Senior Brother Mediocre

A bit of advice for anyone who wants to read this book. Don't read it until the end of the Immortal World chapter. The rest is so terrible that it's a waste of money and life to continue reading it 🤭

The more I write, the uglier it becomes. None of the early pitfalls are filled in. Some characters are basically just written down and forgotten. The whole book only focuses on one issue, which is the life experience of the protagonist. Everything else is dispensable. And the biggest problem is that the characters in the later period, including the protagonist, become less and less soulful the more they are written, and some events are also forced to be pretentious. Okay, but if you pretend too much, it will become more and more difficult to go back and explain. The result of this is that the world in the novel will become bigger and bigger, and there will be more and more pitfalls and more and more famous characters. I can say that characters such as Ziyun and Linglong Saint will basically not appear again, because it is really difficult to explain when they do. . As a villain, he is also quite speechless and difficult to write. He always explains that there are people in the upper world, and then it loops endlessly. I still don't know what the protagonist is doing and what his purpose is. Whether this book is good or not, I can say it is good, but it is not a masterpiece. It is just like a product coming off the production line. I believe that too many people have read this kind of book. I really rarely rewarded this book at the beginning. This is my first book, but after arriving in the fairy world, the more I read, the less I want to read it. The more I read, the less interested I am in rewarding this book. I really feel that this book is such a pity.

This book can be said to reflect the daily life of most readers, and it is very immersive. I think I am usually at home alone, but reading this book makes me realize how troublesome it is for me to go out. No wonder everyone wears a mask when going out and is very low-key. Please add some sperm, newbies don't understand the usefulness of adding it, but I see that all the handsome guys like me do it.

It's finally time for Lu Changsheng to ascend to the fairy world. At this time, Lu Changsheng is in the void of the fairy world, but the protagonist's extraordinary is not only shining in front of others, but also having a different experience from ordinary ascendants even when he is rushing! And in a mysterious place, there is a group of extremely handsome people who are reading about his path to ascension. Lu Changsheng, who was full of excitement about his trip to the immortal world, didn't seem to notice that his current teleportation path was different. A trace of demonic energy began to appear in the void around him, and it didn't take long for the entire space to be filled with demonic energy. As if feeling the change in the outside atmosphere, Xuanhuang Tower appeared automatically and began to absorb the surrounding demonic energy. There was a demonic energy that seemed to be more than just demonic energy. When Linglong Tower forcibly sucked it in, Lu Changsheng heard a roar. "Who is it? Do you dare?" And our Lu Changsheng couldn't help but sigh at the great intentions of the immortal world, allowing the ascended people to adapt to the atmosphere of the demon world at the moment of ascension. He took a deep breath and responded loudly to the void. "It's me! I'm Lu Changsheng, thank you, senior!" Demon Realm—— In the Demon Realm at this time, the people in the Demon Realm are summoning the soul of the Demon Emperor. In the middle of the altar, the demonic arrays are exuding strong demonic aura. When they feel that the demonic aura is slowly starting to become richer and the aura contained in it is getting stronger, the eyes of the people in the Demon Realm begin to become firm. When all the demonic energy gathered in the middle and formed a figure, the entire demon world cheered. Just hearing a "bang!", The surrounding demon world's senior officials trembled in their hearts! He knelt down and shouted in a hurry. "We are looking forward to welcoming the return of the Demon Emperor, and sweeping the fairy world is just around the corner!" But at this moment, Lu Changsheng fell solidly on the altar after falling from the ascending void. He slowly stood up and was thinking about the lack of ascending service, but the bursts of cheers that rang in his ears made Lu Changsheng stunned! ! "I traveled through time again??" "No, I heard the word fairy world..." "But why did they say they welcome the devil emperor??" ps, if you want to know what happened in the devil world, please listen to the next chapter for the breakdown! ! Please give me likes. If you like it, please say something and let me know who the handsome pen is.

