
Konoha's Deus Ex Machina
木叶之机械降神
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 778k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Mechanical technology is pretty good, but it's just that you're mentally ill if you go to Konoha! You are a person who plays with machines, and you went to Konoha, the best place to play with chakra, and you also showed the possibility of surpassing ninjas. Is it because the third generation is old, or Danzo can't hold a sword anymore?
About Sand Ninja
I recently read through the comments and found that everyone has a strong call for the protagonist to develop in Amomum villosum. Therefore, the author Junran changed the outline. In the future, the protagonist's scope of activities will be transferred to the Kingdom of Wind. Stay tuned ଘ(੭ˊᵕˋ)੭* ੈ✩
Gunpowder weapons are very powerful, don't be misled by movies and TV shows! Electromagnetic weapons are even more space age weapons! It is recommended to search on Baidu! Otherwise, it would look too embarrassing for people who understand the power of some modern weapons😓
A punk mechanical engineer who first entered the world of Naruto. He carries an unknown multi-faceted cube ball and a self-transplanted mechanical nuclear-powered arm with him. The arm torque is comparable to F1, which is very convenient for lifting iron. The ball's ability is known to absorb and release chakra. The body can also be petrified from the fingers. Then he used one of his own hands to build a stronghold barrier. The protagonist brings over a mechanical arm, rubs a hand, a pair of legs, electromagnetic gun, Big Bob, Jesno, Alita and other high-tech Protagonist It's a bit of a jump. I came to an unknown world and discovered that there is supernatural energy chakra in the world. I inserted it directly into the Konoha Village base camp without learning more about this energy. I just started working on punk machinery. Then the plot directly involved mechanical prosthetics, robots, computers, robots, brain-computer connections, nuclear power plants, nano combat suits, and a scientist who is not very scientific Is it because I didn't understand punk science, or the author forgot to write about the logistics base spaceship brought by the protagonist 😄
In the world of Naruto, I don't know the plot, and I don't know how I died, so I'd better go and see those who know the plot, otherwise I still won't be able to live with it.
I'm not opposed to high technology, but you have to find another place to do it, such as the Ocean Islands in the Country of Whirlpool, or in the Country of Snow, but if you do it in Konoha, it's really a bunch of politicians or gangsters. And look at Orochimaru's technology, how do the creatures come out? The problem is definitely not only biological matters, there must also be research results. However, the actions of the rotten leader and the tolerant policy of the Third Generation, handing over the fruits of science and technology are just the tools of some people. If people are alive to pick peaches, it is better to change places and learn from Orochimaru and come to the Oto Ninja Village.
Asking for feedback on the cover
Em... How can I put it this way, when the author was looking for someone to do the cover, he thought it was pretty good. But some of my friends think the cover is a bit scary. Therefore, I am here to seek your opinions from all readers. If most people think this one doesn't work, I'll find someone to make it again. (ps: I obviously think he is quite handsome, but there is something wrong with my aesthetics...)
Can the third generation allow a person from another village to be the guardian of the human pillar? And you didn't find anyone to monitor you? Can you still leave the village at will? Rizu also gives the protagonist a wife just because he is the guardian of Rikibashira? Was the Hyuga clan's rule against intermarriage with outsiders being broken in advance?
There was a question mark on his face. What the hell? Will this also fail? ? ? Technology is so advanced, and satellite weapons have come out. Why don't you go to someone and fight hand-to-hand? ? ? And then failed inexplicably? ? ? ? ? ? ?
The biggest flaw of this book is that a person who plays with mechanical technology has to hang out with a group of ninjas.
Change the village to the Sand Ninja. It is inappropriate for something like this to appear in Konoha. If nothing else, the Third Generation, Danzo and Orochimaru would not be able to watch something like this appear that is beyond their control, or something that is not under their control. Unless it is written that they ask you to donate machinery or forcefully snatch it, otherwise this is the biggest poisonous point.
Your protagonist's character design is not quite right. What is cyberpunk? Technology is unprecedentedly advanced, the gap between rich and poor is widened to its greatest extent, and the people at the bottom without technology have no value. The trust between people is far less than the trust between people and robots. As an engineer who is a middle-level technical staff, it makes sense to say that the protagonist can see the despair at the bottom and the interest game at the top. You can also say that the protagonist yearns for peace, but the protagonist definitely believes in the power in his hands and pursues a sense of security, which is the phobia of insufficient firepower. But before the protagonist met Hidan, he had no weapons prepared at all.
To put it bluntly, with the protagonist's current strength, he can directly complete the Sibila plan successfully. If it fails, it will be called fake. If the deliberate falsehood fails, then forget it in the end.
Um, how can I put it this way? The protagonist has a pretty good personality, but maybe the author has never watched Naruto. Those characters always talk too much. For example, the Akatsuki organization, you can just call it a kindergarten, and Uncle Snake, a cold-blooded guy, do you think he can keep his word? The author didn't think about anything and didn't write out any details about the supporting characters.
Came from QQ reading. Post a comment over there. The author can't see your account. Please comment. The early stage was really good. Generally speaking, it was okay. But in the later stage, the fleet as big as an aircraft carrier was still okay if you lost it. Even if you create a mechanical rebellion, it will be better than that thing. After that, I went to specialize in chakra training, and I was really convinced. Shennong must be killed. If you are going to have a harem, there is no need to do it like that. Generally speaking, you can read it in the early and middle stages, but it is recommended to skip reading in the later stages. I remember on QQ Reading, someone commented that some nanorobots and various technologies that can assist in machinery have not yet been developed, and then they went to repair chakra. I think it makes sense. The author recommends considering it.
I recommend a book, Konoha's Technology Template, I hope it will be helpful to you.
Why not use nuclear bombs to cleanse the land? The nuclear-powered aircraft carrier exploded and completely wiped out the ground. Let Obito guess what he did.
The five major ninja villages are all the same. As long as you are strong and not controlled by the shadow, sooner or later you will confront them, unless you become a shadow.
Information, you don't even know the information about ninjutsu? I vow to carry on the battle between materialism and idealism to the end.