Zhuxinglu

The author is the most knowledgeable about Qidian Buddhism that I have ever seen. But the sword is not sharp, it is hidden. Don't just throw it all out, it's a bunch of Buddhist terms, and there are also Sanskrit transliterations in the terms. The name of the exercise method is marked with terminology, and then it is OK to explain it. Several terms in one chapter have b boxes. Reading is more mind-numbing than the Heart Sutra. You can't expect to learn Buddhism through novels, right? At most, it can arouse people's interest and lead them into the Tao.

The esoteric teaching of Infinite Consciousness that the protagonist draws from is too niche. It is fine as a side sect along with the Seven Treasures Wish-fulfilling Mantra. However, it is not appropriate for the protagonist to use this as the end point of his practice if he wants to prove the orthodox Pacceka Buddha. Mahayana Buddhism still takes the eight consciousnesses as its core. It is recommended to change to the consciousness-only sect's method of turning the eight consciousnesses into four wisdoms. Awugou consciousness and the great round mirror wisdom are both achieved at the same time. It is more suitable to use the wisdom obtained after turning the five consciousnesses as the golden body method.

Did the author betray the immortal way and join the bald family? ⊙ω⊙

That's probably what it looks like

To be honest, the first few chapters really surprised me. After a few chapters, they are full of classical fairy tales, and the background is also good. The small world is broken into the big world. The backgrounds are integrated from the factory, including the Black Mountain Old Demon and Fahai. They are all familiar characters. They are quite good, as is the Buddhist cultivator with pig's feet. Really, they are not those who sell dog meat with sheep's heads, and they have no taste of monks at all. Even if the second plot adds the time traveler system, it is okay although it is sudden, but it only takes a blink of an eye to travel to other worlds, forget it Xianhu, what the hell is Doupo? The style of painting is wrong. What's the point of that kind of white writing besides showing off and slapping people in the face? Alien fire? Which of the various real fires and divine fires in the Xianxia class wouldn't completely explode it? Alchemy? It is one of the special skills of immortals and knights, and monks are not other professions. When you reach the realm of Buddhism, you can develop your own supernatural powers and save yourself and others. Even if you need the art of protecting yourself, isn't Buddhism and martial arts fragrant? They are complementary to each other. I think you really need to polish and perfect your world view. With your writing style, as long as you write well according to the characters, the plot should not be too nt. Not to mention publishing a book and making a TV series in the future. At least it can be worthy of the value of your code. It will definitely be popular, and it will not be LV1 until now. Besides, Zhutianliu is okay. The collision of different worlds, different cultures and different systems. If you write well, it will be really exciting. If you don't have enough skills, what are they? You have such a wealth of writing and knowledge, but it would be a pity if you don't improve your own world view and create your own universe. You had such an amazing feeling at the beginning. Goodbye.

I'm convinced, Guang Ji is so good and you don't write a pig's trotter. Instead, you give me a double protagonist and you write less of Guang Ji's role. You don't think that the protagonist Ding is very attractive. He just came here for Guang Ji. Why don't you give me a Ding?

Guang Ji writes so well that readers don't even buy into the real protagonist Ding Biao.

Carrying a Buddhist lantern, he has compassion for heaven and earth and has the ideal of saving, governing and awakening the world. It is difficult to predict that in the Year of Jiazi, thousands of demons will roam the sky. The decree of heaven is written in the book, and the disciples piously support the way. The Buddha lantern lights up and the brilliance appears, a glimmer of hope to save the last years.

Very good. The author has a deep understanding of Buddhism and Taoism. He has good writing skills. In the fairy gourd and most of the world, practicing Buddhism is actually about seeking immortality. I laughed to death.

I commented in a book in which a monk plays the protagonist that many authors do not check the classics and cannot write about the six roots of purity. Many people scolded me and made me angry! ——————————Complain and don't take offense. The author writes very well, keep up the good work!