In the early stages of this book, the protagonist was very strong but the outside was relatively low-level and he was just starting out, so he could be a little more relaxed and funny But later on when the plot became more and more high-end and his identity became more and more advanced The author was asked by a lot of readers to write funny stories, which directly led to the fact that he had a very high-level background, but he described it in a very confusing way, which made him collapse on the spot —————————————— In fact, the rhythm of the author's novel is a bit like that of Tai Shang Bu Yi, who wrote "Anti-Routine System" And the way of collapse is also very different from it. It is also in the later stage, with a very advanced background, but he has been writing nonsense and comedy, which has led to the plot lying flat all the way. The climax of the plot itself is not as exciting, and it is directly aesthetic fatigue But the anti-routine system is slightly better, he is straight up. . . The eunuch updated on the spot I also summarized the two novels to give an understanding of the reason for the collapse. At present, I think it should be, because the two novels collapsed in very similar ways So before the collapse, some people in the comment area asked the protagonist to write funny things. I directly refuted it, but still did not stop it, so it is a pity

This novel should be mainly funny + plot. Apart from the mindless dialogue and excessive pretentiousness, the content of the article is still quite interesting. I hope the author can reduce some mindless dialogue in the future. After all, some other holy sons and saints of the Holy Land must be heroes among people. The dialogue that is too stupid seems to be a bit intellectual...

It's been a long time since I've seen such a hilarious and hilarious novel. As long as it's a novel with a sense of empathy, I'll say something. I didn't quite understand what other people said about Xiaobai Wen at that time. They all understood and realized it, but I didn't understand it very well. It seems that I also realized it. I followed others' opinions and gradually entered a misunderstanding. I had this feeling after reading this novel. No matter what kind of novel it is, it still depends on the writer's creativity and positioning. I have become an old bookworm. I personally believe that the essence of novels is not to tell great truths or to study academic papers. The essence of novels is the word "cool". Many book friends have different objections when it comes to routines. I think that routines cannot be written. Routines are like real estate. Whether it is luxurious or not depends on the decoration. The same is true for writing novels. So where can readers enjoy it? First, the author determines what type of story to write, such as fantasy, suspense, thriller, etc., And then considers what kind of creative way to write the story, which depends on the author's expressive advantages in certain aspects, such as being good at lightheartedness and comedy, good at plot control, and good at writing skills. These are the sources of excitement in the novel. How to write it is a test of the author's true skills. Then there are the creative routines, which are attractive and open to imagination. Finally, there is the book title. An attractive book title will often have a considerable click-through rate. "Brother Ordinary" If you look at the title of this book, it is like walking on the road and seeing a banknote on the side of the road. People can't take their eyes away from it. I have read a lot of novels, regardless of history, romance, fantasy, etc., And found that the stories with light-hearted and funny plots often feature wet nurses. Wet nurses can increase the survival rate and can effectively provide long-lasting output. Being funny is not an easy thing. If you are funny for the sake of being funny, the point of laughter will be greatly reduced. I think authors who can use words to bring happiness to readers are all great literary creators. It's easy to be funny, but I think it's not easy to make others laugh. What I want to say is that this novel successfully made me laugh out loud. The author's ideas are novel and every plot is unexpected. A living novel depends on whether the author can create a few representative and vivid characters. Liu Qingfeng is trustworthy - he is so tight-lipped, that is... Nothing wrong with him, rumors are flying everywhere. Zhao Chen's Pathfinder Pioneer - Only one scoop of three thousand weak water is taken. It's really... No more, no less, exactly one scoop, referred to as a white scoop. Wang Fugui does not take the ordinary path - the road to becoming an immortal is getting wider and wider, and he always creates miracles inadvertently. The vivid characters reflected into my soul, sometimes making me laugh out loud, and sometimes making me laugh like a pig. Are you serious about being funny? The author is very promiscuous... Ah...

It's a mess, and the Buddhist world doesn't say anything about it. What happened to that monk Xuanxin? Didn't Mother Buddha see him taking charge of the Buddhist world? What about the more than one hundred mythical beasts conquered by the Supreme Hall? After entering the tower, I never came out. How many junior sisters are there? It's been ambiguous for so long, what's the ending? What about the master who is "as close as father and son"? Still freezing in the ice? Where is Gu Aotian? Aren't the eight divine beasts combined? Why does it seem like there are only unicorns and pandas? Where is Yunrou? Did you not even mention the result of your desperate protection?

