I Opened a Bank in Tokyo

Many online novel authors (mainly talking about Oda here) have one thing in common, which is that they don't pay much attention to physical issues. For example, there are many giants who are eight meters tall and weigh hundreds of kilograms. A 100-meter-long Neptune is 100 meters long and 30 meters wide and 30 meters high. That is, 30 times 30 times 100 equals 90,000 cubic meters. According to the density of water, one cubic meter is one ton, which is 90,000 tons. However, the tail will be much thinner, so the volume will be much smaller. But for such a large body, if the body density is the same as that of humans, it will not survive. For example, The bones, skin and muscles of large wild animals are much tougher than humans, and of course they are heavier. Therefore, the density of a body as large as a Neptune is even more shocking. Therefore, a hundred-meter-long Neptune must be more than 10,000 tons if it is a very slender body. If it is the round body of a beast, it is not surprising that a body of 100 meters is hundreds of thousands of tons long. As for the giant Neptune species, it is even more exaggerated. It can easily weigh billions of tons or tens of billions of tons. One of them is enough to feed all mankind for many years. Oda doesn't pay too much attention to this aspect, but is it really exaggerated? For example, red hair is sitting on a boat. A Neptune species with a body length of five kilometers and a weight of tens of billions of tons jumps out from the bottom of the water, and then is crushed by a mountain. How many kilometers did the red hair run in an instant? Or knock it away with one punch? Even if the redhead is powerful and he runs away, what will happen to his crew? With a body length of 5,000 meters, it is normal for a large splash of 1,000 meters high to jump off, right? Then what? Everyone died in one splash?

With extraordinary power, and worried about 10 billion yen, I can even find sunken ships on the seabed and return them, and become a treasure hunter for a while.

Well written, I hope I don't want to be a eunuch!

The early stage is not bad, but why do you need to confess your abilities to your neighbors? Just because the other person has a high IQ and doubts you? This feeling of being forced is very unpleasant! Also, daily life is too monotonous, with nothing else to do except playing with iron. Since I chose to set the background of the story in Tokyo, I can add some customs and folk customs into my daily life to make the story more full and real. If you are afraid of looking up information, you can still write an emotional drama. The male protagonist is like a robot, masturbating at home and going out to kill people. It would be too monotonous to write like this all the time.

The eunuch is bald, the author is quite bald

After reading a few chapters, there was too little dialogue between the characters, and it was all the author comparing!

Also, the hero should stop getting taller! Now that you are almost two meters tall, are you still looking for a woman? When looking at female characters, none of them are over 1.7 Meters tall. What should I do? Looking for one that's 1.6 Meters tall? What's the difference between this and finding someone who's 1.3 Meters tall? It feels better in terms of senses

To be honest, even if you spend money to refresh and buy things for your own use, and then use the fruit's ability to create Xinyi's subordinates, it is better than giving a devil fruit to a subordinate who has only been with him for a few months and has no backdoor. There is a family of genius neighbors, parents and relatives who are also geniuses, the protagonist is a loser, a confession about his childhood sweetheart who is almost evil, etc... It gave me the feeling that there are many flaws, but it is not poisonous. I feel very speechless...

Before Chapter 111, I thought I had found a treasure. After chapter 111, after skipping through a few chapters, I found that I was fed shit. I was still the smelliest piece of shit in the novel world. I can be called a model of driving high and going low.

I still can't stand it anymore and it would be toxic if it wasn't put on the shelves. .