Wandao Yongchang

The author's writing style is quite good, which can be seen from the description of various scenes. But there was something wrong with the pace of this book. I had already read forty chapters before the protagonist had developed a trace of Qi and was recognized by the teacher as being able to practice martial arts. After changing to another book, I finished beating the mini-boss in Chapter 40, and I started to prepare to change the map. The bad thing is that writing so slowly does not mean that the details written in it are so rich and necessary, but that the details are inappropriate. Things that can be mentioned in one sentence have to be talked about for a long time, and they have to be discussed in detail. It is really sloppy. Another poisonous point is that the world the author tries to create looks very traditional, with orderly hierarchy. But the attitude of the two young ladies in the family and their brothers in talking to the protagonist seems very modern. The servants were treated as equals, drank together to investigate cases, and were allowed to read in the family library, which gave people an extremely fragmented look. When the protagonist was talking to the raped victim, on horseback, and even bumped into the second lady's body in the ancestral home, the attitude and behavior shown by the protagonist were enough to be punished dozens of times. The third problem is that the protagonist seems to be a hard-working and scheming young man, but in fact he has the greasiness and cleverness of a middle-aged man in his heart. The attitude towards women is also very disrespectful. At one moment, he asked the birth date of the girl who came for treatment. At another moment, he made too many greasy comments and fantasies about the second lady's body, which was annoying to watch. It doesn't convey any of the youthful feeling of a young Mu Ai, but rather has the wretched mentality of a greasy middle-aged person. The image of being impure and frivolous does not please readers. In general, it can be seen that the author has put a lot of thought into it, but sometimes less is more. Eliminating unnecessary writing, superfluous writing, and excessive details will not only make the novel more readable and reasonable, but also speed up the pace and retain readers.

I'm poisoned. A servant is looking for death by talking like that to a lady from a family who controls the government.

The improvement in strength is too slow, and the slow pace is easy to control. However, the surrounding environment portrayed by the author and the pressure he faces are completely inconsistent with the current strength. At least the protagonist should be able to integrate into the situation laid out by the author. The key is how capable the protagonist is, and he will start to care about the world and his thoughts. Yes, but at least when I have the ability in the future, now I may not be able to protect myself in the changing situation, and it is really unreasonable to think about educating the public. You must know that this is the background of cultivating immortals, and power belongs to oneself, not historical machinations. The author should quickly find some opportunities or something to improve the protagonist's strength.

I just read it today and I don't know what other people think. I personally like it quite a bit. I checked the catalog update time. It's a bit slow and it's still updated from time to time. At this speed, unless the author's book itself is very popular, it's easy to lose the subscription. In this way, if you feel that your grades are not good, you will feel less motivated to update, and the less you will want to update. Book friends are also in the same vicious cycle! In fact, as long as you update well, even if your grades are not good at first, people who like your book will silently support you. It is so difficult to become popular🔥for a book like this!

Books are food and fodder, but characters are not. A person who grew up as a servant and has never learned to read or read, keeps saying golden sentences all day long, has amazing poems, and does not distinguish between master and servant... Is it really like being in the upper or lower class like now?

I'm convinced, what's the point of writing about He Jia all day long? He taught marriage literacy, and after only a few days of learning, he boasted in front of that woman that he was diligent, studious, and understood poetry, without considering the consequences of boasting? We are a perfect match. When you made the match, did you consider the house, storage, and income? Without these, why would you marry someone else? Marriage? But you have to be handsome to marry in, right? You don't have to be handsome but you have to be talented, right?

There is not much plot, but I have a lot of YY inside, so I say goodbye.

After it was released, the writing was a little false. The map changed too quickly, and the military force could not keep up. The protagonist's martial arts status was still being strengthened, and he was worried about the people in the world. He didn't have the strength or the capital.

With the second lady, it was very blunt and strange, so we went to investigate the case together.

I haven't read this book yet, so I'll save it first. When I saw the publication of the last book Three-Body Problem, I was hooked. I didn't look at the back. Hope it's less poisonous.

Unreasonable, 20 copper coins, 15 given away casually, is that the protagonist's life savings, is it a foreshadowing? Too deliberate. Don't talk about ancient times, but in modern times, who would give away three-quarters of their money to see others as pitiful? Besides, as a time traveler, you need to know some skills, right? As a result, after hanging around for a year and waiting for Golden Finger every day, the protagonist became useless.

You call this spiritual energy recovery? I'm afraid the aura here has never disappeared.

Aren't you afraid of being beaten to death if you ask a woman her birthday?

Does the author have any misunderstanding about ancient slaves? The power of life and death is in the hands of others. Miss Ren, the second lady had a good talk with you and asked for your opinion. If you don't know how to write, then don't write. Either you write about the descendants of the Lu family, or you don't write about the real powerful figures of the Lu family so early.

There is a reason for the poor performance of this book. There is too much nonsense at the beginning and too much water. I really can't read it.

The beginning was okay, but later on the little friend couldn't stand being scrambled to become a disciple. Abandoned

In fact, I prefer the planned and slow improvement of strength, but what I don't quite understand is the protagonist's humanistic feelings in the acquired realm in the era when spiritual energy is revived and great power is attributed to the individual. The author seems to be very persistent in opening up the people's wisdom. I feel a bit confused about the three views of the protagonist. Is it gentleness, humility, thrift, or the Tao Te Ching? Hey, goodbye.

See Chapter 3: The astonishing escape speed of one or two meters per second, and death from poison! I've explored the path for everyone. If you don't know, go take a look [speed of a few breaths... Several feet] The two-year-old kid downstairs in my house can't run any slower than this funny nine-foot-tall man trying to escape!

The book is a good book, but updating it every ten days is too much. . .

I feel like a eunuch, it's been half a month

I thought I got the skills and started practicing. Finally, I got some eldest lady and second lady. A lowly servant came out and ran to mess around with the eldest lady and second lady.

Speaking of aristocratic families, wealthy families, and human race worms, if they have the strength, Pig's Feet will join! Still join! It's really hard to choose

Emma, ​​it's not easy! You finally updated

Updates are too slow. . At least we should update it every two days, or every three days.

Acquired warrior, innate warrior, or bone-forging realm

After reading the book, I thought it was okay, but too many close-ups might be cumbersome! It feels like a farming article... Don't cut it off and write it well! Please pay attention later that you will definitely become a god. Farming is better than raising books. The protagonist is a person who has traveled through the past. He must be very modern at heart and dislikes feudalism, so the writing has the atmosphere of modern society! After all, online novels are just like online novels, the more support they have, the more understanding they have...

The currency system in this book is a mess. Not to mention that 1 tael of silver is very heavy and will last a lifetime. Is it possible that there is still some money in it?

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁

After reading the free chapter, it seems to be good for the time being, but the protagonist uses a sword instead of a sword, which I personally feel is a bit unsatisfactory. How can Xiudao Wen not use a sword? There is a saying in Taoism: The sword of Tao is in the heart, and evil spirits will not invade one's heart. The sword of magic is revealed, and it can kill evil and eliminate evil spirits throughout the world.