The book is very nice. I got it from a pirated version. (I have a hard conscience and it is not easy for the author to write a book.) I gave him a reward of ten yuan for the time being (I am poor). I will reward you later when I have some spare money.

I liked this book very much at first. I had a lot of fun reading it. No matter how hard the protagonist pretended to be, I didn't find it annoying. Instead, I felt very happy and didn't feel bored. But when I arrived in the fairy world, I slowly began to lose sight of it. The pace was no longer as fast as before, and all kinds of nonsense gradually turned into a classic slap-in-the-face novel. The pretense is there, but the joyful air is gone. In the past, even if the male protagonist in the author's works was serious, he found it very interesting and made people laugh or cry. Now I feel like the mythical beasts and supporting characters are responsible for the comedy. The content becomes more difficult to understand and complex, and it is very high-level, but it is no longer the original style of this book. I lost the joy of reading this book, so I had no choice but to give it up. Of course, the book is still a good book, and I wish the author better and better as he writes more. 🌹

[Participation-Story-Netherworld Chapter] Lu Changsheng looked at the place he came to and fell silent. Why are you so fat, little brother? This poor place is the fairy world. Hiss, God must have killed me quietly because he thought I was too handsome and was afraid that I would threaten his status. No, it's not my fault that I'm handsome. If you can't stand it, you can bring me back to Earth. It's unnatural to bring me to this place where there is no one. While Lu Changsheng was complaining, a creature suddenly appeared in front of him. Lu Changsheng was startled. "Are you from the outside world?" Lu Changsheng looked at the creature in front of him who was dressed like a primitive man and nodded hesitantly. The human Lu Changsheng nodded and looked very excited. Suddenly ran away, joking as he ran: "Come quickly, someone from the outside can come in." Lu Changsheng looked at him running away at a speed that was inconsistent with his own, and touched his face in confusion. It shouldn't be, hiss, he couldn't be thinking..., Thinking of this possibility, Lu Changsheng immediately used his magic to escape. No, he was retreating. How could the little fairy man say he was running away. As he ran, Lu Changsheng felt that something was wrong. His legs became spirit and started running on their own. Also, where was the spiritual power he had gained through hard training? Lu Changsheng's legs carried him for a long time and suddenly stopped. Lu Changsheng looked at the pile of primitive people in front of him and was silent. Didn't Teacher Qingyun say that good-looking people are not very unlucky? But why didn't he fall into the hands of a wolf? Instead, he was brought up by himself. Lu Changsheng watched them walking over. They came closer. Close. Lu Changsheng closed his eyes, forget it, just die. At worst, he will be a good man again in a hundred years. I, Lu Changsheng, have never been afraid of death, and I will never ascend in my next life. Here is a warning to fellow Taoists: There is danger in the fairy world, so be careful when ascending. Lu Changsheng waited for a long time with his eyes closed. No, I'm still alive. Opening his eyes, he saw a group of people kneeling in front of him. There is a conspiracy! They are having trouble! The people in the Nether Realm looked at the immortal in front of them, not only tears filled their eyes, but after thousands of years, someone finally came to take them home! The spirit clan has been guarding this place under the orders of the Emperor of Heaven for thousands of years. Finally, someone came to pick them up. They are still such beautiful immortals, even more beautiful than the Emperor of Heaven worshiped by their clan. Seeing the immortal closing his eyes tightly, as if practicing, the spirit tribe did not dare to disturb him and knelt beside the immortal until the immortal completed his training. This is what Lu Changsheng saw. After understanding everything, Lu Changsheng remained silent. Isn't ascension to the immortal world? Could this be Heaven's disdain for a person from another world like himself? No, brother, as long as you let me go back to Wuzhou, I guarantee that my body and mind will be yours. Lu Changsheng was thinking as he walked, and unknowingly, he walked onto the altar. "Thank you, Immortal, for bringing my clan back to the immortal world." Lu Changsheng was startled by the voice, and then he realized that he was actually standing on a stage, looking at the hopeful faces below, feeling a little uneasy. Immortal, he even did the splits when he ascended, and he doesn't even know where the immortal world is. What should I do? If I say that I am not a fairy, will I be killed? I am not afraid of wiping my neck with a knife, but I am afraid that they will put me in the pot and add some chopped green onion and coriander. It seems that you have to rely entirely on your own deception, no, your eloquence, as a salesman, even a lame person can deceive you. Just when Lu Changsheng was about to open his mouth, he saw a golden light blooming in the sky. He felt the world spin and found that he had come to a beautiful place with beautiful mountains and clear waters. The Ling tribe people knelt down to Lu Changsheng and shouted, "Thank you, the Immortal. We are willing to follow the Immortal." Lu Changsheng was stunned. No, I haven't started cheating yet. At this time, a group of people flew from the sky, "Who is trespassing into the Beidou Palace!" Lu Changsheng wanted to faint before he could ascend. No, he had only been in this world for four years, why did he have to suffer this? He was still a baby. The Spirit Tribe people on the other side were excited, and they were all gearing up, "There is no need for immortals to take action against these minions." Before Lu Changsheng could react, the Spirit Tribe people were just one child each, no, they beat the group of people to death with one punch. Lu Changsheng was silent. It's so violent. If they find out that they are weak, will they beat themselves into scum? Well, that's a problem. Lu Changsheng wanted to sneak away, but just as he was about to sneak away, he found this group of people kneeling around him again. Looking at the majestic group of people who came, now not even ashes left, Lu Changsheng swallowed. Pretending to be a magic stick, he said, "Since you have come out, just do what you want to do." "My clan has sworn that whoever can bring my clan out is the master of my spiritual clan, the Immortal, you are the one who will bring us out. Come, we have no choice but to follow you." "Yes, I have sworn that I will marry anyone who can let me see the green water and green mountains." Lu Changsheng trembled when he saw the girl who was stronger than him. "Please let us follow you!" "I, Liu Liuliu, swear here to follow the Immortal for the rest of my life and never betray, otherwise heaven will strike with lightning." "I am Yo-Yo..." "I, Liu Liuliu..." Lu Changsheng was stunned when he heard the names of this group of people⊙∀⊙! This is a time of forced buying and selling! However, I swear, it should work. He probably won't be beaten to death by them. In this way, Lu Changsheng gained the allegiance of the ancient spirit clan, giving him a perfect start to the beautiful life of pretending, ahem, practicing in the fairy world.

