Isn't It True That Some People Think It's Difficult to Become an Immortal?

I think the author's creative attitude is good when he can rewrite bad chapters. I also liked the last book. Compared with many authors who ignore readers' cold treatment, it is too conscientious.

The plot is clichéd, the writing is blunt, and it's bad writing from every angle. This is true of all the books I've read by this author so far. But it's cheap. This kind of mindless writing is especially useful when listening to books when you can't sleep. It works better than Guo Degang. I recommend trying it if you have insomnia.

I like the novels written by this author very much. I have been reading pirated copies, so I went to Qidian to support the author. Thank you for the joy you bring me. As a student party, we don't have much money, so we can only have some ideas. This novel is very interesting.

This book is really a bit poisonous, the protagonist doesn't look like the protagonist, and the supporting characters don't look like supporting characters. The protagonist is written as the supporting role, and the supporting role is written as the protagonist, regardless of priority. Everyone in the book has a collective intelligence, like a three-year-old child. There are many more poisonous points that I won't point out one by one.

Red envelopes are given out, please add some 🤓

It's pretty good-looking at the front, but it's getting more and more boring at the back. Author, see for yourself how many people think that the senior brother should be the protagonist. The previous book was very successful in writing such a big brother protagonist. This book just wants to copy the formula of the previous book. This book is crazy about adding big brother to the drama. However, in this book, the big brother is only a supporting role and not the protagonist, so it seems to steal the show. You don't have the writing power to write a book with two protagonists and two storylines. If you want to write the same routine, just write it well and don't add some random things. I understand that you want to innovate, but the original style limits you. While you innovate, you can't help but stick to the route of the previous book, which makes this book look like a stitch monster, which is really boring. I can't control what you want to write, author. I'm just telling you my thoughts for your reference. I believe there must be many people who like the current Stitch Monster style. It's up to you whether you want to change it or not.

Shock! ! ! The identity of the original author

Well! Friends who have just read this book, the senior brother is the protagonist, the senior brother is the protagonist, the senior brother is the protagonist, important things should be said three times! ! ! If you want to see Ye Ping as the protagonist, just skip the second volume, 🙂🙂

Saving the tenth princess is worth a jade pendant? What settings? ? Are you forcibly lowering the IQ of a supporting character? What writing style. If you don't accept other people's opinions, you will always be at a low level!

This is a light novel with humor at its core and cuteness in contrast. Very suitable for relaxing and having fun. Please be sure to read his classification clearly. This is a light novel and not an orthodox fairy tale. Here you pursue logic, plot, and skills and moves. . Did you go to the wrong set? This is the same as when you go to the circus to watch a clown perform, but then you find the clown's performance too exaggerated 😥. Many people can't accept the clown show, so don't watch it. This book review is to tell you that if you pursue the logic, plot, skills and moves, and passionate PK of orthodox immortality writing, then please do not read this book. Don't rush in and scold the author 😅 Of course, if you are here to relax and entertain and enjoy the laughter brought by various exaggerated contrasts, this book is very good.

I happened to read this book today and made some comments on the plot I saw at that time. (Just use your brain to make up for the baggage and patch it) I believe that the only way you can break the game at that time is that his masters and brothers are seriously injured and have amnesia, and then cooperate with the protagonist to get the memory and strength back little by little. This is the most suitable way to break the game with your brain at the beginning. His senior sister is a protector, but she can't wake up the master, because the enemy's power has always been entrenched in the consciousness of his master and brother. Once a previous acquaintance is exposed, it will explode and cause him to lose his memory again or die. But his master has profound magic power. While playing house in the world of mortals, he still has a spark of inspiration in his heart and has been waiting for the opportunity. This is the first time for the little junior sister to try, and the second time for the little junior brother! In this way, senior brother and senior sister, you can cheat, but you can leave suspense about what is so special about the little junior sister, so, so, so, so, so! Isn't it beautiful? 😆 What a pity Tianhu started.

I feel like I'm going to give up on the book. It's really a bit too poisonous. It's better to go for the system stream or the golden finger stream. A bunch of rubbish can cheat and make up at will and create a unique genius 🤤. Isn't it scary?

Very nice and interesting. But after reading too much, I feel boring and the same. Come on, author, you have lost me!

After reading a hundred chapters, give an objective review of this book In fact, the subject matter chosen by the author is not particularly novel, but it gives people a refreshing feeling when reading it. This is the most valuable thing in my opinion. A good beginning means that the basic traffic of the book will be high, and it can occupy the god's position if it is written steadily in the future. 1. In terms of narrative rhythm, the author did not do it perfectly, which can be seen from the redundancy of some chapters, but the author did a good job in making it relaxed and enjoyable, at least I laughed out loud. 2. As for the plot, I don't know if the author has an outline. From the Qingzhou competition, the foreshadowing and rhythm have changed greatly, which seems very abrupt, and the characters of the protagonist and supporting characters have collapsed to a certain extent. The author is a little too impatient and eager to break through the status quo. 3. Related characters, I don't know if the author himself felt that the style of painting was different for the character of the senior sister. Anyway, many book friends found it quite interesting, maybe because there was no foreshadowing and description. The eldest brother performed superbly in the early stage, but the pullback became increasingly weak (excessive pretentiousness caused some book friends to resent it). I feel that the eldest brother's brainless performance will collapse if there is no background to fill the gap in the later stage. In my opinion, the performance of the master is very good, the output is stable, and it feels like Li Wangsheng (animation) The other characters are not very outstanding The general suggestion is that the author should not rush for success, but can try to foreshadow the plot. The plot should be light and funny but not static. You can dig holes in daily life and fill them later, otherwise it will easily cause aesthetic fatigue.

