Perfect Life in the Film and Television Plane

To be honest, this book was really good to read at the beginning, and it was not bad, but it also had some poisonous points. The poisonous points are as follows: First: Breaking the Boundary Jade Wall came out of nowhere, giving people a feeling of being plotted against! Second: In the mythical world, the person who was refining the elixir of life (forgot his name) saw that the protagonist was not from the mythical world! This is disgusting. What's even more disgusting is that the alchemist told Pig's Feet that the main world where Pig's Feet is located is in great catastrophe... The third point is what I think is the poisonous point: causing trouble in the main world to justify the spread of martial arts. Beat the pig's feet and you'll get a small goal as a reward! These are a few poisonous points that I think ~ represent only my personal opinion! Hope it won't be deleted🙂

The part about the Qin Dynasty was well written, but Master Cui's instant transformation into an immortal was a bit awkward. The plot included a crisis hole in the main world that was difficult to bury. In modern times, it won't work so well and you can write less about the main world. But speaking of True Blood Romance, it really doesn't fit (this may be the sentiment in some people's hearts), it's like something messy dropped into a glass of wine.

Invisible Guardian

To be honest, don't write about Marvel, it will stretch your crotch, really don't write about Marvel, I have never seen Infinite Flow written well! Very serious advice, don't write, don't write, don't write, say important things three times.

Can the person who refines the elixir of immortality predict disasters in different worlds regardless of his cultivation level? Why couldn't Qin Shihuang take immortality medicine? Qin Shihuang's death alone could not change the catastrophe of another world. How could he change it? Also, what kind of catastrophe does the author want to write about that can affect the whole world? Earthquake? Volcano? Tsunami? Virus outbreak? Not to mention spiritual energy recovery, world fusion, etc., The writing is so bad that the protagonist can travel through the world and the boss who wants to invade the world can't? Not to mention that anyone can predict the catastrophe in the future, but the intruder can't predict it? It seems that what you wrote earlier is quite good. When I was writing it, I thought about whether it was reasonable and hoped to change it ,

Bloody Romance, this aspect of writing is too slow. If you want to write about war, then write about a specific anti-war plane. Originally, bloody romantic TV dramas are not written about war. They are just to make up the word count. Just like some TV dramas can be completed in one episode, but if they have to be delayed for 2-3 episodes, readers will only watch less and less.

Yu Ji

To be honest, the movie Zhutian stream is not interesting whether it is the evolution stream, immortal cultivation stream, martial arts stream, system stream, superpower stream, or copy stream. Too many of the same type. It is recommended to write and experience life as a stream to make up for all the regrets in the world. Don't write about Marvel series, Superman series, anime series, Young and Dangerous, science fiction, etc. Not interesting. Write about classic movies such as "The Shawshank Redemption", "The Godfather", "Springtime in the Cowherd", etc. Of course, this all tests your writing skills.

Why is he a fat man again? Every protagonist has a fat man beside him, and the protagonist's unprincipled generosity will only make him alienated from his family. Are you testing human nature? Dig out the hidden greed and selfishness in the bones of those around you? Haven't you ever heard the saying that brothers settle scores?

😁😁Is it because I read too fast or something? The effect of time travel has not yet come out. In my personal opinion, writing about Qin should be more iron-blooded. It is not interesting to save Ji. Isn't it uncomfortable to fight? Of course, this is just a personal opinion. In fact, it is mainly about the scholars in it. These modern languages appear in this system. The author may have been reconciling some content, but looking at the drama, The Qin Dynasty's Iron Blood is enough. It's wonderful to be able to write about this. Personal opinion

I came in several times and saw the protagonist's character card with funny attributes, but I didn't continue to click on the book! This kind of novel that travels through ancient times is just not stable and immature enough to be useful! !

The author always has the ability to write a plot until it is unbearable, and wait for the new plot

A bloody romance turned into a war movie, I'll give you a thumbs up

Writing bloody romance is the biggest failure at the moment

To be honest, I can write about previous hit dramas later, such as this year (only 30), (Ordinary Glory), and there were dramas that left a deep impression on me in the past (Mr. Good), (Yu Huanshui), etc. Now that I'm getting older, I haven't watched many TV dramas. I just watched clips occasionally, and I have an impression of these dramas after watching the clips.

Just look at what happened to Gao Yao who traveled with Yi Xiaochuan, and you will know what happened to people without status in the Qin Dynasty.

😰Tell the truth. The First Emperor is dead. What you wrote in the first volume is completely meaningless. If the First Emperor did not take the elixir of immortality, the world would not change at all. You go to that world to have a ball.

The more I write, the more I get off topic! The story about plane life is now written as a post-apocalyptic version of cultivating immortals. The more I write, the less interesting it becomes.

Author, what you wrote in Da Qin is really good. It's a pity that the twist in the main world is too vicious. You, a prince of the Qin Dynasty, relied on military industry to fight. Qin Shihuang has served you, but you are nervous when you see a bad general? There is really no need to write a bloody romance. If you write it, it will feel a bit paradoxical. I hope your next copy can capture the feeling of Da Qin

Let's change the name to: The Legend of Dog Licking in the Heavens

It feels like the author is just overdoing it. . . In my impression, heavy armored cavalry are the ancient rich and handsome, the armor is high-tech, the horse is like a dragon colt, and everyone is invincible. The battle tends to be positional warfare, and the march has pack horses carrying human armor and vests. On the battlefield, I am invincible, and I instantly become the focus of attention as soon as I appear on the scene. . . It turned out that the heavy armor of the pig's feet was used as a bait, and it could travel thousands of miles, and the light cavalry was fooled around. . . Heavy armor, men and horses all have physical limitations. Can five thousand men and horses really do this? Is a light cavalry more suitable for this task? It always feels illogical. . .

The writing is good, but I don't like the content. The world story is long and does not attribute great power to itself.

System recommended. . . Click on the 5th eunuch

Can't you continue writing? If not, why don't you make a statement?

The writing style is sophisticated, the content is novel, and the book is well completed.

Blood romance, are there any other novels in this world that are better written? Gentlemen, please take care of yourself.

Boss, come and have a big river!

The part about Da Qin was pretty good, but as soon as I saw the person who became an immortal cultivator in the end, I gave up on it.

Why don't you write it? The writing is very good

I read this kind of novel myself, where I am becoming stronger inside you, but I am pretending to be cool in reality. I might as well just watch the TV series while I keep writing plots.