The Forbidden Wizard of Hogwarts

I still hope that the author can write more steadily, not to bury too many points, and not to be too watery. I still like this type of novel, but I hope it won't jump too much.

Hermione is so busy, I am reading six Harry Potter fanfics at the same time. It feels like Hermione is dating six men at the same time😅

Please let Hermione be the main heroine 🤭

To tell a joke, the protagonist is targeted by an alien god like Nayako, and his life is in danger at any time, but he still has the intention to have an affair with Hermione. Other readers can make their own decisions. Anyway, I was disgusted by the author's train of thought. 🙂

I saw Chapter 19, and I couldn't stand it anymore, so I was poisoned and died. Let's take Hermione directly. She keeps cooing at him. It's really incomprehensible that an 11-year-old child starts to behave like this towards the opposite sex in a new environment.

A person who was threatened by an alien god went to Hogwarts and still had time to play house with Harry Potter and the other three. If I were the protagonist, I would focus on magic.

Excuse me, does this book have a single female protagonist? ʕ •ᴥ•ʔ

This is the only Harry Potter fanfic book that makes me think the author has never read the original work. Goodbye, my dear.

When I saw it on the shelves, apart from the sun spell, I didn't see the protagonist developing any other magic, and he just kept playing boring puzzle games. If you really want to read the puzzle, why not read the original text? Why go to a fan to watch a puzzle game? The protagonist doesn't study magic well. It's really annoying to run to play decryption games. After looking at it for so long, don't mention the forbidden curse. No shadow was seen. Can't even make a fireball. What kind of mage are you? There is a strong suspicion of selling dog meat over sheep's heads.

It's a very good book about Harry, but it actually has an appendix 😰

Don't imitate other people's writing style in writing novels like this. Wouldn't it be embarrassing to read it yourself?

A rubbish Sun Fist is also called a forbidden curse?

Well, this is the first time I know that the snake farm is called Leistlin. Thank you, the author.

I've read Chapter 15. I'm not qualified to comment at this point, but I just can't stand it anymore. It's like reading the outline of a novel without any detailed description. I suggest the author read more books. Writing a book is not just about relying on your imagination.

You're only in first grade. Do first graders know what love is? Isn't it a little crazy to be like this in the first grade?

Is there a female protagonist? I hope there will be no female protagonist, as women can easily affect the speed of waving the wand.

What's so good about hibiscus? Arrogant and arrogant, half-Veela, she's awesome. I want to go through Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire, and it will hurt my wrists when I go up there!

Hey, hey, haha!

Feeling average. . . Well, I don't know how to put it. I feel like a writer has no right to say bad things about others. . . But this plot, this character arrangement. . . Hard to describe in one word

What the hell is this Malfoy, a fagot? Why are you writing this kind of nonsense? Is the author a woman?

It would definitely look better without Hermione

Why not devise a meditation method. Learn skills and imprint them into the spiritual sea. The imprint can absorb magic power and enhance your spirit. Here's another physical enhancement similar to the magic body~

I want to ask how much this book costs, please take me with you.

Um, I had some budding feelings about homosexuality in the early stage, but in order not to poke myself in the eyes, I gave up.

The idea is good, but the story seems not to be well written. It's like the Sorting Hat is not well written here. I should pay attention to the dean and others to write emphatically here. It feels like I put on the hat for a moment and then disappeared. It feels like everything revolves around the protagonist. There is no small story at all. The appearance of some people is also very abrupt, as if Qi Luo had not seen it before. Mentioned, it suddenly appeared. To put it bluntly, the group portraits were not well written, there were no daily short stories, and the places that should not be included were too long. It felt meaningless to write a lot of them like Room of Requirement. And like Super Magic, the idea is very good, but you have to create an opponent yourself. Otherwise, it feels meaningless to only use dozens of dozens of pictures once. 🤔

It's so beautiful, please don't enter the palace 😍

I gave up after reading the first chapter, bye.

The heroine is Hermione, and the problem with the sentence is a bit big. The male protagonist is very strong, but it's a pity that it's not without cp. Draco's character is seriously broken, and Dumbledore's feeling is not described.

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

I was originally very interested in the protagonist's setting, but Hermione's various methods and ideas were unacceptable to me, so I gave up!