Big Man: I Am the Champion!

When I saw Chapter 50, I couldn't help but say a few words. It was all foreshadowing, bragging about how good the resources the protagonist enjoyed growing up, and how awesome the protagonist was. But in the end, he had 800 cavalry with horse hooves and saddles, and took the initiative to rush into the encirclement of tens of thousands of people? No matter how fierce you are, what can 800 of you do if you are surrounded by tens of thousands of people? Isn't it okay to cause nuisance outside? Isn't it okay to scare the enemy away because they can't distinguish reality from reality? If that doesn't work, you can go to the enemy headquarters.

😪Usually novels of this type are written based on the template of the original character Long Aotian, and Long Aotian can be written as a poor man who lived in Hedong for thirty years and Hexi for thirty years.

You are a 10-year-old child. Liu Che raises you as his own grandson. You spend all day thinking about leaving the palace like a tiger. You are not mentally ill. With the shadow of your cheap father Huo Qubing, you don't want to stay by Liu Che's side. I want to flatter myself, but I still want to go out. What can you do as a 10-year-old when you go out? I ask, why can you go out at the age of 10 and draw all the generals and soldiers who are chasing your father to the north to be under you, right? What about your brain?

800 Cavalrymen rushed into the encirclement. The author is really smart.

If the protagonist wants to rush into battle, the armor should preferably be European plate armor, covering everything from the nose and eyes to the joints and crotch. After all, European plate armor is the pinnacle of cold weapon armor. This is regardless of cost. Plate armor is not suitable for large-scale installation, and once the plate armor is formed, the body shape cannot be changed. After all, this is an iron tortoise shell specially designed according to your body shape. If you are thinner, fatter, or shorter, if your arm span and leg length are different, you will not be able to wear it. Only those who are not short of money like the protagonist can wear it. The steel of the plate armor itself is smelted from relatively mature steel in modern times, and the steel properties are relatively good. Then there is the advantage of the shape of the armor. It is a dome structure, hollow and semicircular. It is best to smooth the surface and apply some oil. When the sword and arrow go up, they don't put force on your armor. It is very likely that the force will not be transmitted to the armor and will slip away. And another advantage of the dome structure is that most of the impact is absorbed by the armor. It's like having a banana under an iron barrel. You must first break the iron barrel before you can damage the banana. There is a gap between the iron barrel and the banana. Our previous armor was too close-fitting. Any attack was transmitted to the human body before the armor absorbed much. After that, the protagonist can study elastic bands, or make them out of bow string materials, using our current construction site helmets as elastic bands. Add elastic bands to the top and bottom of the plate armor. The protagonist will not be afraid even if a blunt object is hit.

Huo Qubing, the greater his achievements, the sooner he will die. If he has an uncle who is so awesome, he still takes the lead, otherwise he will die sooner or later.

I want to see how from Kunlun to the grasslands and then to the Changbai Mountains, the males will be beheaded, the females above the wheel will be killed, and those below the wheel will be made slaves!

I want to see him go on an expedition to ravage foreign nations.

It didn't convey the feeling of high-spirited and talented people. In comparison, being average is mediocre, which is why so many people have read it. Beast-like intuition and earning grand victories are the talents of the champion. So, his heir, the protagonist in your novel, what should he be like, good at fighting but without great achievements? The most elite troops of the 800-strong Han Dynasty. I believe you when you say that you marched 500 miles in one day and beheaded the leader of the Huns' ten thousand cavalry, because you wrote about the descendants of the people who sealed the wolf in Xu.

It is strongly recommended that writers who write war plots in the future directly look for the classic battles of famous ancient Chinese generals and copy them directly. Your own writing is really ugly and affects the reading experience too much. You don't have the talent to write battles, do you understand?

The biggest problem with this book is that the protagonist is not successful. If you don't give it a failure, then you compare it with Huo Qubing. Who are you looking down on?

It's obvious that the author really doesn't know how to write about battlefields, all he's watching is fighting. It turns out that the protagonist is indeed an ordinary person. He says the craziest things and gets the most vicious beatings. Even though he's a champion, he thinks he's copying a cool script, but it turns out to be an abusive novel.

It was supposed to be the most exciting plot in the early stage, but the author made it feel like he was suffering from constipation and couldn't get out. If you really don't know how to write, you might as well just possess the overlord and charge into the formation to kill Shan Yu.

War is just a mess of history💩. I only know how to rush and fight without thinking.

What kind of crappy weapon are you using? You are worse than Ma Shu 😰. Judging from your description, it feels nondescript.

It's unremarkable. It doesn't feel like a war. It feels like a business. To be honest, you may not be suitable for writing such passionate scenes.

Idiots said that when Huo Guangbing and Qing Yujie didn't know anything, wouldn't they check the history? Is this really how you were raised? 😁Most of the people who said that Huo Guang was unaware even Chunyu Yan came out and said that he was "pure and pure" and did not know about it. 😁 They also made a lot of quibbles with me. I asked you to answer who released Chunyu Yan. Why are you talking about him all the time? 😁

Let me give you a brief evaluation. The subject matter is good, the outline is good, the process is poisonous, and the writing is poisonous.

Do you really need to use a stick? , It feels really inappropriate 😭

Why are historical time-travel novels almost all about soul travel, and many protagonists still have systems or personal space? It is better to write that the protagonist can travel between modern and ancient times through time and space channels. After all, it is based on Einstein's theory of relativity. It is very interesting to write about the protagonist traveling between modern times and ancient times through time and space channels. This can show the direct collision between modern times and ancient times. There are already many stories about the protagonists rebelling in the early Qing Dynasty, including the Kangxi Dynasty and the Yongzheng Dynasty. It would be interesting to write a book in which the protagonist rebelled between Kublai Khan and Yuan Dynasty in the Yuan Dynasty or Zhu Yuanzhang and Hongwu Year in the Ming Dynasty.

Why is it not updated? Eunuch?

The description of the war scenes is not good, it's over in one or two sentences. It's not grand enough. The description of the battle scenes is not exciting enough. Many important events are introduced in too little space. There are almost no introductions to the important events. For example, the posthumous title of Er Kuan died and the funeral was like. The emperor's concubine died.

If the author of "The Starting Point" pretends to be a champion, I won't read it because I don't deserve it. I have always felt that the First Emperor and the Champion were not to be insulted. You can say that you are Bai Qi, Li Er and Liu Xiu.

The sealing of the wolf to Juxu not only boosted the spirit of the Han subjects but also dealt a heavy blow to the arrogance of the Xiongnu Chanyu and Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty. Don't think that being the boss can monopolize the privilege of worshiping heaven! Then within two years the champion suddenly died.

Not bad, not bad, I wrote about the champion in my heart! !

The author's book is well written and historically accurate. But it's just not interesting enough, it doesn't have that eye-catching point, and it's a bit annoying to read. In the book shortage, there seems to be no good historical writing recently.

Confucius sold four books in front of his door - how dare he show off his talents in front of the saint‌ ‌Confucius sold articles in front of his door - he didn't know what he was interested in; he didn't know his own abilities.

No, it's not updated again? What's going on?

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

Not enough