I Am Casting the Foundation Alone

How should I put it? Before I even brought it in, you started to stir up emotions! Another poorly sold book, I can't read it

I feel like the male protagonist can practice eight magical skills. After all, the male protagonist wants to leave the world under one person.

,,, How should I put it, this sensationalism is embarrassing,,, the various plots are not smooth, this sensationalism is in vain, it is a point deduction, and it is too sensational, it is true, the setting is very unpleasant, the sensationalism has been mentioned on the one hand, and then it is mixed with personal information, first to compare the eight magic skills, Ju Lingqian will be drawn by Tongtianlu The Fenghou Qimen is restrained by spirit-type talismans. The Fenghou Qimen's calculations are not very good. It is better to scatter beans and become soldiers than to scatter beans to become soldiers.,,, I'm convinced. Fenghou Qimen controls the Qimen Bureau, not fortune-telling. It has this ability, but it is not the main one. The original book did not mention spreading beans to make soldiers, so I don't know how to scatter beans to make soldiers in the world under one person. However, the literature in reality only shows two types of alternative weapon refining and spell abilities. One is to make objects like puppet machines that will become larger and smaller, and the other is to create mimicry spells like Tuhe Chariot and Fire Breathing. The mana is twisted into a human form. The former can be made with hundreds of refinements, and it is only one of the abilities. Forget it, Shenji Bairen can be refined faster and better, Ruhua is the same thing, and the latter is a different thing. Shenji Bairen can produce many powerful items, but spells and spells depend on strength. With that strength, all spells are not the same. Can your soul-binding talisman control spirits that are much stronger than your own? To be able to do it requires a lot of strength to draw it, and it requires precious materials. Tongtianlu can be drawn directly, but can you draw it? Have you ever seen it? You have to know how to use the Tongtian Lu to draw, and your spirit is no longer your spirit in front of the spirit commander. What's the use? Then I didn't read the rest, but there must have been a lot of private information mixed in, such as the Lord of Mount Tai, the Lingbao Sutra, the Suzhan Lord, etc., I'm sure that the following chapters will talk about ancient myths and legends, such-and-such gods, and so-and-so. ,,,, The abbreviation is fancy, and it will definitely be generalized, and I did not go to verify the information, but learned it through the anime novel Fengshen List, etc.,,, Of course, this is my bias, but it is the previous chapters that caused this bias. If it is not the case later, I will review it. Of course, if you have seen the later brothers, you can also tell me what it is like. Finally, I wish the author will write better and better, and make more and more progress. I will follow up on the day I read it.

Only then did I see the protagonist going down the mountain to cause trouble all over the world. The author Chunqiu's writing style briefly told the story during this period, and only explained how much trouble the protagonist caused. So how did the protagonist change from a good boy who was gentle to the world to a naughty kid who hated everyone? Even when encountering a scumbag on a plane, he would just stand by and watch, and be on the lookout for other strangers. Previously, under the influence of his mother and master and brothers, the protagonist was a gentle person who treated the whole world (written by the author, not me), but just after taking a plane down the mountain, his personality became gloomy for no reason, and all the major forces in the world were provoked. Is this the so-called trial? The naughty children and bears in Chen Dongergen's works are superficial, and their character development and changes are all reasonable. You are changing faster than your Spring and Autumn writing skills.

It's a bit nonsense. Xue Zhong's combat power should be lower than that of Young Song Xing. Li Chungang lost his energy after fighting 3,000 people and almost exhausted himself to death. Wrath Sword Immortal killed nearly five thousand people by himself without any fuss. When Dao Jianxian came down the mountain, he knocked down five thousand cavalry with one sword. In terms of combat power, regardless of realm, Xue Zhong and the young man are superior. I think the young man is higher.

I'm really convinced. This is the first novel in my 20 years of reading that has so many typos and redundant words. Is the threshold for authors so low these days? Didn't you check it before publishing?

Does anyone know if there are any other fan fictions about shounen songxing?

This is the novel with the most typos I have ever seen, and they are still not corrected.

With so many typos, can you still continue writing without correcting them?

In the first chapter, this kind of beginning of bitterness and deep hatred dissuades many people. Life is already very depressing. Reading is to seek spiritual pleasure. This kind of excerpting other people's good quotes to start with bitterness and deep hatred, and then follow the text, is difficult to justify. Happy style or cool writing is the trend of Xiaobai's writing. After all, there are very few like Langya Bang. Today's readers don't have that much patience. If you dare to give Lin Lei a cuckold like a tomato, you will definitely rush to the street.

