Hong Kong Crime Saga: The Rise of Lei Luo

The book is pretty good, but I was tired from reading it. The main character develops too slowly. I know the author wanted to write more delicately, but it was too much. It feels like the protagonist has done so many things, but in the end they have no effect. What is his power and how has it developed? What's the point of writing so much without even having a small team of his own? Where are the brothers who work hard? Without any background of their own, they are just taking advantage of the situation throughout the process. I know the author wants to write a more realistic protagonist, but have you considered the readers' feelings? It's too slow. It's over 100,000 words, and readers can't afford it. When readers get bored, they won't care how good you write later, and they won't read it anymore. After it is removed from the bookshelf, who will care about how violent you are in the later stage? Your own territory, team, and weapons. Climb up to a certain height and so on. Strong medicine is needed in the early stage. For example, the so-called martial arts, you can also write, Tai Chi health care, learning to kill enemies at the eighth level. It's okay if you don't take action. Once you take action, it will mean life or death. In those days in Xiangjiang, those who could fight could indeed earn face. Having face can make people rise. People of that era cannot think in terms of this era. How many big bosses did not rely on their fists to rise to prominence in the early stage? Only by defeating a big boss will your subordinates be convinced and willing to follow you with all their lives. Lei Luo just used his brains to get up, but look at the results, how many people are really willing to sacrifice their lives for him? Once the ghost guy wants to touch him, the people below will become alienated. If he has a solid foundation and conquers the world, the brothers will naturally support him. Even if he doesn't want to be in a higher position, the subordinates will not agree. This is the gap.

One in Mandarin and one in Cantonese. It looks like I have a headache.

Everyone is here to see how Lei Luo can be a detective and set the rules. You are not happy at all

I looked at three pictures and didn't see any gold fingers. Can anyone tell me if there are any gold fingers? If there are no gold fingers, this is not my cup of tea.

Chasing the Dragon 1 and the Five Detectives of Money Empire both talk about Lei Luo. The author can find some plot points to add in here! And Farewell Madonna, this is not a Madonna novel!

There is no position or rank of deputy inspector in the Hong Kong police force. If the author wants to write about the Hong Kong police, he needs to read more books about the Hong Kong police force. Some things still need to respect the real-world settings.

I don't know who these authors started from. It's half Cantonese and half Mandarin. It makes my head hurt. You have the ability to write it all in Cantonese, otherwise it's in Mandarin. I really can't stand watching this.

Chief Inspector Lei Luohua looks awesome, but he is still not in the mainstream. According to the later job classification, even the superintendent is not an inspector or chief inspector. Where is the political hierarchy in Hong Kong? Those superintendents and chief superintendents have just entered the middle-level threshold. The police commissioner and deputy commissioner are the serious middle-level leaders.

After reading ten chapters, there is too much nonsense and too watery. I have absolutely no desire to read on.

This sword swing caught people off guard. It hurts the author's heart, how could his little penis just disappear like this? It's not easy to get around in the palace now. Who can you fight? Just trust the doctor. He will definitely bring you back. As long as you have it, we don't care if you can use it.