Haha, this book is so funny! I've seen Di Hua in supporting roles before, but this is the first time I've seen Di Hua in the main role. Heiye is really creative. I like the character Ye Ping very much. He is an ordinary person with a simple mind. After being deceived by his senior brothers and sisters, he continued to think over and over again and gradually changed. But cultivation is getting stronger and stronger👍. Son of the True Plane, don't some people really think it's difficult to become an immortal? !

The first few dozen chapters of this book felt pretty good, but later on I felt it was a bit overdone and felt like it was dragging.

The Dabi Illusion Formation forced a lot of people back. Unfortunately, the logic in the latest chapters is completely illogical, as if the people have been replaced. It was fine before, but why did it suddenly collapse?

Although I don't know why so many people are not optimistic about this book, I think the first three chapters are quite innovative and interesting. What happened to Duokai? Don't you, the author, need to eat? There is nothing wrong with publishing another book to ensure the update and quality of the previous one. The above is purely personal experience. Don't spray if you don't like it.

When I saw this title, I immediately felt angry...

It took me two days to finish reading this book. I stayed up late to read it and read it as soon as I fell asleep. The book has a lot of laughs (I laughed for 2 minutes after reading five chapters). The only drawback is that I think the character named Mo Xuan should be aggravated but the author didn't (I originally expected the protagonist to know that she is Taoist Mo Xuan, but there is no such plot. It's a pity). There is also the junior junior sister Chen Lingrou. Why is it not aggravated? The most important thing is why the map is so small. Why is there no fairy world or the like? ? ? I hope the author will write a chapter on the fairy world or the divine world to make up for these regrets, otherwise this book will be unworthy of a laugh-out-loud book.

When will it be released? This way I can urge you to update more confidently.

This update speed will make this book useless!

Who is going to put the author in front of the computer to write for 24 hours 😃

No one really thinks that the author will update twice 😒

I feel like this book is very good at the beginning, but then it starts to fall apart. It is recommended that the author write a spiritual recovery article in a large format, a classic one such as Devouring the Starry Sky or Overwhelming Spiritual Energy. This way, it is easier to create realistic plots and give a sense of immersion 😊

I'm over thirty this year. I guess I won't be able to finish this book before I turn fifty.

It's gone, it's updated once a day, let's keep it for now 🥱

I came here for the non-heroine, and it turned out that I was not in the wrong trap. Hehehe. I really liked the character of Su Changyu from the beginning, including everyone in the sect. His daily attire is so cute, but it turns out that the author is going to be a loser. I am looking for a book to read these days. It's really not easy QAQ In my opinion, the author's writing is quite good. Everyone in this novel is a carrot and a vegetable, everyone has their own preferences, and everyone has their own taste for it. It also proves to the readers that it is not without merit, and there is no need for self-reflection. It's great ( ･᷅ὢ･᷄ ). As for the character writing problem that many people have mentioned, I don't think it's a big deal. Should this article be positioned as a group portrait article? The protagonist is the main point of view, and the seven senior brothers and sisters can also play the same role as the protagonist. In addition, there are so many supporting characters, and it is normal for Ye Ping to have less scenes. However, it is indeed difficult to write a group portrait article. If you can read it, it is a good article, whether it collapses or not ←_← As long as the author believes that he is omnipotent, he can always make up a pretty ending with a little effort. ps: Besides, as long as I write three to five million words, there is nothing wrong with the plot of the protagonist and other senior brothers each occupying hundreds of thousands of words✔ (Quietly: The story of the senior brother has just begun, and the story of the second senior brother has only scratched the surface. I am looking forward to the others. The master makes lunch so fast, and the little old man is quite interesting. It is also the climax of the book, right? After all, the master sacrifices to heaven. Boundless power? ) Although I still feel that it is a pity that the author ended it like this. Why is it that 60,000 words can't be written much? The only thing I hope is that the author can give a more complete and good ending. ฅ۶•ﻌ•♡ Looking forward to the next book, I am going to read the senior brother's book hahhh, I hope it will suit my taste. After all, senior senior brother Su in this article still likes it. (Although it seems that the other article also collapsed????)

Book reviews are talents. Since reading book reviews, I feel that I can become an immortal. My name is Lu Qi. The land of land is ordinary and strange. Lu Qi. ……

I read this book for two days in a row and finally finished it. There are some problems with this book, which is true, but I have read the novel for so many years and it is still tolerable. In fact, I feel that the author can still save this book. It is a pity to cut it in half.