Global Reincarnation: Teammates Offer Sacrifices to Heaven with Boundless Mana

The first part was okay, but the second part was completely unbearable. What was it written about? Author, you are really not suitable for writing novels. Stop harming others. I, the Shennong, will be poisoned to death by you.

If you start too high, it will collapse easily. Choose fan fiction to gain popularity but lack creativity. I was so disgusted by the choice of Ninja Village that I even brought it out. Choose three worlds to fight in a team, and the team will easily collapse. What was originally a good opening idea probably collapsed very quickly. After skipping the Ninja Village and watching the fourth volume, I felt that the image of my teammates was not as full as the image of Bo Chang at the beginning, and basically collapsed. . . What a pity. . .

Do all books with colons like this crazily overdraw the future?

Yes, there are very few reincarnation novels written about Gao Wu. If you continue to write at this level, you will definitely be sure.

Very well written. No more eunuchs.

When I saw in the introduction that all my teammates were resurrected after completing the mission, I didn't want to watch it. . .

I hope there won't be a heroine. Writing about a heroine is likely to get worse, and the main reason is that the heroine is often useless except as a drag, and the emotional scenes are embarrassing for no reason. I've seen a lot of them like this. It's easy to be toxic, and if you can't write it, don't write it. If you have the skills, you can give it a try. Of course, I personally prefer novels without a heroine, and more people now like novels without a heroine.

After deleting the small account, did you think of the large account again? 🤓

After reading this book, I also read the author's Life of All Worlds, See You Again, both are good.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I feel more and more boring. First of all, no matter how strong the protagonist is in the world of reincarnation, he will be knocked back to his original shape when he returns to the real world and needs to practice again. Secondly, and the most poisonous point, the protagonist keeps practicing and practicing, and he looks completely different. First of all, It's the training system of the Galaxy Emperor, and then it's the Global High Martial Arts. Later, I want to create my own system. It's a mess. At the end, I don't even know what realm the protagonist is in. It's just a replica of Saitama. Even if the protagonist one day, as a mortal, punches to death the most worthy ancient saint, I will believe it.

This is the first time that I have seen the protagonist hiding and then continuing to follow the story of the supporting characters in the copy for dozens of chapters. Is there no other way to think about it? To be honest, what I originally wanted to see was the protagonist taking advantage of his familiarity with the plot to sacrifice his teammates in a fancy way. This would be more interesting, but now it has become a saga. I can barely watch it continuously. Once I catch up on the update, I probably won't be interested in reading it anymore.

To be honest, although the author is racking his brains and writing seriously, he always dwells on unimportant things. Instead, important scenes and plots are skipped. For example, the part where Jiang Han defeated the Emperor of Heaven was originally supposed to add many adjectives to describe Jiang Han's power at this time, but the author just It was an ordinary crush, and I didn't see how shocked and horrified the other strong men were afterwards. It was just a simple brushstroke, and it was not as grand as the scene when the Emperor of Heaven appeared. Although the appearance of the Emperor of Heaven was not well described, at least there was a broken space and hugepalm. Writing requires practice. Although it will be troublesome at the beginning, such as checking the novel you have written and then revising it, and paying attention to the smoothness and format of the words, but once the writing style is finalized in the middle and late stages of writing, you no longer need to hone your writing style, and you can just write whatever you want to write. ps: The plot and setting of the novel are getting better and better, but the writing style is really flawed. I hope it can get better in the future. By the way, if the author doesn't know how to write about fighting, he can refer to the fighting content in other novels and then roughly imitate it. After writing more, he will naturally write it. The same goes for other content. Once you write it, you will know how to write it.

Tasteless to eat, a pity to throw away, tasteless, tasteless

Haha, there is no feeling of reincarnation space at all, and all teammates are resurrected, how can I reincarnate in Charity Hall?

Will the author next be Naruto? Just stop writing Japanese comics. After all, the martial arts you wrote earlier are only available to readers of the martial arts and fantasy genre. If you are writing Japanese comics, you will either skip reading them or they will be removed. It is recommended that you go directly to Gaowu World

Because some of the world's most talented martial artists watched it, but after watching it, there was nothing interesting to watch. There are too many loopholes in the basic settings. First of all, the real identity cannot be kept secret, and there are also a lot of villains and national enemies. The idea of ​​going to school is nonsense, what on earth do you learn? There is also a system problem, which conflicts with the reincarnation space. In addition to the need for a system, it has basically not been strengthened with reincarnation points, and the author has not said how to use it. System strengthening only leaves some realms without power every time. After reading this, I really don't know what the protagonist wants to pursue. If he wants to improve his power, the best thing to do is not to obtain the system, then pretend to join a cult or abroad, and then directly kill his teammates. After a dozen people, won't he become invincible? What space can't you go to and crush it? Each time, he specially designed to kill his own teammates, and finally resurrected after completing the mission. Of course, this book would be unreadable. The author would also forcibly demote the team to suppress the growth of the protagonist, and then randomly add settings again to limit the growth of the protagonist. However, it was too deliberate, there were more loopholes, and it was even less readable later on.

