Old God Hunting Ground

Shen Nong's Test of Poison: The first poisonous point: After reading the first copy, I suddenly started writing supporting roles. I skipped it directly and found that it jumped to chapter 5 later. There are so many supporting roles. I knew that this book might be pretty good, but it would definitely not be a hit. It's superfluous and the author's writing power is not enough. It felt like being force-fed a lump of that stuff. The second poisonous point: Suzuran's character problem. Emmm, he has tortured the protagonist for 7 years. He is venomous and loves to ridicule. His personality puts interests first and uses the protagonist like a tool. If it were me, even if I couldn't live without her now, I would still have to plot revenge, which would definitely be on the level of a thousand swords. In the end, the protagonist forgives? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? I have to say, what the hell is this. My heart is filled with alpacas. The third poisonous point: the protagonist has been training for 7 years, and I thought he was a super master at the dragon hunter level. Is this the result? The performance in the copy is far from satisfactory. It's of no use at all. Where did these 7 years of training go? ? To summarize, the author is a newbie. The character design of the protagonist is full of bugs, and he also likes to write supporting characters (and each of these supporting characters is more awesome than the other, much better than the protagonist). He often doesn't see the name of the protagonist in chapters 5 or 6, and he can't control his writing skills. . . . There are also bugs in the Skynet setting, (Hunters with different strengths can enter the same world and hunt newcomers) and so on. It's not cool enough. After 7 years of coaching, he is just a loser and has no performance at all. Recommended for people with strong drug resistance

I want to ask something, I just watched the first dungeon, this thing is not purely disgusting🐴: It's pitiful and Nm is a one-time talisman (not given as a side talisman). Opening the guillotine, I doubt that Guillotine alone can kill newcomers indiscriminately. Normally, wouldn't it be normal for the high-end team to find key props to weaken the boss and fight C, and for the new team to go through the motions and get through one or two dangerous situations where the plot just doesn't work? It's outrageous. There is also Gang Xiong's assassination on the axe. The 8 clones that require silver to deal with normally (he said that the normal attack is one level higher) may be strengthened by the newcomers. In the later stage, the strength is released and the axe is useless Don't forget the last copper coins, the four soul jade, and one self-immolation with strong liquor. If one person is missing and a new person is replaced, the same thing will be charged to death. Can a novice prop survive in front of a gold and dead hunter? Hidden props plus the Four Soul Jade are not as good as a novice gift pack 🐴 You look like the God of Death to me. It's not like giving training to novices, but like playing monkey. . .

Emmm, The author said at the beginning that the protagonist has rich experience and has hunted countless monsters. However, I have only watched two hunting missions. The protagonist's operations are like a sand sculpture, not rational at all, and unable to hide himself. Speechless

As a very picky bookworm, I think this book can be used as food. The writing is good and the logic is reasonable. It is not a brainless novel. The world view is well constructed, but the shortcomings are also obvious. First of all, the heroine? (Or a female supporting role, or something of unknown gender, maybe one of those three) It gives readers a very bad feeling and the protagonist cannot deal with her. It will be very embarrassing if her ending is not done well or the whitewashing is not done well. The second one is procrastination (this is a matter of opinion for the beholder). I personally don't disagree. As for the slow pace, look at Kingdom XX. After a few years, the main character has not yet reached adulthood, and a lot of people are still watching it. It can be called fairy grass. However, I still think that the slow pace will affect the dissatisfaction and anxiety of some readers, so the pace must be grasped. Writing more than 100 chapters for a non-critical copy may be a bit long. The third thing is that the author, I can see that you want to build a grand world view, but the writing method of group portrait is still too difficult. It is difficult to control the world view through other people. The main character is still the main character. There is no need to rush into the world view.

The S-level evaluation the protagonist received in the first dungeon was a cherry bomb, which was inconsistent with the S-level evaluation. I was so sorry for working so hard in the dungeon, and the effort and reward were too unequal.