What a crappy novel, I was reading it in the middle of the night, and my brother who was sleeping next to me suddenly slapped me in the face! Why are you laughing so late at night? ! Then he grabbed it, looked at it, and suddenly slapped me! Plus a kick! You told me to read some good novels, but you didn't call me!

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Let me tell you how I feel about this book. The writing is really good at the beginning, but I can't say this much. The whole look and feel is also quite atmospheric. Well, this atmosphere doesn't just mean those cheats, I mean the atmosphere that I feel through the description. Maybe my wording isn't quite accurate, but that's roughly what it means. But as it goes on, the more people feel that the author's description is a bit petty. And more and more people feel that it is pieced together and forced to write. It's a bit like I'm short of inspiration. I'm pushing too hard at the front and there's no energy left behind. In fact, the author can take a few days off to reorganize his thoughts. Take your time. It can be seen from the beginning that the author has the writing skills, but he ran out of inspiration for a while. I hope the author can rest for a few days and be able to function normally when writing later.

Those who had pirated copies felt ashamed after reading the author's last tract, so they all ordered the book to make up for the fees they had not paid before. I feel so personally connected to this book that I don't want it to be discontinued! 😁

This book has become useless. Many characters from the early stage have disappeared after writing, and the pretense is becoming more and more embarrassing, forced to pretend, and more and more brainless. It can be said that it is unfinished.

