Douluo: My Martial Spirit Is the Great Wall

Great Wall properties. Immortal. Guard.

If you look at it, please don't be a eunuch! Well written.

Single heroine? With Wuhun Palace?

Is the main line too slow, too many other details, and not enough passion?

You actually updated it, I thought you were a eunuch

There are too many typos, which affects the reading experience

I know myself, but my writing is still very good. I hope everyone can bear with me, and Zhuyu will work hard to write better!

The protagonist is already a martial soul from the Great Wall, can we not add a soul ring? Isn't it good to just add nothing, just add soul power without adding soul rings to make the Great Wall invincible?

It originally looked good, but after adding Holy Cult, the poison points increased dramatically. If I change it now, it's still too late. This is just a suggestion, not a criticism of the author.

It's not that no one read it, many of them were abandoned by Yu Tang 3. You are too high-minded to Yu Xiaogang. It's easy to understand when you say that your martial arts spirit is from the local area. You are writing about something he has never seen or understood before. In all likelihood, he will not read it. Oh, what a good subject, bye. The original work is not that Tang 3 ate the fairy grass and his blue silver grass was destroyed. The root system of the blue silver grass is underdeveloped, not tough enough, and has no resistance, but it seems to have strong healing, detoxification and recovery powers.