I think the author's writing style is very good and his creativity is quite good. However, I think the author may be too persistent in what he wants to portray. It is okay to insert memories and narrations between a story, but it should not be too long, because this in itself destroys the overall structure of the story and can be written as a separate reflection later. Secondly, the character of the protagonist is neutral. Shan should not always describe how decisive and cruel he was in Zeng Jin's dream. Too much contrast between the character's personality and behavior will cause the reader's reading experience to be significantly reduced. At this point, see above.

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After reading the first book, I felt outrageous. The protagonist has gone through seven years of life and death experience, and the way he behaves in this novel is almost like, "Hey, I'm going to work hard!" Hey, I chose to take a beating. Hey, I'm going to work hard! Hey, I still choose to get beaten. The author wants to show that the protagonist is very powerful, but he also wants to suppress his strength. All day long I feel like my whole body is exploding with strength, but every time it hits the cotton. What motivated me to finish reading the first book was to see how the protagonist would express his seven-year strength. The result is that I was naive, thinking that I wanted to show my strength before suppressing it, but it turned out that my strength was full, and I didn't show any signs of it. In addition, I don't know if Suzuran is mocking MAX players. I don't know if it's clear or not, because most people won't want to watch it when they see this, because it's too depressing. I'm not shaking M or S, so why bother myself? Generally speaking, the author's creativity is very good, his writing style is not bad, and the layout is large, but most people cannot accept it. As the old saying goes, hit me with a stick and give me some sweet dates. This is equivalent to telling me that I will beat you for an hour and then treat me to a Manchu banquet. I'm not sick, so why can't I just go find a restaurant where I can eat Man-Han banquet directly?

At the beginning, it is said that the protagonist has been fighting in a dream for seven years. He said that he has killed a thousand werewolves and ten thousand spider monsters. It makes people think how powerful the protagonist is! At least the top killer level! The performance was so bad~ I wouldn't be surprised if an ordinary person could do what the protagonist did in his first world! His fighting skills are completely lacking, and he has no outstanding performance except for his boldness! And the first mission was rated S-level, and the rewards were so many, but in the end, I got a shadow talisman and a vitality potion, which did not strengthen the body at all! In the second world, someone almost died in a sneak attack with a crossbow! Forget it if you didn't see it at all! The description said that after the crossbow arrow was shot, he saw a flash of red light! But there was no subconscious dodge at all! What have you been doing for the past seven years? Still saying that you have killed 1,000 werewolves, you did it by saving files, right?

After being tortured for 7 years, he still didn't report it when he found out it was an assistant, and he didn't fight for authority. This shows how broad-minded he is. Since my mind is not that broad, I can only give up!

Don't you think the plot is very frustrating and there are too few mindless and exciting articles? The idea is very good, but I hope it won't be too two-dimensional in the end and can be more logical and realistic. In the first plot, a large section of the setting told through the characters' mouths was a bit discouraging and not natural enough, but the subsequent writing got better and better. The lyrics and descriptions in the chapters where Suzuran appears and reveals her intentions are very graphic, and the possible reversal behind it is very attractive. I wonder if the author can write this suspense well. In the end, the readers' judgment is enough as a reference, and the author can follow his own ideas. After all, only the author knows what world he wants to depict. Finally, please come on, the author, and don't stop updating. It's rare to find a novel that I want to read.

Yysy, Chapter 50 was great until Suzuran appeared, the writing and characterization were also good, and the plot was also good. But Lily of the Valley was too poisonous when she first appeared. The protagonist had no temper for no reason, and the relationships between the characters were forcibly arranged. Furthermore, I mentioned how much I hate dreams and how cruel death is, but now I feel no hatred at all? Not to mention the enemy of life and death, at least tit for tat, now like an obedient dog. It would be understandable if you started to quarrel with each other like V and Silverhand, but gradually helped each other due to symbiosis, eased the relationship and became friends. The protagonist has been inexplicably obedient since Suzuran, with basically no hostility in his heart and little temper. Let the lily of the valley fill the cup and do it. You, the author, can understand it, but your readers cannot.

This pig's foot is very holy. She was maliciously tortured for seven years and yet he generously forgave her. This is not a no-brainer at all, not a happy one at all. It is so much better than other fantasy urban novices. This cannot be considered an abuser at all. Writers who like to write pig's feet with this kind of setting must be very kind. I wish you a great success. Even if I die, I will drag a few more people down (vicious).

