Start by Building a Mecha

This book. As a 10-year-old in school, I have never taken any drugs, but this book not only lowered my IQ! He also pulled my cognitive skills offline! The third chapter of this book convinced me to quit. Let's talk about the shortcomings of these first few chapters. 1. It's okay to turn in a blank roll at the beginning to attract attention, but you got the system. After 3 years, you are still an unknown person. Are you worthy of my starting point system? 2. The female supporter doesn't understand you, why are you in a relationship with the protagonist? Besides, you don't even hold hands with someone when you are in a relationship! Then writing about Green Tea Bitch is purely disgusting. Are you disgusting yourself or the readers when you write this? If it is the latter, then you succeeded 3. If you just make a spare part at home, there will be some movement! Suddenly, no one else knows about your mecha except your parents. The most important thing is that you have done something that has not been done in the world, and your parents still believe it. 5. Do you think the state will not supervise the videos you post? You released an anti-country and anti-social video at 12 o'clock today. Believe it or not, someone came to you for tea in the afternoon, and no one believed it when it was broadcast. Do you think that no one who watches TV can see it? (The physical education teacher said there is no student like you)! !

After reading dozens of chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. The story is okay, but the author could please have some basic common sense, okay? 1. Mechas are military equipment, and the best pilots should be soldiers, right? There are also a large number of college students in the army. The military quality and cultural quality of these people are much better than a group of noobs who have just finished the college entrance examination, right? The monsters are at your doorstep, but these future drivers are still undergoing the most basic military training, learning how to shoot and target? 2. When a destroyer faces more than 40 warships on the opposite side, it doesn't even use its sonar? ? ! Ah? ? ? People turned on their sonar to detect the approaching monsters, and more than 40 warships were all gone. They still foolishly thought that their domineering spirit scared people away... 3. An aircraft carrier formation. May I ask the author, is the flagship (command ship) an aircraft carrier? Haha...

I feel that the pig's trotters country is a bit weak. Pig's trotters invented mechas, and soon other countries also had them. However, the pig's trotters country relies on pig's trotters alone to support the country. It's like the country has become intelligent.

The introduction is good and engaging. The book is almost there. I've worked hard to get to Chapter 5, see you guys 😅 later.

To be honest, I have read many books about mechas, but I have never read them like this. Others are fighting monsters to protect their country. I come here for the reputation and the fans. . Your thinking is okay! ! Apart from anything else, after reading more than 20 chapters, I really didn't have the motivation to read it. .

There are too many unreasonable loopholes. I had to constantly figure out the rationality and try to explain or overturn the plot. It was very difficult and not easy to watch. Example: 1 It is reasonable for the protagonist's girlfriend to abandon the protagonist, because he does not even focus on his girlfriend. It is very strange to use the "reverse flow of being abandoned" here, because the premise is that the girlfriend must be dumped if it is not in line with moral standards, which means that it is not reasonable to dump the protagonist. For example, the protagonist cares about his girlfriend very much, but his girlfriend thinks the mecha is unreasonable. 2 Several centuries of technology have been broken through by a single person, which has attracted insufficient attention. The protagonist just breaks through energy and controls technology, even if he makes a piece of paper fly steadily out of thin air. If you use a college acceptance letter as a bargaining chip, you will be regarded as a madman. As for why the secrets were not leaked during production, I am tolerant and let the system take care of it. 3 The characters' language is also not very reasonable. The last thing I saw was that the protagonist saved the car that fell into the water. If the mayor in charge had an EQ of 60 (passing line), then he should simply change the order of the words, "Although a few died, thank you, more died without you" instead of "Thank you, but a few died." Of course, as the mayor, I may not dare to mention that someone died. Even if this big shot hits me and kills me, it may not be a problem. As for how to know the dead person immediately, it is unreasonable, but I am too lazy to pursue it. In general, I can't enter this world, so I am unhappy and unhappy.

It's a system-level article written in the style of 5 years ago. It has no depth at all and is rigid in expression. It's hard to read one paragraph at a time! I don't recommend reading this kind of book. For mecha themes, I recommend reading Legend of the Master!

It's really poisonous. It's too cruel to suppress your intelligence.

It is recommended that the author write about space fleet battles with reference to EVE's Titan super weapon settings, StarCraft II's Protoss mothership, and other decisive tactical equipment. If you think the form is too simple, you can look at the tactical equipment in the Galaxy Reaver game, or strategic weapons such as dimension-enhancing black holes and dimension-reducing bombs in other science fiction novels. According to your current description, the Star Destroyer is just a cruiser-level small ship in other novels. High evasion and non-determinative tactical weapons. At least you have to be at the battleship level to be called a Star Destroyer. I personally think it's not worthy of the name. You are at least 2 levels behind.

