Hong Kong Crime Saga: The Rise of Lei Luo

The book is not bad, but it's too tiring to read. The main character's development is too slow. I know the author wanted to write in more detail, but it went too far. It feels like the protagonist did so much, but it didn't really have any effect. What is his power base, and how has it developed? What's the point of writing all this if I don't even have my own small team?

Speaking both Mandarin and Cantonese at the same time. It's giving me a headache.

Everyone's here to see how Lei Luo becomes a detective and sets the rules; you're not providing any enjoyment at all.

I've looked at three pages and haven't seen any cheat codes. Could some expert please tell me if there are any cheat codes? If not, then this isn't for me.

Both Chasing the Dragon 1 and The Five Great Detectives of Money Empire are about Lei Luo, so the author could add some plot elements from there! Also, don't be a Mary Sue; this isn't a Mary Sue novel!

There is no position or rank of Deputy Inspector in the Hong Kong Police Force. If the author wants to write about the Hong Kong Police Force, they need to read more books about it, and some things should respect the real-world settings.

I don't know where these authors started... Half Cantonese, half Mandarin... It's giving me a headache... If you're so capable, write entirely in Cantonese, or at least in Mandarin... I really can't stand reading this anymore.

Chief Inspector Lui Lok-wah may seem impressive, but he's actually not very high-ranking. According to later job classifications, he's not even a superintendent; he's more like an inspector or chief inspector. Where does Hong Kong's political hierarchy work? Superintendents and chief inspectors are just barely considered mid-level officers; only the Commissioner of Police and Deputy Commissioner of Police are truly mid-level leaders.

I read ten chapters, and there was too much fluff and too much filler. I have absolutely no desire to continue reading.

That knife swung so suddenly, it caught everyone off guard! My heart aches for the author's little ding-ding; how could it just disappear like that? It's not easy to survive in the palace these days; who can you possibly fight? Just trust the doctor; they'll definitely be able to put it back. As long as it's there, that's enough. Whether it's usable or not, let's not worry about that.