Douluo: the Legend of Hu Liena

What did you change their soul strikes to? Hu Liena's martial spirit is a fox, and you have to embody the spirit of a fox. Also, your description of Aihu is too retarded. She has to be sacrificed just after meeting her. Hu Liena was born in Wuhun Palace. Is it possible for Bibi Dong to let him absorb a head soul bone that is only 3,000 years old? (I don't mean anything by saying this. I'm just expressing my personal opinion.)

He reached level 20 at the age of seven, which is really amazing, even more powerful than the Shrek Seven Monsters.

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I would like to ask, why do the protagonists in Douluo fan fiction have to have martial arts spirits? Isn't it okay to write about other cultivation methods? ? ? Like breaking through the limiter or something.

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Author: If I'm on holiday, I'll have two chapters a day. It's not easy to stay up until now just to watch your updates. It turns out it's only one chapter 😭

Don't change the team name. The name of their team was decided by Bibi Dong. It can't be decided privately. If the author wants to change it, it would be better to have the protagonist ask Bibi Dong.

How to say it? The plot is too watery and too slow. There is no need to write so many useless things in Wuhun Academy. After all, it is not the main plot. I suggest that the golden generation be born as soon as possible so that the plot can be promoted quickly. Because the plot is too slow. More than 90 chapters will still feel boring in the early stage. Please speed up the plot and don't write things that are too useless for the plot. Moreover, I don't think Hu Liena's character is very good. It's not good to act coquettishly every day. I still like the character of Hu Liena in the original work and suggest the author change it.

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The author is a bit of a eunuch these days.

The author has made Bibi Dong a saint. Every time I read it, I have a sense of déjà vu from Confucius' teachings. I seriously doubt that the author is writing about Bibi Dong. No matter how bad Bibi Dong is, he can still be regarded as a hero-level figure. The Bibi Dong you wrote is too kind, and the character is not established. Isn't it good to be a villain and counterattack? I have to be a human saint.

Why can Xie Yue absorb soul rings beyond the limit?

I hope Bibi Dong's character won't be changed too outrageously. I just think of a person who has lost hope in the world. Why is he still so sentimental?

More updates, okay? I hope the early timeline is faster, otherwise, I think many people will lose their temper. The subject matter of the novel is very good and very attractive, but most people who read fan fiction still prefer to rely on the plot.

In the original work, Hu Liena is most likely an ordinary commoner's mutated martial spirit daughter, whose talent was spotted by Bibi Dong and accepted as her disciple. First, there are no relevant martial soul masters in the Wuhun Palace. Secondly, there is a high probability that Bibi Dong's apprentice will be a Soul Douluo. There is no reason to get a titled Douluo's daughter to become his disciple. Thirdly, if it is the daughter of a soul master, the soul master will most likely go to the killing city to pick up someone. This is what any parent would do. But it didn't.

Come on, I don't know when I will write about Tang San