A Twisted Take on Mysterious Revival

In fact, according to the background setting of Mysterious Resurrection, the ancient gods should be deified ghost controllers. The so-called heaven and underworld should be the names of the ghost controller organizations. The magic weapons should be supernatural objects, and the so-called demons and monsters are ghosts. These background settings were discussed with Buddha in the Q group when he first wrote the novel Mysterious Resurrection.

Under the condition of equal development, regardless of other factors, just talking about the ghost itself, ghosts are invincible in a single fight. Do you have any objections?

What will happen if Huangquan has a hatchet? !

Gui Chai is different from other ghosts. Even if he is completely successful in gestation, he can only suppress one ghost without any solution. If the number of Gui Chai is not increased, he cannot suppress Feng Quan. At this time, Feng Quan is lying in the coffin with two ghosts, and Gui Chai cannot return to the coffin. It is impossible for him to succeed in nurturing, and at this time A ghost master who has not controlled a ghost in this period of time came to Huanggang Village. Even if he was successfully conceived, he could not deal with Feng Quan. In the original work, the ghost master obtained the number to suppress other ghosts. He obtained it when he and five or six ghost masters investigated the Huanggang Village incident in Yangjian. During this period, there was no ghost master at all. At the headquarters ghost master During the incident, Gui Cha was conceived and initially obtained the number of three ghosts to suppress. This was because Wang Xiaoming made the three ghosts into fake coffins and drove them into Gui Cha's body. Because the Gui Cha incident was out of control, Gui Cha started to have the number to suppress three ghosts. You regarded Gui Cha as the protagonist, but you did not study the characteristics of Gui Cha. , And the other thing is that the ghost realm of ghosts is very scary. Yang Jian, who was suppressed at his peak, dare not open his ghost eyes. The fact that Yang Jian's fifth-level ghost realm can invade ghost realms does not mean that the fifth-level ghost realm is stronger than ghost realms of ghosts. Invasion only means that he has the capital to fight. In addition, Yang Jian is an Arrancar. If he is really that strong, he will be suppressed.

To be honest, there is no comparison with the original work. In the original work, ghosts cannot communicate, and the appearance of a ghost in the original work will bring a strong sense of oppression. Yang Jian has to constantly wander between life and death, looking for a glimmer of hope. Your book is completely a fantasy novel. It feels like it is a completely different system from the original work. Moreover, the protagonist of this book gave me the feeling that he became stronger just to become stronger. After I couldn't stand it anymore, I couldn't help but post it.

I think this book should be renamed Mysterious Resurrection, and the horror supernatural story should be changed into a fantasy fairy tale. The text has no tension, the plot is too cliché, and it does not create any sense of horror in a horror world.

The horror level of the mummy bride! ! !

Meng Xue prototype?

I have a lot to say. I don't know where to start. Let's go through it one by one 1. First of all, I understand the difficulty of the author's creation. We are all mystical recovery book friends. It's a good thing for the author to write a fan. But everyone knows the general environment of the site. Lao Fo's books now don't dare to have a horror atmosphere. The description of the world background is too fucked up. The author must be the same. A wave of sympathy. 2 I very much support the original content of this book. However, you should still be cautious when changing the settings of the original book. "If there are too many magical changes, it won't be considered a fandom. It wouldn't be good to just start a new one." In this book, it is really unacceptable that the old monk's supernatural power can affect gold. This directly subverts the setting of the original book. The human skin paper coming out of the golden box is also a method of physical destruction. I hope the author can change this. 3. The author did not fully understand the ghosts' abilities in the original book, which led to many plots that readers were confused by after reading it. For example, ghosts battle starving ghosts. Logically speaking, the book mentions that the current ghosts are equivalent to the ghosts after Dajing was conceived. Then facing the hungry ghosts must be inextricable and suppressed, and there is no way to come back. The same goes for the Mummy Bride battle. The only explanation for not being able to win is that the author weakened the ghost. Ghost's ability is the foundation of this book. If the foundation is not laid, the subsequent plot and story will appear illogical. Ps: The ghost body is a coffin-shaped ghost realm. Its basic ability is to suppress and absorb without any solution when facing any ghost whose number is lower than or equal to the ghost. After absorption, the number of suppression is increased, and the ability of the absorbed person can be used. (The author's own weakened part is to add a limit on the degree of terror to Gui Cha. However, all the horror levels are not worth mentioning in front of Gui Cha 🤫)   4 bug Before Yang Jian went to Huanggang Village, Gui Cha could not get Feng Quan out of the coffin. It is understandable that if you want to be invincible at the beginning according to the title of the book, you have to go back to the coffin to give birth. It is understandable that the author forced the ghost to not be finished in order to add settings later. According to the original book, Yang Jian comes to solve Huanggang Village at the beginning. No matter how it is written, returning to the coffin is the result of being taken away for research. So I just let the ghosts take Feng Quan away by themselves to save worry. But I am lazy. I have a suggestion, why not add a few pictures in front of it and write a book. The process of the protagonist Huang Quan accidentally entering Huanggang Village and becoming a ghost. By the way, I can also explain the original character "she" in the author's mouth. It will appear less abrupt later. In summary, this bug is that the author is lazy or just writes without thinking.         5          （）（ Enemy) If you participate in the meta-plot and don't change it, you just go sideways and beat it casually. You can only write original plots. But here comes the problem. The author's original plot basically has no core story line, which makes the content of the book seem scattered. It is scattered here and there. The plot is not compact. I hope the author can sort out the main context of the next book. Otherwise, readers will read it too confusingly. (The latest chapter may be a turning point, with the protagonist driving a bus as the axis, and writing a plot at a stop.) The above are the opinions and suggestions given to the author as an old Buddhist book friend about this book. Looking at this book from another angle as a reader, the advantages are obvious compared to other fan fiction. This book has an extremely rough outline (or it is a creation based on the ghost story background. I want to believe that the author has an outline, I hope.) The disadvantages are equally obvious. As a fan novel, the setting of the original book has been changed, the plot setting is unreasonable, there are obvious bugs, and the plot is messy. But I still hope that the author can finish it well. After all, there are too few wonderful books like Mysterious Resurrection. It would be nice to write a fan story for book friends to discuss and make it lively. The current writing environment is too harsh. It's hard to say whether there will be something like Terror Resurrection in the future.

In the name of magic reform, you are trying to sell something like a sheep over someone else's head. The author is very self-indulgent and writes in a mess. You are pretending to be a fan of the mysterious revival, and you actually become a fantasy fairy. So why don't you write an original article yourself? Maybe you know that no one will read it🤭🤭🤭. When the world view and setting of the original work are complete, it can also be written into a plot where the protagonist is like traveling without purpose. It is amazing 👍👍👍