Starting with Contracted Pets

I subscribed to support it and stopped reading. It was originally a good book, but after this sudden confession, there was nothing about pets. It was all dog food with the heroine. It's boring. We are not monks and reject the heroine. But don't we read pet novels to see the interaction between pets? It's really boring to give out dog food every day and give pets soy sauce. Full points for the heroine, zero points for the latter.

Little Purple Jade

I really hate that the heroine has so many scenes, it would be nice to write more about pets

Things that have been very embarrassing recently 1 Wei Ya forcibly added scenes, abducting the heroine and forcing the protagonist to do whatever. Although the author did not mean to be a bad person, this kind of plot is disgusting to watch. 2 There are too many emotional scenes, and the recent forced use of rainbow flowers in order to write some plots is really a bit too much, and it cannot make readers feel their deep emotions. Moreover, the author does not seem to be very good at this kind of emotional writing. There is no need to force it. Chongmei can be amazing by just writing about the feelings of pets. There is no need to overload the pet writing with romance. It can drive everywhere if it wants to. 3. The establishment of a righteous character, but the result is that in the plot of Rainbow Flower, people just came to explore resources, but they were all killed. It was strictly stipulated that only one person could go out, and the character design collapsed. Look at Bai Ye next door, who beheaded the girl. The initial character design was unjust, and no matter how many people were killed, it would not be done. But since this character is established, don't collapse. If it collapses, the book will really be over. I have also been a bookworm for more than ten years. I have read too many novels. Although I am young, I still have some understanding of novels. The previous post was made out of disappointment. I hope the author can understand how important a high-quality book is to an old bookworm. I have high expectations for this novel, and the quality will not be bad if it maintains the rhythm of the early stage. However, I feel that if I continue writing like this, I will either be a eunuch or be scolded to death. I sincerely support the author and hope that he can improve in the future and don't let good grass turn into poisonous weed.

Why does it have to be the whole heroine! And there are so many plots, can we not have a female protagonist or have less plots about the female protagonist?

This book gave me the feeling that I just wrote whatever I wanted, without even making a draft. There was no real sense of character level or pet level, because it made no sense at all. I would crush everything I hit. There were really a bunch of people who kept sending pets to the protagonist. When I felt it was almost done, I would jump to a similar level with pets and crush them. In addition, the measurement unit is extremely outrageous. On a 600-meter-wide road, would you consider crossing a red street light? The dragon that is more than 100 kilometers away is directly released on the earth. It is only more than 100 kilometers from Panjin in Liaoning to Shenyang. Most of the conflicts are very childish. Basically, the protagonist is shopping, and a group of people jump out: hand over xx, and then die; the protagonist is treasure hunting, and a group of people jump out: hand over xx, and then die; the protagonist goes to save people, and a group of people jump out. Jumped out: It's you, God help me, I just happened to take you down together, and then I was stunned. What's more outrageous is that the information of these second-rate goods is not updated. Many of the people who jumped out are big families and large underground organizations, and the protagonist has been killed for countless times. He didn't even re-evaluate the target after the failure of the most basic mission, so he just used the data from eight hundred years ago to attack.

Let's open a supporting building. Ask for the names of various monsters and give a rough description of their appearance. It doesn't matter if you don't have any. A supporting character is also required, the ending is not guaranteed, character name + pet

If you surpass this master in a few days and it is not helpful to the protagonist, I will turn on the troll mode and spend some money to hire keyboard warriors to attack you 😊

Wow, who wrote this book? It's so good. Everyone, please invest and vote for recommendations. ()

After dozens of chapters, the characters were changed starting from chapter 160. It was too toxic. The plot was too far-fetched and too blunt. I skipped a few chapters and came back again. I almost gave up.