A Perfect Journey to the Film and Television Plane

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The author is great, this book is quite good except for the part where An Ran and the protagonist start dating, which is a bit intellectual. Why don't the author try to revise it? Those chapters were a bit too brainless, really.

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The writing is okay. After all, the author has served in the military, so it will be much more realistic than others. However, the writing power is still weak, which leads to the meaning of running accounts. Moreover, the author relies too much on the plot. I have never watched these TV series. What the author wrote earlier was discovered when he traveled through time. If the author loses control later on, he can weaken this, or just change it. Later, he only mentioned the TV movie about being a soldier. After all, he only mentioned a few sentences. And from what I can see now, it won't have any connection with the others. After all, there are so many chapters here that haven't been published 😁 This is also my personal suggestion. This is the first book to practice writing, and I will consider continuing this theme or other themes later!                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        ​.

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It's not easy to write fanfiction. There are 6.7 Books about soldiers. This one is the best and the most satisfying one is Chengcai. Others write about Chengcai and are selfish because they have read too much. This book has changed Chengcai. It's really good. No one has the right to say Chengcai because you may not be as good as him. Come on, I recommend it to you

I just looked at two of them, and when I open my mouth or shut it down, it's all bad. Who would talk about it if they have two tricks in their hands? The protagonist written by the author wishes he could have a few big words plastered on his forehead: I know Baji. 🙂

The number is too low. Let's try fattening up the bookshelf first.

Where is the Anti-Japanese War? Where is the American Manga? This is the end of the book. The author is a liar. No explanation.

Can I go? The Adventures of Jackie Chan, the world, get the eight evil spirits, 12 charms, the Lotus Temple's charms, the armor of the immortal god, the Eye of Aurora, the magical bracelet, the unlucky emerald, and ten masks

After watching it in one sitting, there is only one thing that makes me uncomfortable, that is the plot! Copy the plot! It can be seen that the author is adding his own things, but it still feels like it cannot be separated from the normal TV plot. Why is this happening? The flight of a butterfly can cause a storm. The plot has not changed with such a big variable for the protagonist. This makes people feel boring and boring. The full text is relatively smooth so far, and the plot is also very rich. In fact, An Ran's characterization is too little, but I am afraid that the author will not be able to write emotional drama. Novel without rich emotional drama will not have a sense of substitution and immersion. It's a book that can be read by anyone, it's considered rough food. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

Write about this topic well and don't let down everyone's expectations.

😰 The writing is pretty good, but the author, the protagonist, has been practicing Bajiquan for more than ten years. I feel that the physical fitness of the protagonist is only that of an ordinary person. So why do you write that he is the descendant of Bajiquan at the beginning 😒😒😒😒😒😒

The 400,000-word completed book actually appeared on the homepage recommendation...

It's not interesting to write about special forces. There are too many restrictions in the country. It's hard to finish even if you cross the dotted line.

The military journey is too long! Serious enough to recall the hard work of military training

The boss is awesome, the younger brother comes to worship! Already rewarded. By the way, make an advertisement🤓

It's already 380,000 words, and you're still in the military. According to your introduction, how many thousand words will it take to get to Marvel?

Don't even know who the protagonist of this book is? Xu Sanduo or Li Zhiqing? I don't know how the author writes the outline? Can't an 18-year-old Bajiquan beat a special forces soldier? Haha... It's still a Bajiquan family! In the chapter where he fights Yuan Lang, Xu Sanduo shines better than the protagonist? Is this a novel? Is this obviously a TV series? Then we still think your novel is of some use?

Author 😆 Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Come on, it has been collected, please add more |･ω･｀)

It's okay so far. Does the author have a detailed outline plan for traveling through the world? Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

There are too many science popularizations in the early stage, which affects the viewing. It is so detailed that I have to doubt the word count Especially the golden chapters in the early stage Looking at the advertisement placed by the author next door, it seems to be an infinite time-travel flow? The main focus is on the military, so you have to write about military feelings. After reading all the chapters, it is a bit of a running story. Half of the words about the army have been removed from the small number of words. There is really nothing hard to read. I hope the author thinks more and better

The content is substantial and the emotions are rich, keep up the good work

When will the author release a new book?

Is this the end? In fact, I think it was quite refreshing to write, and it didn't seem draggy. It's a bit of a pity. Come on, author! Another new book📖📖📖📖📖📖!

Why am I still investing in new books after finishing this book?

It's very well written, it's a pity, really

As for the plot behind, it's just this world

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