What did I see? A Slaughterer who didn't show his fighting skills. The Sixth Sense I wrote was just a cutscene. For seven years, it wasn't hunting, it was playing Blue Moon.

I hope the author can increase the description of the protagonist, speed up the improvement of the protagonist's combat power, or reduce the number of hunters who are higher than the protagonist. From the beginning to now, the protagonist's presence has become less and less, and along with it, the protagonist's personal characteristics have become more and more ordinary. Starting from the Grudge, the protagonist has shown several abilities: First, he has excellent psychological quality and can deal with various dangers calmly and rationally. The second is the ability to act better than ordinary people. After making a rational judgment, he does not procrastinate and decisively implements his plan. The third is good intelligence, which can find clues in various clues and find ways to break the situation. But these are too bad for the protagonist's character! The protagonist is a senior hunter who has experienced hunting and learning in dreams for many years. He has many experiences in dealing with various monsters and monsters. He has also read various books and dissected such monsters. Then, our protagonist was kidnapped by his companions, was discovered while hiding, and was almost shot to death by a newcomer with a crossbow... To be honest, comparing the settings, the protagonist's performance was outrageous. The protagonist's performance is very real, the food is real... But the popularity is not high, that is, the protagonist's performance is not sexy at all, nor is he very handsome. Although he is cautious, he is so popular. Having been a dream hunter for many years, the sense of existence is really weak. I have neither seen the protagonist's martial arts skills that have been honed over thousands of times to catch the smallest dust, nor has I seen the protagonist's knowledgeable and knowledgeable ability to see the whole situation at a glance. If you really want this background, the protagonist really didn't show any occult knowledge and experienced hunter in the first scene. There is no occult knowledge to create rituals, use items, use props, and modify weapons. The protagonist is like an urban soldier king, and he is even discovered by others. When I arrived in the "Lord God Space", I didn't think of ways to increase my attributes to restore my "experienced in hundreds of battles" skills. I even sold the four soul jade that increased attributes, and then bought a sword that I would collapse if I use it for a while. Obviously the first scene is about a curse, and I didn't even buy any props to deal with ghosts later on. If the second scene is some kind of ghost movie, these things bought by the protagonist will be useless. This is really a drama, but as long as you don't think too hard, you can accept it. The most uncomfortable thing is that various supporting characters compete for the protagonist's role, making the protagonist who is not very outstanding in the first place even weaker. In Qidian. Com, the protagonist is often the soul and backbone of a book, and all stories unfold from him. So it is often the protagonist who shines (in every sense of the word) that attracts passerby readers, and then makes people more willing to learn about the book. The author said that he is a newcomer, so writing it as it is now is good enough. It doesn't matter this time, just learn from the experience and then consider the plot structure and concept. With the current level, it will become popular sooner or later.

The contrast between the two plots is very interesting. The child who died at the hands of the Amazon cannibals was first brought in by the unprofessional nanny, but her fate was not mentioned. Zhao Feng's self-description ended with Zhang Guohao and his wife giving them wedding gifts, and then fell into a logical paradox. It was his betrayal in the mouth of the couple that led to the capture of a family of three. I'm not sure which of the two sides didn't tell the whole story and even said they had mental problems, but it's quite interesting to say one thing or the other. It is obviously based on Bloodborne, including Hunter's Dream, workshop, and dolls. The Hunting Ground is an infinite streaming variant, and so far it has been integrated into other literary and artistic works such as Horror Cinema, World of Warcraft, and Dark Souls. The writing is fluent and the words and sentences are well chosen. I didn't expect the data to be so shabby and the comment area to be so deserted.

Don't know what to say! The protagonist hunts countless evil spirits, monsters, dragons, etc. In his dream, all by relying on equipment, enchanting inscriptions, and body-stimulating potions? ? ? Don't you have any swordsmanship, marksmanship, fighting skills or spells?