I have a bold idea. The thirty-six thieves became sworn brothers in 1943 and simultaneously created the Eight Magical Techniques, so they must have known each other for a while before they became sworn brothers. So I'm assuming they were around a year before 1943. That is 1942. The background at that time was the strategic stalemate of Japan's invasion of China, Japan's sneak attack on Pearl Harbor, strategic advantages in the Pacific battlefield, and the Japanese army's march south to Nanyang: domestic famine in Henan. In the plot, the Japanese came to China with their heads in the sand, the Tang Dynasty went to fight, and the European German army approached Moscow again. From now on, we know that we will definitely win, but at that time, society had the most concepts of failure. Now we are looking at the Eight Wonders. I think they may be treasures left for future generations by a group of strangers who are aspiring to serve the country. Now we can look at it from another angle after understanding the larger background of the times. Magic Machine Hundreds of Refinements Arms Restraining Spirits to Send Generals Special Attacks on Spiritual Bodies Think about Japanese ninjas using shikigami, which should be similar to elves Both Hands Treatment Change of retreat Fenghouqimen Deduction prediction Tongtianlu Artillery support Qi Tiorigenliu Large battery Lioku Immortal Thief Army training Daluo Cave Temple Run away God Ming Ling restrains all Qi Why was it not used later? Maybe it was no longer needed. It was already 1943 after the law was created. At this time, the Hundred Regiments War, the Expeditionary Force, the United States in the Pacific entered the war, the German army defeated Moscow, and the German-Italian Allied Forces defeated Africa. The tide of war has turned. After that, they ran away separately. The most amazing thing was that after being captured, General Ju Lingqian told all the information very happily. It was obvious that the nine of them were the last to leave the Seventy-Two Valley. It was obvious that they could avoid most troubles by changing their appearance with both hands. I am complaining about Ma Xianhong of Biyou Village. Shen Ji Bai Lian is used like shit. The works that can be seen are Qianbang (space equipment), Ruhua (robot), armor (bullets blocking), and self-cultivation furnace (originally to transform ordinary people into aliens, but now to change it, the military only needs to strengthen their physique and directly beg for it). With such good resources, I can't directly invest them in the country. I'm afraid of temporary workers, even in a company. The magic machine is a treasure when used in the army. If you lose your memory, you will not call the police. If you join the army, you can cash out the value. The country will help you find your memory, but you will listen to other people's deception. Suppose that Ma Xianhong of Biyou Village joins the army. He is fully qualified to be a major with his magical skills and skills, even if it is related to the company. Not to mention that different people are managed by different people. In the face of such a huge value, the rules are nothing. At that time, the temporary workers group was directly arrested for trespassing into the military restricted area.

These typos make me dizzy. I won't tell you how good the writing is. How did you pass the review with so many typos?

I read about ten chapters, all of which happened in the protagonist's previous life. Why write so much? One chapter is enough to explain the background. There is also a protagonist who called his mother by her first name in his previous life. Is this still a filial son? I know there are a lot of bad books in Qidian, but I haven't seen such a disgusting book in a long time.

I still really want to read Chinese comics, but yours is too sensational, depressing and miserable, not exciting enough, and the writing is poor

The author is really, I just read this book and I was really moved by the description of mother's family love. The true love between master and disciple under one person is also the finishing touch. The character of the protagonist at the beginning is really amazing. You lead me (mother) with gentleness and I lead the world with gentleness. I am born without three souls and it is difficult to live, but I try my best to survive. Even if there is no hope in the end, I will try my best to give back. Treat your teacher and sister sincerely, do something for them before you die, and you are not a virgin at the same time. But in the later period of the boy's song, due to the imbalance of the five gods, the character of the protagonist really changed again and again. One moment, Long Aotian, another moment, the second boy, one moment, crazy and crazy, and the other, as warm as jade. The switching of characters is incomprehensible. It is really uncomfortable. It is completely different from the original character. The protagonist who makes readers sincerely convinced is like a strong, brave, gentle fighter who fights against fate and suddenly turns into Long Aotian, a man with two diseases, crazy and double standards. They all suspect that the author has changed. The emotional scene with Qianluo is even more inexplicable. A woman who has nothing to do with him attacks the protagonist and is trapped by the protagonist. When she cries, the protagonist feels heartache and feels that he is not tolerated by nature. In a hurry, this woman kept following the protagonist regardless of his wishes, and the protagonist suddenly felt warm and concerned. The author wrote some reasons for this, but it was too fake and unreal. As an audience, it felt ridiculous. I had seen the protagonist's maternal love and master-disciple relationship described so well before, and suddenly came to describe Qianluo's feelings. The gap was so big that I doubted that he was not the same author.

After reading it, summary: there are too many typos, and I occasionally cut the knife with poison. The plot is good, but the order is confusing (specifically, the plot of the protagonist's experience in the British magic world is placed in the Luotian Dajiao, and the experience in Japan is not mentioned before, it feels very confusing) The idea is good, but it is too watery (things that rely on ancient texts or spell water can be placed in the post, and don't say I don't know what to do, many people do this) There are many shortcomings, it is probably too late to change now, after the VIP chapter is changed, you will have to buy it again, right? Too many typos can easily lead to violent death. Can't the author check it? Also, when I read the book, I felt that the author was inputting by voice, not considering Wubi input method or 26 keys? Never issue a knife. The moon elf who stabbed her in the back counts as one, and the woman who turned into a magical creature in the magical world counts as one. It is very easy to persuade her to quit. Using a knife when there are no regular readers can easily end her career (not everyone is an old man) Finally, the protagonist must solve the problem of the soul in a world under one person (at least it will not affect his practice and life), otherwise it will be really poisonous. Is it interesting to always cut the protagonist with a knife? Finally, when will I write RWBY?

Young Song Xing, the first few chapters are okay. After meeting the White-haired Fairy, the protagonist seemed to be a different person.

Others pointed out mistakes and accepted them with an open mind, but did not change them. I looked at four pictures and pointed out the typos. The author responded and did not change them. The relationship between the protagonist and Lu Jin was pointed out by readers, but the author accepted them with an open mind and did not change them.

Mainly because Douluo Dalu is one of my least favorite novels. Something like a hundred thousand year old soul ring is like a hundred thousand year old Da Luo Bai. All the books about Douluo in time travel in the introduction, just look at these two words and it is basically a bad book. You might as well write about the night.

Is this because of typos or typography or punctuation? It's a bit uncomfortable to watch.

All I can say is that it's so messy and has no such writing style but it's a nondescript and speechless blend of two worlds╮(╯＿╰)╭