I think it's very beautiful and very joyful!

The editors starting from this year really don't understand their reading level. Are we out of date, or have their brains been wiped out? They push everything. Seeing how poisonous Sanjiang is now, is it all a cheap deal?

This country is really useless. The citizens have created a mecha that can transform into one in battle. The outside world is talking about it. The country was indifferent. Haha. An extremely self-centered yy novel. Controlling a mecha is too easy. Without the assistance of a smart computer. There are many calculations that ordinary people can react to. Even a fighter jet is very complicated for an ordinary person to operate alone. Not to mention a mecha.

I was attracted by the title and introduction, but I have read less than 10 chapters so far. The author may not have enough relevant knowledge and experience, and what he writes cannot withstand a little scrutiny. He obviously has not made any preparations, and his attitude is not good. For example, B2 in the United States is worth billions of dollars, and the one that can fly and transform is as high as 50 million yuan... Another one, if you dare to expose yourself and attract fans without any ability to protect yourself, you will die. Iran was assassinated by the Americans when it was researching a nuclear bomb. It was suspected of possessing confidential information from the United States. Others dared to blow up the Chinese embassy. That's just a certain aspect of technology. The Gundam technology in this article integrates various Zentraedi black technologies such as small high-power nuclear reactors, unreasonable drive engines, supporting advanced materials, precise brain control systems, etc. It is something that must be obtained to start a world war. If such a person really existed in reality, he would either be immediately captured or killed by agents, or he would be sent into the sky by an intercontinental nuclear bomb in the middle of the night. Maybe the author will patch it later? However, some of the current plots are too unreasonable and blunt.

Oh my God, look what you stupid woodchuck wrote, I mean, I should kick your ass with my boot, this thing is as bad as Susan's apple pie next door, I mean it

Update wc I will continue to recommend and update soon! ! ! Is it easy to find a Tamatai fan nowadays?

If anyone can read this book, it can only mean that he drank too much pesticides and is very strong in resisting poison.

Is this book copied from FL? I saw a similar theme in FL last year.

The movie "Pacific Rim" is just a mindless propaganda about the United States and Europe. The Chinese are a big villain.

Tell the truth! You can watch if you give up your brain. After all, I haven't written this way for a long time. For other books at Seven Points, I can probably guess what the plot will be like. But I really can't guess this one (›´ω`‹)

Where can I report this? Other books insult my IQ, but this book directly makes shit in my brain.

Why argue, does this book have any discussion value...

I was wrong, I was wrong, I was really wrong. It turns out that this world is not the most poisonous, only more poisonous. Please, author, don't put poison. Do you know how many people will die just from your book? Saving one life is better than building a seven-level pagoda. I wonder how many I can save.

Monsters have begun to invade. Instead of looking for soldiers first, go to students to open mechas. This kind of logical thinking is also very powerful.

Qidian can now sign any book and put it on the shelves 😅😅😅

You submitted a book to Qidian, hoping to make some money, but you still don't accept criticism from Qidian readers, and you want to write it into a novel. It's disgusting.

Supersonic rifle comes at the mouth? The initial speed of the May 4th pistol is 450m/s Do you think supersonic speed is awesome in the gun category? Can anyone give an example of a rifle whose speed is lower than the speed of sound 340m/s?

Let me give the author an idea: "Building a Pacific Rim mecha in the world of Tiga". Cool, I've thought it all for you: Faced with Dagu's question, he said: "I just want to protect our planet! I develop mechas because I admire Tiga. I want to fight side by side with Tiga. This is my dream! I didn't expect that this would become a weapon against Tiga!" (Please automatically think of the Japanese translation) Climax: Diga's lights began to shine, the helpless victory team members, the arrogant military executives, and Diga struggled to support themselves under the claws of the mecha. "Since it was made by me, let me destroy it myself," the protagonist came to the mecha console under the cover of the victory team members and pressed the self-destruct button. Mecha research was stopped and then restarted, ZF's game, talking about ideals and peace with Dagu. How about this idea?

I wouldn't have been able to write a book like this without having had cerebral thrombosis for ten years!

After reading a few chapters, I vomited out old blood. Thank you to the author for helping me detoxify.

I feel relieved when I see so many people scolding me.