To be honest, I don't particularly like novels where the golden finger is too big, the bastard spirit is turned on, the tiger body is shaken, and the IQ is at the lower limit, but this is an exception. At first glance, eh, it looks pretty good. At second glance, what kind of sand sculpture is this? The third look., I'll go, it's so ridiculous, I like it😍The large-scale real fragrance scene

Come on, author, I'm still a student now, so I don't have much money, so I can only give you a little reward to support you, thank you very much, come on! O(∩_∩)O🙂👍

A weak question: Does anyone think Liu Qingfeng is like a little kitten? ! ! ! So cute ←_← [Please forgive me for showing my aunty smile]♥♥ I love my wind so much, "Qing" let me "wind" for you @Liu Qingfeng_(>_<) The world calls me "silly and sweet", I laugh at others but they can't see through it, there is no need for the breeze to understand people, wanton and unrestrained but not forgetting the original. The white poplars stand, full of energy and youth. The journey is difficult, the journey is difficult, there are so many wrong roads, even if everything is fate, I will still be young when I come back May my heart be pure and innocent forever May my wind be carefree forever

In the later stage, I felt that the writing was a bit messy. The front part was okay, but I couldn't stand it when I saw the back part.

Updates have been a bit slow lately.

I think the plot of this book is still very interesting, but occasionally there are typos, missing words, and awkward sentences. I hope the author can correct them! Also, come on, author! Support genuine reading!

After Qingfeng ascends, most of the plots no longer have the same feeling as before.

In itself, this is a different style of pretense article. The main line focuses on comedy. The pretense is very nonsensical and looks a bit silly. However, in fact, this type of article has a large potential readership (for example, Xing Ye's drama seems to be very corny and cliché, but it is really very interesting. Don't everyone just want to be relaxed and happy when watching this type of article). But no matter how lighthearted and funny the text is, once the ideas run out, it will start to overwhelm the number of words just to make up the number of words, and it will gradually stop working. (The key point is that the memes and themes will always be used up, and sooner or later it will turn into a water story. This is an irreversible thing.) I feel that the writing has become more and more watery after the ascension. I personally feel that Kuroye-chan is in this state and cannot continue to write. I have a personal opinion to delay this trend, which is to install B in the main line, download dungeons, and have interactive scenes with the female characters to enhance their relationship, as well as daily life game code, and write several lines interspersed. The advantage is that first, different dramas correspond to different audiences. If you only write about one aspect, it will satisfy some people, but it will cause other people to quickly get bored and abandon the book, and it is easy to use up the plot, making the content boring and boring. The second is that by interspersing in this way, readers will not get tired easily, and the author can rely on this method to collect more words and extend the life of the book. When all the threads are finished, it will be finished in time, the number of words is enough, and the readers will be satisfied. As a light-hearted and funny book, you can't just upgrade and download a copy. Flowers also need to be set off by green leaves, especially when interspersed with daily life and emotional scenes with the female characters (the lack of emotional scenes is the biggest flaw of this book. This book is a cool book with pretense). Yes, but it also needs to be different from other Xiaobai Shuang novels. The description of the emotional drama of several female characters such as Ziyun, Old Linglong Holy Lord, and Qian Yunrou can only be described in a single stroke. In fact, if this part is well written, it will not only attract many readers. Or, it can still boast a lot of words (at least it can add dozens of chapters, and it can also earn a lot more royalties), and the key readers are still buying it (after all, it is tiring to watch pretending to be a B, and you will have to change your taste occasionally). However, Heiye is not good at it, and still feels that pretending is not worthy of it. Love scenes, this part was basically not written. Such good material could have made many readers of the party struggle to increase their popularity, but in the end, they gave up. And the biggest highlight of this book is the easy and funny way of pretending. If you really only want to read pretending to be a reader, you can get away from the starting point and find a lot of pretense, and the pretending is better than this book. Dumuqiao is an upgrade compared to the other books. Can this book compare to the fake pretending? What really attracts readers is the daily activities of pretending to be unintentional. Laughing, what advantage does this book have without the daily routine?) So far, this book has purely been written in the direction of upgrading the main line B and looking for opportunities to download dungeons. How is this different from other white articles about upgrading and fighting monsters? Readers read this book because they don't follow the routine at the beginning, and now they are writing it again. It feels like Kuroye-chan has forgotten the essence of this book. Maybe it's because of the new writer's lack of experience. I hope Kuroye-chan will pay more attention to it in the future. It's not a good sign that I've just written more than 500 chapters and am exhausted of writing ideas.

