The First Immortal in the Prosperous Tang Dynasty

The beginning is well written. After kneeling down, his style suddenly changed. All that was left was to kneel down and lick.

Farewell, your fairy is different from the fairy I think of. The banished immortal you think of is not the same as the banished immortal I grew up with. Kneel down and thank the Lord for your kindness, which is too poisonous. He shouldn't be called an immortal. If he were the number one person in the Tang Dynasty, he might still be able to accept it.

I think the author can give the protagonist a proper hook, such as one with infinite strength. How can he just rely on his lips to bear the name of an immortal?

You've learned dialect for four or five chapters, but you still can't write? Ancient people could read and understand most simplified Chinese characters. I felt quite bored after watching it. Nothing new! Kneel down and lick the text again.

Ah, this No one can really see it No, no, no

The live broadcast of My Datang is not serious, who is the pirate?

The writing style is too childish, there is no plot, no character details, and even the most basic character relationships are a mess. How can a high school student write a composition with enough foreshadowing?

I once felt that the protagonist was a bit frustrated.

The content of the chapter is completely inconsistent with the title of the book! Feeling tired after seeing it

Come around, give the author a big boost

Come on💪, update, it looks good

The preface is incorrect and the postscript is incorrect. Readers are not roundworms in your stomach.

I read a few and passed away. The author's literary talent is so outstanding!

When Li Yuan was about to die, he said that your son was as good as Emperor Qin and Emperor Wu of Han. Didn't that make Li Yuan angry again?