Holy Mother God, Holy Mother's Golden Finger, three chapters of persuading people to quit, it's so poisonous! As long as one person completes the task, the S person in the reincarnation world can be resurrected for free, and the resurrected person will share the reward equally with the person who completed the task even if they have made no contribution. Change the name of this god to a nursery or a welfare home!

With all due respect, in the first reincarnation, where was the despair? ? It was obviously a slap to death. . After going through such a long circle, he was finally slapped to death? ? ? Is the author trying to contrast cuteness? Do you want to be cute for us? . . .

Author, you are too bad. Take a look at how many scenes the protagonist has been in recently. My personal rating has dropped from over 80 to 60 since this book was put on the shelves. If it is too bad, I will abandon the book.

Then the supporting role of Wang Bochang will not be disgusting to the finale, right? For the protagonist's wall-hanging gameplay, does he still need enemies? Wouldn't it be OK to just arrange a goal to pursue the avenue?

Am I reading the original version of "Global High Martial Arts"? I have been writing about Fang Ping for a few days. What's wrong with Fang Ping? I can't read the original work? Really annoying

The writing is not interesting enough The protagonist is too bland all the way, it is better to change it. It is recommended that the protagonist be like Mr. Pei in "Losing money and becoming a richest man from the beginning of the game". The protagonist made a plan and wanted his teammates to die. As a result, his teammates were resourceful (Dihua 😁) and successfully passed the level. (Or teammates plan to act, and all teammates sacrifice to the sky, but the protagonist pretends to be cool and successfully passes the level) This is the fun, now it is like a clear soup with little water. 😃 Teammate (after clearing the level): Everything is as planned by that adult. Book title "I have always wanted my teammates to sacrifice to heaven, and I became the main god" 🤫

If the resurrection mechanism of the reincarnation space remains unchanged or the system mechanism does not change, then this system will be like a temporary point adder that is better than the plot world, and you will have to work hard to trick your teammates to get temporary blessings! To be honest, it's not fun to be like this all the time. Being in a team with disgusting people can only kill you once in the story world and you will eventually be resurrected and get the same rewards. You know, it's very disgusting. There is no reason to support it! Moreover, this system is written as a semi-waste product, and there is no sense of expectation. Compared with the introduction, there is always a feeling of being deceived, which especially affects the perception of the author!

The creativity is okay, but the hook is too high. Every time a teammate is killed, the strength is doubled. Based on 10, killing 20 teammates directly becomes more than 10 million. If you die ten more, it seems to be more than 20 billion times. No one dares to compile the level like this, and one person has more than one point. Depending on the trust level, it may be given three to four points. At this rate, it is almost enough to kill three copies. 15 Teammates are basically invincible. Even if you don't practice and calculate the hitting power as 200 kilograms, it is still four trillion kilograms. Later, it is equivalent to not taking back all the strength for patching, because as long as one person completes the task, the team will be resurrected, and the resurrection improvement will be gone. No one will like this kind of cheating and various restrictions. It is basically like taking off your pants and farting.

The protagonist's logic is very strange. He doesn't trust the golden finger that comes with him, but he trusts the reincarnation space, a poison-raising thing.

Once a teammate is resurrected, the system enhancement is completely gone. . .

There are very few systematic novels about cultivating the Galaxy Emperor. Are there any others that book friends can recommend?

I've finished watching the first world. Doesn't this reincarnation space have a scoring mechanism? No matter how much you contribute, the final reward is the same?

It's so frustrating, reading your novel has to be bundled with a bunch of other novels. . . It's still all online articles. I'm tired. Let's destroy it.

This book is not bad, but it can be read as a normal time-travel novel. Teammates' sacrifice to heaven is just a gimmick. After passing through two worlds, each world uses its title to recruit a group of tool people to get points. The other reincarnations are directly backgrounded later. In fact, you can read it as a time-travel novel.