Fish Out an Entertainment Master

The author persuades people to quit in one chapter instead of twenty chapters. It's really delicious.

Nearly a million words, that's all I recommend. Do the authors dare to share their subscriptions? ? After reading it, I can describe your book in one word: frustrating! ! It's neither scar literature nor commercial literature. If it's just for love, just pretend I didn't say it! I apologize! Wouldn't they just hurt each other? ! ! Come on, who is afraid of whom? ! ?

After reading it, tell me what you feel The plot seems a bit too confusing in the first half The pace in the second half is too fast, and the subplots are basically written in one stroke The latter part feels a bit like an outline and not like the main text You have just finished writing the climax 🪖 The above is just my personal opinion I hope the author can sum up his experience and continue to work hard

There are huge problems with this book. That is the setting of the protagonist. Now omnipotent protagonists can be off-putting. Can't stand it. Especially urban novels. When writing entertainment novels, it's enough for the protagonist to have two or three abilities. Many authors write protagonists who wish they could do anything and be the best at cooking. The martial arts are the best, and the medical skills are the best. Or a poet. The author knows everything, and there is nothing the protagonist cannot do. However, writing this way makes people extremely disgusting. I can't stand it anymore. I saw the author writing about the main character copying books and doing martial arts. Can do music. I can make animations and games. I can only say, brother, what you write about is a person, not a god. If you paste these abilities on the protagonist, it will be like an ugly toy with holes everywhere.

Damn it, someone jumped off a building and the protagonist used to play a song on the guitar and stopped dancing. How dare you write something so vicious? The key is that he is a foreigner and you can't understand Chinese, so you moved him just by the guitar music. Death from poison

You're an urban cool guy, just pretend to be stiff and awkward, you still don't know how to slap someone in the face. Pretending and being slapped in the face are all the same. When someone questions you, you either ignore them or copy the poems and pretend to compare. After copying, you still don't respond and pretend that nothing happened? Are you worthy of those eternal quatrains that you use casually?

Author, I'm a little confused about the character you set for the protagonist. After seeing it later, I feel that it is very similar to the character of Mr. Pei from the house next door, but Pei always makes money in order to lose money. Your protagonist is obviously a fool who has money but does not make it. It always feels like the money is being pushed out for the protagonist's so-called low profile, but the author's writing style is so round and awkward that I always feel suffocated while reading it. In my opinion, there is no conflict between being low-key and making money. According to the author's plan, the protagonist's company has many industries, and they are industries that require money. Don't think that servers in the Internet industry are not valuable. On the contrary, servers consume the most money. When there are tens of millions of people online on the Internet, it is estimated that the server investment may require 100 million. The protagonist is always unwilling to make money. Where can the money come from to support so many high-cost projects? Also, there is really no conflict between making money and keeping a low profile. Since you are afraid that others will find out that the company belongs to the protagonist, you can recommend an agent. For example, if the agent Tencent launches as a front is Xiao Ma, then the protagonist is the black hand behind the scenes. In this way, you can make money and keep a low profile.

The system needs popular, entertainment novels. As for the protagonist, you told me to keep a low profile? Are you still afraid that the existence of the system will be discovered? Who can discover that you have a system? I'm really impressed. Are you worthy of the quatrains you copied? It's too poisonous for them to train trolls to spray themselves. It's more frustrating than eating a fly. They don't even dare to die when someone plagiarizes them. They are also afraid that the other person is a slightly famous blogger. It's extremely poisonous. When writing a novel, it is best to understand what readers like and how to enjoy reading it. If it is just for self-pleasure, then treat it as if I have said nothing.

Successful authors are all kinds of weird, and the authors who fail are exactly the same. I will mention two points. First, you are cheating on yourself. Second, the system relies on popularity and you actually want to keep a low profile. The most important thing is that the character's personality is not established and the image is contradictory.

To be honest, I hate seeing plots about monthly ticket battles in online articles. There is no one 🙂

If you write entertainment articles, just write entertainment articles. Just make fun of it. What's the point of Chinese martial arts? Will the system give me another task later on to help girls compete in gymnastics and competitions? It's too complicated, it slipped away

There are too many poisonous points, but the writing style is not bad, but the way of writing with a hammer here and a stick here and there is really not pleasing to the eye. When I saw the woman taking away the fish scales, I left too. I couldn't hold on to the content on the shelves.

It was too messy and was done across different lines, so it seemed too clumsy and procrastinating.

As far as the plot in the author's book is concerned, you would be sorry for the readers if you don't rush into it. Let's not say whether to read or not. The perfect attendance award probably depends on this.

What is written by a hammer in the east and a stick in the west?

Chapter 45 starts, all the people who practice martial arts, such as An Jin, Guoshu, and the landlord come out, I'm sorry. Excuse me!

There is a kind of book that YY gives to everyone, and there is another kind of book that YY gives to oneself. This book is the latter. Beware of poison! ! !

Are you writing novels, playing games, or the world of martial arts? It's so special that An Jin has come out!

No money to order it all! There are only two free monthly passes

After reading dozens of chapters, it was so confusing that all my secret energy came out. I don't know if there will be a palm that cuts off mountains and rivers and a sword that shatters the void in the future.

After seeing Chapter 53, I finally couldn't bear it and I withdrew. It's not considered a poisonous attack, it can only be regarded as a disagreement in the three views. Forget it, you can suddenly specify it. Why are you fighting with entertainment when you can specify fishing? Isn't black technology delicious? Only through unity can we achieve peace. Don't talk about these big topics when writing about entertainment... It's really disorganized

After reading 40 photos, there is no reason why my grades are so bad.

To be honest, it's not scary to be poisonous. After reading online articles for so many years, I have long been immune to all poisons, even if many masterpieces written by great masters have flaws. But this book is different. Secondly, it is toxic. It feels like the author has no outline and the title of the book is wrong. I understand that you are speculating about filling in the flaws, and I understand that you are writing about upper-level gaming on the website. The problem is that you are showing off in the gaming industry now, and then you are showing off again? What did the author think? According to your routine, won't there be a cultivator later?

It's self-made, no routines, it's okay, the book list has been added, come on!

It's well written. It took me five hours to finish it Come on, come on, come on.

It is indeed a good book, the author is thoughtful, the works in it are meaningful, and the timeline is reasonable. Unlike most entertainment books, copying is just "copying" and the word "revise" is too lazy to be written.

All ordered, keep writing, author 😁

The author admires you very much. You can reach 1.12 Million words by yourself. After reading more than 20 books, you decisively gave up the book. Leave it to the author to enjoy himself

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In the later stage, it will be all kinds of chaos.