Why does the author insist on writing about Ding? Isn't it good to keep writing about Guangji? Now Guangji is made like outsiders. Ding himself has no characteristics that attract people to watch. He just comes to Guangji to prove Buddhism. If you do this, you will no longer have your own characteristics. There are too many people in the world. I want to see Ding as the main character.

The comment section is full of nonsense. What's so interesting about this protagonist with a Buddhist character? What's the point of not participating in any of it and just letting everything happen? There were so many works like this that they were all thrown off the street. .

Crazy, can you read the introduction before reading the book? The author said a long time ago that he is not just writing about monks. I used to think that Guangji would be reincarnated when the plot develops to a certain point. After you made such a fuss, the plot was a bit separated when divided into two people. Now I am arguing that I don't want to watch Ding, but only want to watch Guangji. The author is not writing a book and has no outline. As for letting you dictate so much?

It's okay, mainly because Monk's senses are better than Ding's, but being able to write with a vest is already pretty good. I didn't cut off Monk.

It's tasteless to eat, but it's a pity to discard it. The author over-emphasizes his Buddhist knowledge and spiritual aspects, but when writing the plot, he gives too many golden fingers, which leads to the cultivation of spiritual ideals, which feels like losing a watermelon and picking up sesame seeds.

Is there a heroine and ambiguity? If so, I won't watch it. After all, we are cultivating immortality. Different ways are not the same.

I'm just saying casually, I actually like this book very much, the beginning is very fairy-like, and the author has also read the previous book. Let me share some of my opinions for the author's reference: 1. Buddhism is still relatively niche. It would be better if it were replaced by Ci Lang, who illuminates the world in Perak. 2. There is no distinction between primary and secondary. For things like this that have incarnations, there must be a distinction between primary and secondary, and the incarnation should be a supplement to the main body. Guangji and Ding Can feel that their painting styles have changed, and they are not complementary. The image above is better, all incarnations are different aspects of the main water path. 3 If Ding Can is the protagonist, there is a sense of illusion. He is Guangji who refines falsehood into reality. Walking with Guangji reminds us at any time that he is illusory and inherently flawed. If Guangji is the main one, what is the use of Ding Can, is it a different aspect of Fire? If you follow the path of fire, it feels like Taoism. 4 My idea is that after the first short story is completed, instead of taking over the story of Jigong, I will directly create the world of cultivating immortals, and introduce Guangji as an incarnation, the main body of cultivating fire, and then separate Ding Can to experience different aspects of fire in different worlds. You are Narcissus in the first book, and the same story structure can be used in this book. As long as the specific stories are different, they can still be written brilliantly. 5. Traveling through space is a bit redundant, and the few characters that appear are of no use. I originally thought that it would be a group time travel, but it turned out that it was still a single player. 6 Generally speaking, the main line is still unclear.

Personally, I think it's a bit awkward for Ding Biao's clone to appear with the protagonist. Wouldn't it be better if he was a vest that manifested his fate and turned into his counterpart when he left the world? Now it's a bit unclear about the priorities.

The only book about monks that is not objectionable, but after all, this is a book about monks, and it cannot only be about monks. In addition, I hope the author has some knowledge of Confucianism, Taoism, and law, otherwise such a good beginning will be wasted.

Speaking of the Twelve Causes and Conditions, it reminds me of a man named Buddha, Lord Wei Tuo.

The Guangji part is well written, and the plot of walking around the world, punishing evil and promoting good is also good. Zhuxinglu, a bright light walks in the world, and the second soul can be used as a wick. Forget it, let's see how the author writes it. If he talks too much, it seems like he is forcing someone.

The writing is good, the writing style is good, but after reading a few chapters, I have a slightly different outlook from the author, so forget it.

Okay, let me know when the author will publish a new book.

By the way, will Guangji go to the Perak Puppet Show or the Golden Puppet Show?

Give me a monthly pass, come on 😁

He actually turned around and entered. Under the bald donkey door.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

This book needs to be updated so you don't lose your investment.

I left without finishing Chapter 11, which is not my cup of tea.