Zhu Xian: Qingyundu Lingren

After spending a few days paying to read it, I still think it's worth it. Advantages: 1. I am a fan of Zhu Xian fan novels. Basically, I have read them all. Most of the second set information is taken from the perfect game "Zhu Xian 1-3". I am a little tired of reading it. 2. The second setting of this book is based on the original work. The protagonist's cultivation and magical powers are also quite reasonable. The steps are not exaggerated. One beats ten. 3. The description of the scene inside Qingyun Gate is very good and warm. Although it has changed a bit, it is very reasonable. 4. The writing is excellent, the jokes are appropriate, the words and sentences are very smooth, and the expressions are clear. 5. The plot direction does not completely follow the plot of Zhu Xian. The plot and heroine created by myself are also very good and reasonable. 6. The protagonist's character, words and deeds are also very consistent with the soul-piercing Du Bishu. Disadvantages: 1. Too little excitement 2. In order to fit in with Du Bishu's life, the natal magic weapon is really not exciting. 3. There are indeed not many descriptions of Qingyunmen. 4. The fighting scenes are well described at the beginning, but the rest is basically passed by in a flash, and you can't feel the scene if it's not exciting. 5. Unfinished. In short, it is a very good Zhu Xian fan novel. I feel that if it were not unfinished, there would be a lot more to write about. The plot is gradually getting better, but it was suddenly cut off. I hope the author can write a better book~ See you again👋

In the original novel, Nakata Buyi is a short and fat man, so why is the supporting character introduced as weighing only 129?

I have finished watching it now, but I have a question. Ummm, I feel a bit uncomfortable. The plot of the Seven Meridians Meeting and the Dripping Blood Cave seems to be an attempt to bring Xue Qi and Xiaofan together. However, the Necromantic Abyss and the attack on the Qingyun Sect are clearly trying to bring Xiaofan and Baguio together. Do you mean you want to accept both of them? So here is the question. I am trying to figure out the character of the character in Zhu Xian. It's impossible to collect both of them. Besides, the materials used to gather souls are prepared for the use of the Infatuation Curse. Isn't this closer to the original work? It seems to want Baguio to have a chance to be resurrected after using the Infatuation Curse. So where does this play put Xue Qi, well, the above is very unsatisfactory Wu Qiba said a lot, oh, okay, let's take a break.

Don't tell me, Yan Hong is more suitable than Lu Xueqi, she is a normal woman

Personally, I feel like having a harem or something, I can't write emotional scenes, my writing is not good, it can really persuade a lot of people to quit, it's not as good as having a single heroine, and no heroine insurance

Dear book friends, this book is on the right track. The current results have initially met Mu Ping's expectations. It is certain that the book will be completed over one million copies. We are here to recruit supporting roles, and we hope everyone will actively contribute ideas. The supporting character can be a human, a demon, a ghost, or a monster (all very common in the Zhuxian world), and you can also set your own talents and abilities. Compared to other Xianxia novels, the world of Zhuxian is a low-law world, so don't be too talented in terms of talent, otherwise I won't be able to achieve perfection. In addition, due to limited writing power, Mu Ping will definitely be unable to follow the original work. However, he has also read five or even six or seven copies of the original work and books such as "Zhu Xian 2", "Zhu Xian Wilderness" and "Slaughter of Immortals" (these are Xiao Da's masterpieces). I must want to make the characters more consistent. If you are interested in this aspect, we can discuss it together. I sometimes delete negative reviews in book circles, not because I am shy and afraid of being scolded, but because a reader who has never subscribed to any book will criticize any book when he catches it. I really look down on this kind of person. Mu Ping used to watch pirated versions, but he wouldn't just go to the genuine section to criticize them if he felt unhappy. It was unethical. The Qidian coins now given away by Qidian are also valuable coins. You can get ten points by watching a ten-second video. Forty or fifty points in a day will definitely be enough to subscribe. Please support me when it is launched.                                  It's too early to say it, there are still more than 100,000 words left before it can be published. It is not on the shelves yet. If you have any good suggestions, I may modify it as appropriate. Thanks! The supporting role comes into play!

There are systems that can't accept it. It's fine as long as you make individual hacks that aren't too outrageous. But if you have to write about the system, you can't stand it. After all, there is a system there that reminds you all the time that you are being monitored. Not to mention privacy, even your life is casually destroyed by others who are unhappy, or from another perspective, the world is false, which is enough to drive people crazy.

The protagonist is like a monkey, jumping up and down

The author deliberately sent the girl to read so annoying!

Now I think Yan Hong is more suitable than Lu Xueqi as the heroine. After all, the protagonist's temperament doesn't get along with Lu Xueqi's temperament. I think Yan Hong is fine.

The protagonist of the Zhu Xian novel is Zhang Xiaofan, which one is it? Please tell me

I have always believed that the magic weapon in the Zhuxian world has no soul without the suona.

I saw the introduction saying that the system will be frozen soon and I lost the desire to watch it.

Don't know what's going on? The more I look at it, the more I want to vomit!

Let's open a harem, Xiaohuan + Baguio + Lu Xueqi + Jin Ping'er

What's the point in the Zhuxian world if you don't practice flying swords?

It's system writing again. Without a system, you can't write a book, right?

You have to follow your own style when traveling through time. If you follow the characters in the original text, it won't be interesting at all.

This ending of WC caught me off guard

Although I hope the heroine is Lu Xueqi. But it still feels a bit peaceful. In the original work, I feel that the male protagonist has an ambiguous relationship with the women 😢😢😢😢 Guess __ Yan Hong is also okay! You can basically confirm it after seeing this, and the heroine also has that. . . Forgot the name (Li Chanjuan) Looking at the Moon in Red Clothes in Jingchuan, Yanhong in Tsing Yi

I haven't made a sound for a long time and have been paying attention silently.

The writing is good, better than many pure white texts

Are you worthy of the book friends who have already subscribed to the book? But the writing gets worse and worse later on, including the death of the heroine, which is less thrilling. Author, you need to reflect on it. If you write so well in the early stage, why is it so weak in the follow-up?

I can't imagine what the magic weapon of pig's feet is.

During this time, I watched it in the browser. Overall, it was pretty good and creative, but the ending was too hasty and rushed. Did she marry Xiaohuan? ? Then Yanhong sent wedding clothes? ? Or something... 😰, this ending is quite open 🤭 When you have money later, you can make up for the full subscription {"NickName":"Mu Yuyan","UserId":317095928} {"TopicId":"776819114126802944","TopicName":"Praise this novel"}

A good Xianxia, ​​the same person has arrived at the Exorcist Taoist Priest...😴😴

. . . I basically skipped the ghost hunting plot. . Just read the title, not the content. . The killing part is still okay. I don't think it means the author's writing is not good, I just chose the Zhuxian fanfic because I wanted to read about Zhuxian. You can have a ghost-catching upgrade system, but at least you have to rely on the main line, and leave the main line alone to travel around the world to catch monsters and improve your strength. . At once. . . . After all, he is still a fellow Zhu Xian.

I've spent a lot of time on this 🤔

Tian Buyi's height matches the protagonist very well. Let's make a couple.

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