Brother, you are still writing! I'm so touched! Don't be a eunuch anymore, I have to finish writing it with my last breath!

I haven't read a book like this in several years. It's great.

Write well and don't give up. I will always reward you.

I remember him. Qian Yunrou spoke. Start with a daydream. Qian Yunrou said, I can't remember who he is, but I know, I just tried to fall in love with him. They say that some people are not born to be loved. After falling in love, all others who come after them become make do. The Holy Lord told me on the eve of his ascension that if the Linglong chessboard is still there, go play a game of chess. "But wasn't the chessboard broken?" "Then do you still remember the answer to the exquisite chessboard?" She sighed. "Remember." "Then did you let it go?" "Put it down." She shook her head, turned her face slightly sideways, and smiled bitterly, "What did you let go of?" "I don't know." "You don't even know what you let go of, so you said you let it go, what did you let go of?" I remember waiting for her answer. She just said she didn't understand, and then said, I shouldn't let you love him. I still don't understand. "You have always been a good child," she smiled, "You listen to everything I say... If it weren't for me... You would probably be more lively." She was probably unhappy that I was obedient. Qian Yunrou shook her head and said no more. "Why did the saint save me?" "When I saw it, I saved it." She left. "Holy Lord, I just can't remember that person. I didn't disobey you." Holy Lord Linglong shook his head. "I was wrong. Forgetting love does not mean falling in love with someone and then forgetting that person. You forget him, but your love is still there. It was me who was wrong." Her eyes were slightly closed, with a little pain on her face. "The Holy Lord is not wrong." She didn't speak anymore, but hugged Qian Yunrou. Qian Yunrou could feel the tears flowing into her clothes. The Holy Lord is in pain. Qian Yunrou understands this. "Holy Lord, can I hug you?" Qian Yunrou asked her. "From today on, you are the Holy Lord. You don't need to listen to anyone's orders. Just do whatever you want." That day, the Holy Lord went to the fairy world. Probably won't come back. "Holy Master, what's his name." She said, "Lu Changsheng." It seems that there is such a person, but his face is too blurry and I really can't remember it. Who is he? Qian Yunrou walked into the pool and felt that this scene was familiar. She turned around and saw that it was a stone. After a while, she remembered that this was a stone laid down by the Holy Lord. It's just this feeling of familiarity, as if I had done this a long, long time ago. Lu, growth, life. She was chewing on the name. Since you can't forget, then choose not to forget. Mingyue Ancient City, Mingyuefang. For Nagato's affairs, the wedding date was planned but was wrong. Mo Mei was once jealous. Even if I spend thousands of gold to buy a gift, who will complain about my love? Jun Mowu. Don't you see, the jade rings and flying swallows are all dust. Idle sorrow is the most painful. Don't go to Yiwei Building, the setting sun is setting, and the smoke and willows are heartbreaking It turns out that this is... A poem written for myself? A love, a retrograde love, just a retrogressive love. Who is saying that they dare not, and who is missing out step by step. "I thought you couldn't love others." Qian Yunrou felt lost, as if she heard that voice. "Since I have fallen in love with you, then I will forget you." "Junior Sister Yunrou, can forgetting one person mean that you can forget all living beings?" "I don't know, but I want to try." "I wish you health and happiness." "Senior Brother Changsheng, I wish you the same." That's it. Walking around this world, seeing the scenery he has seen, following this road, falling in love with him again. Only for this life, and then find the way to eternal life. END

Let me go, this book is already so popular? I remember that I put this book on my bookshelf when it was about 100,000 words old. At that time, the author's comment section was full of trolls, and there were a lot of people criticizing the author. I also predicted at that time that the author of this book should be at least level 5, but there were a lot of comments below that criticized me. I suddenly opened it today and took a look. I was shocked by the number of fans. My prediction at that time was quite accurate. Now that the author is so popular, there are no trolls below. If the author had not resisted the pressure of those trolls, he would not be here now. Sure enough, trolls are hateful, but the author's psychological quality is also very important. Come on, author ヽ(•̀ω•́ )ゝ

The 100 rewards you mentioned plus one update are already 20,000 points. When will it be cashed out?