Is the author writing a novel imitating anime? You can watch anime with your eyes, so it doesn't matter how you jump. Isn't it strange that you wrote a novel in this way? Life in another world cooperates with the time-traveling protagonist and a harem team.

Why do you feel like the protagonist's character collapsed after ten chapters? From a time traveler to the person whose body was taken away by the time traveler?? ? Mentality, thinking, logic, everything has changed =_=

In today's novels, it's fine if the parents are dead. Could it be that he is an only child, either a younger sister or an older sister, fuck?

It's well written, and I have the desire to continue reading. I want to continue reading only after I understand what it's about. (I don't want to deal with those who want to come here to complain. After all, the writing is really messy)

What's going on? Why did it change so suddenly starting from Chapter 24? It's simply a sudden change in style, and some of the prefaces don't match the postscripts. I couldn't understand where the terrain was. I said that the things I encountered seemed familiar and the roads were also familiar. But I haven't seen it before

It gave me a headache. Why do I keep skipping the plot? Many points are lost in one sentence, and then they are fast-forwarded. It's so simple.