One Piece: I Can Time Travel

Well, how can I put it, wearing it at any time is a good idea, but after the protagonist traveled through time, the operation was a bit confusing. In the world of pirates, he has been practicing well, but he did not participate in the plot changes. Then I might as well read the original work. After returning to the modern era, he will be a big eater, an auxiliary policeman, and there will be a Reiki family in the back. At this point, I know that the protagonists in the two worlds have started to plot plots, so I will withdraw first. See you next time, the author.

Since you are writing about pirates, the most important thing is the issue of stance. There is no such thing as justice or evil, there is only stance. If you are a pirate, you have to write down the abilities and character of your companions if you want to succeed. If you are a navy, you have to have your own justice. It's best not to brag about the original characters, such as Akainu and Blackbeard. Of course, it's just a suggestion. Don't spray if you don't like it

The first 5 chapters are well written. According to this outline, it is not poisonous. If you finish it with a few hundred words, it should be a small hit🔥.

Upgrade too fast. The author wants to finish the book? If you don't finish the book, what kind of Zhutianliu will you use? Commonly known as changing the map

It feels quite confusing, no one who treats the protagonist well has a good ending! Especially when the protagonist takes advantage of others being nice to him! I never thought about return, only use

The previous nearly ten chapters were fine! Then he jumped! They say they can match up but they can't! Well