When you read a novel, you don't want to watch a sadistic protagonist. You want to watch it to be enjoyable, not to see how the protagonist acts like a dog to others!

The writing is okay, but the author made a mistake, which is the problem of lack of empathy. For example, Suzulan, a protagonist who has been tormented day and night for seven years. It is not an exaggeration for the protagonist to peel off her skin and cramp her and light a sky lantern. Reading the novel will give a sense of immersion, and any reader will be brought into it. I was tortured for eight full years and forced to die for revenge, but the author arranged for the protagonist to forgive. This is unacceptable to readers. Why should I forgive after being tortured for seven full years? It is simply unforgivable, but the author arranged for forgiveness. This is a lack of empathy.

I think my motivation for reading this book was to see how the protagonist turned the tables in the end, pressed the lily of the valley to the ground and rubbed it, and how he took revenge. If this Suzuran is the heroine, then it will be fine and I can only say goodbye.

Just ask if Suzuran is dead, and in which chapter she died. If she dies, I'll read it again.

I have no problem with Lily of the Valley, but I have a strong problem with the main character being a 7-year-old hunter who has trained on a dog. I don't see this golden finger being of any use to the main character. What if this golden finger can be used for wool?

So much knowledge, but the result is just experience with weapons? Why not build easy-to-use weapons? And the novice rewards are better than opening S-level treasure chests. Does it belittle the difficulty of obtaining S-level evaluations?

Doesn't 7 years of torture serve no purpose other than building up your courage? This plot is fragmented and forced to make do. It is not a good novel. If you are not good at it, don't read it.

The setting is not very good. In the first world, there is no mutual damage in the same mission, and hunters of different levels can be in the same world. The second world competition mission is still such a newcomer. Black iron, bronze, and silver are all disgusting together. It can be said that there is no basic balance, the basic attributes are very different, and there are a bunch of high-level hunters who have entered randomly. What is the ultimate goal of Skynet's continuous efforts to attract people? Accelerate human evolution? Or is it purely about watching life and death struggle? Or something else?

The novice mission is to face the final BOSS directly, and the survival rate is very low. After being tortured for seven years, he can still forgive her. NB. That's why it's so popular.

This book is poisonous. The protagonist has been trained since he was 12 years old. It sounds like training at least, or torture at worst. The seven years of life and death training feel like feeding a dog. The protagonist has no temper for no reason. Skynet is also lo, Suzuran is the real protagonist. He asked the protagonist to work for him, and then he became Skynet and wiped him out. . . . People who don't have full poison resistance are best not to watch it.

The writing is quite to my liking. Most people say that Suzuran is a poisonous person who tortured the protagonist for 7 years and must take revenge. Isn't it a blessing to let you continue to exercise yourself in a virtual reality where you will not die in real life? These people are as childish as children.                                                    When you are abused in LoL, you will hang up and complain about others, instead of going to the demo to reflect on why you are being abused; when you are being abused in CSGO, you will complain about your opponent for being abused, and then use plug-ins to destroy the game environment, instead of starting with 1000 bots every day. After playing ranked, there is a group of people who replay the demo to reflect on their own problems. But the reason why I can't stand it is because Natasha changed so much after being rewritten in the deep dream, from a cold and smart little girl to a little fool. It's even bigger than Origami's change after Shido changed the world (I don't like this kind of sudden drastic change in a person's personality, which makes people wonder whether you are or not you) and I think it would be more interesting to write without changing Natasha's personality. I feel that the author can't control the description of supporting characters.

Farewell, I can barely read the rest, but after reading the comments, some book friends said that the protagonist forgave the person who tortured the protagonist for seven years, just because she was a woman, so I forgave her. This is unacceptable, just like someone who has been eating shit for seven years, and then you have the ability to kill her, and then you see that she is a woman, Just forgive directly. When writing, the author may feel that a woman may have difficulties. The protagonist forgives and the reader can accept it. However, the author does not read the book from the reader's perspective, otherwise he will be poisoned. The protagonist has been training in the dream world for seven years and is still a dazed young man, so he cannot accept it.

This book. . . It's so outrageous, more than 50% of the people in the comment section are scolding